Monotype Orbeetle [Psychic] [QC 2/2] [GP 1/1]

[Harpp]

[SET]
name: Support [Psychic]
move 1: Reflect
move 2: Light Screen
move 3: Sticky Web
move 4: U-turn
item: Light Clay
ability: Frisk
nature: Timid
evs: 252 HP / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to a decent movepool, Orbeetle performs a utility role for Psychic teams, providing support through dual screens and Sticky Web. Dual screens support is great for Psychic teams, as it not only makes Orbeetle's teammates harder to revenge kill but also aids setup sweepers in setting up much more efficiently. Sticky Web, on the other hand, slows down faster threats like Choice Scarf Weavile and Gengar, allowing teammates like Choice Scarf Gardevoir and Jirachi to deal with such threats much more easily and to threaten opposing teams better. Orbeetle should be used early-game so that it can provide essential support to the team to have momentum going; however, when faced against teams with Magic Bounce users like Hatterene and Xatu, it's best not to set up Sticky Web recklessly, as it can backfire. U-turn should be used to switch into an appropriate teammate after Orbeetle has set screens or Sticky Web. Frisk allows Orbeetle to scout for items on the opposing teams. Maximum HP and Speed EVs with a Timid nature make Orbeetle as fast as possible to outspeed Pokemon like Rotom-H and Mamoswine while surviving as many hits as possible doing so. Light Clay increases the number of turns Reflect and Light Screen stay on the field.

All of Orbeetle's teammates appreciate it providing dual screens and Sticky Web support. Setup Pokemon like Calm Mind Hatterene, Nasty Plot Mew, Necrozma, and Reuniclus appreciate Orbeetle's support to set up more easily. Stallbreaker Mew can help prevent Pokemon like Corviknight and Pelipper from removing Sticky Web and dual screens. Other offensive Pokemon like Choice Scarf Jirachi and Gardevoir can outspeed faster Pokemon like Choice Scarf Dragapult and Gengar with Sticky Web support. A wallbreaker like Indeedee benefits from the support provided by Orbeetle, granting it more chances to wreck havoc on the opposing team. Celebi can also be used for Stealth Rock and Healing Wish support, and it can also take on Water- and Ground-type Pokemon like Seismitoad and Excadrill for the team.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Harpp, 320110]]
- Psychic analysis by: [[Harpp, 320110]]
- Quality checked by: [[Havens, 391540], [Maroon, 305839]]
- Grammar checked by: [[The Dutch Plumberjack, 232216]]

 

[Harpp]

Ready for QC.

 

[Havens]

-Specify it as "Dual Screens", not "Dual Screen"
-Stallbreaker Mew would seem a better teammate here than Setup Mew, Mainly to have the Taunt/Knock Off combination prevent defensive defoggers like Corv and Pelipper from removing Webs/Screens.
-Add Celebi.

QC 1/2

 

[Harpp]

Implemented QC 1, ready for QC 2.

 

[maroon]

- the term is revenge killed not revenge ohkod
- mention the pokemon that can now beat scarf gar/weav after webs like scarf gard or scarf rachi
- mention what light clay does for reflect/light screen
- would mention mews np sets as good partners for this set
- gallade is bad this gen remove it from examples

QC 2/2

 

[Harpp]

Implemented QC 2. Ready for GP now.

 

[Milak]

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[SET]
name: Support [Psychic]
move 1: Reflect
move 2: Light Screen
move 3: Sticky Web
move 4: U-turn
item: Light Clay
ability: Frisk
nature: Timid
evs: 252 HP / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to a decent movepool, Orbeetle performs a utility role for Psychic-type Psychic teams,(AC) providing support through dual screens and Sticky Web. Dual screens support in Reflect and Light Screen is great for Psychic-type Psychic teams,(AC) as it not only halves the damage received for its teammates ,(AC) making them Orbeetle's teammates harder to get revenge killed,(AC) but it also aids setup users sweepers in setting up much more efficiently. Sticky web,(AC) on the other hand,(AC) slows down faster threats like Choice Scarf Weavile and Gengar, allowing teammates like Choice Scarf Gardevoir and Jirachi to deal with such threats much easier more easily and to threaten opposing teams more (I think an adverb's missing here, if it's not, then it might be worth adding one). Orbeetle should be used early on during the battle early-game so that it can provide essential support to the team to have momentum going;(ASC) however,(AC) when faced against teams with Magic Bounce user users like Hatterene and Xatu, its it's best not to set up Sticky Web recklessly,(AC) as it can backfire. U-turn should be used to switch into an appropriate teammate after Orbeetle has set screens or Sticky Web. Frisk allows Orbeetle to scout for items on the opposing teams. Maximum HP and Speed EVs with a Timid nature makes Orbeelte make Orbeetle as fast as possible to outspeed Pokemon like Rotom-H and Mamoswine and while surviving as many hits as possible while doing so. Light Clay increases the number of turns Reflect and Light Screen stay on the field.

All of Orbeetle's teammates appreciate it providing dual screens and Sticky Web support. Setup Pokemon like Calm Mind Hatterene, Nasty Plot Mew, Necrozma, and Reuniclus appreciate Orbeetle's support to setup easier set up more easily. Stall breaker Stallbreaker Mew can help prevent Pokemon like Corviknight and Pelipper from removing Sticky Web and dual screens support. Other offensive Pokemon like Choice Scarf Jirachi and Gardevoir can outspeed faster Pokemon like Choice Scarf Dragapult and Gengar with Sticky Web support. Wallbreaker A wallbreaker like Indeedee benefits as benefits from the support provided by Orbeetle grants ,(AC) granting it more chances to wreck havoc on the opposing team. Celebi can also be used for Stealth Rock and Healing Wish support,(AC) and it can also take on Water-,(RC) and Ground-type Pokemon like Seismitoad and Excadrill for the team.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Harpp, 320110]]
- Psychic analysis by: [[Harpp, 320110]]
- Quality checked by: [[Havens, 391540], [Maroon, 305839]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

 

[Lumari]

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GP 1/1

Amcheck

[SET]
name: Support [Psychic]
move 1: Reflect
move 2: Light Screen
move 3: Sticky Web
move 4: U-turn
item: Light Clay
ability: Frisk
nature: Timid
evs: 252 HP / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]
Thanks to a decent movepool, Orbeetle performs a utility role for Psychic-type Psychic teams,(AC) providing support through dual screens and Sticky Web. Dual screens support in Reflect and Light Screen is great for Psychic-type Psychic teams,(AC) as it not only halves the damage received for its teammates ,(AC) making makes them Orbeetle's teammates harder to get revenge killed,(AC) but it also aids setup users sweepers in setting up much more efficiently. Sticky Web,(AC) on the other hand,(AC) slows down faster threats like Choice Scarf Weavile and Gengar, allowing teammates like Choice Scarf Gardevoir and Jirachi to deal with such threats much easier more easily and to threaten opposing teams more (I think an adverb's missing here, if it's not, then it might be worth adding one). Orbeetle should be used early on during the battle early-game so that it can provide essential support to the team to have momentum going;(ASC) however,(AC) when faced against teams with Magic Bounce user users like Hatterene and Xatu, its it's best not to set up Sticky Web recklessly,(AC) as it can backfire. U-turn should be used to switch into an appropriate teammate after Orbeetle has set screens or Sticky Web. Frisk allows Orbeetle to scout for items on the opposing teams. Maximum HP and Speed EVs with a Timid nature makes Orbeelte make Orbeetle as fast as possible to outspeed Pokemon like Rotom-H and Mamoswine and while surviving as many hits as possible while doing so. Light Clay increases the number of turns Reflect and Light Screen stay on the field.

All of Orbeetle's teammates appreciate it providing dual screens and Sticky Web support. Setup Pokemon like Calm Mind Hatterene, Nasty Plot Mew, Necrozma, and Reuniclus appreciate Orbeetle's support to setup easier set up more easily. Stall breaker Stallbreaker Mew can help prevent Pokemon like Corviknight and Pelipper from removing Sticky Web and dual screens support. Other offensive Pokemon like Choice Scarf Jirachi and Gardevoir can outspeed faster Pokemon like Choice Scarf Dragapult and Gengar with Sticky Web support. Wallbreaker A wallbreaker like Indeedee benefits as benefits from the support provided by Orbeetle grants ,(AC) granting it more chances to wreck havoc on the opposing team. Celebi can also be used for Stealth Rock and Healing Wish support,(AC) and it can also take on Water-,(RC) and Ground-type Pokemon like Seismitoad and Excadrill for the team.

[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[Harpp, 320110]]
- Psychic analysis by: [[Harpp, 320110]]
- Quality checked by: [[Havens, 391540], [Maroon, 305839]]
- Grammar checked by: [[<username1>, <userid1>]]

 

[Harpp]

Implemented GP check, this is now done, thank you.

 

[Havens]

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