Raichu (Update)

I kind of like the idea of slashing Focus Blast in front of Encore. I don't think I'd ever use this set with NP / TBolt / FBlast / Encore because that means your only "reliable" attack is Thunderbolt, not to mention it leaves you helpless against the #1 Pokemon in the tier (+2 LO HP Ice vs 0/0 Venusaur: 103% - 121.6%). I think only used Encore once in all of my testing games, against a cleric DD Altaria of all things. Focus Blast provides much more utility since it helps Raichu sweep which should be the primary goal. Encore is kinda useful, but it's hard to Encore walls without getting owned by status first; sacrificing Raichu to set up something else is cool if you have no other options, but shouldn't be something you're aiming to do going into a match.

+2 LO Focus Blast
vs 252/156+ Registeel: 83.5% - 98.4%
vs 252/252+ Clefable: 103.6% - 121.8%
vs 0/252+ Chansey: 57.4% - 67.7%

I think you should emphasize that Raichu is pretty frail (60/55/80) so you shouldn't switch directly into stuff like Milotic or whatever.

so the moves, IMO:
- Nasty Plot
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power Ice
- Focus Blast / Encore
 
I kind of like the idea of slashing Focus Blast in front of Encore. I don't think I'd ever use this set with NP / TBolt / FBlast / Encore because that means your only "reliable" attack is Thunderbolt, not to mention it leaves you helpless against the #1 Pokemon in the tier (+2 LO HP Ice vs 0/0 Venusaur: 103% - 121.6%). I think only used Encore once in all of my testing games, against a cleric DD Altaria of all things. Focus Blast provides much more utility since it helps Raichu sweep which should be the primary goal. Encore is kinda useful, but it's hard to Encore walls without getting owned by status first; sacrificing Raichu to set up something else is cool if you have no other options, but shouldn't be something you're aiming to do going into a match.

+2 LO Focus Blast
vs 252/156+ Registeel: 83.5% - 98.4%
vs 252/252+ Clefable: 103.6% - 121.8%
vs 0/252+ Chansey: 57.4% - 67.7%

I think you should emphasize that Raichu is pretty frail (60/55/80) so you shouldn't switch directly into stuff like Milotic or whatever.

so the moves, IMO:
- Nasty Plot
- Thunderbolt
- Hidden Power Ice
- Focus Blast / Encore

My main problem is that Raichu, without a Nasty Plot, is just a shitty frail weak electric-type Pokemon. Encore literally gives me a turn to set up Nasty Plot three-quarters of the time. Without it, I don't think I'd set up as often as I'd need to have this be considered a viable set. Coming in on Milotic's/Chansey's/whatever's Recovery move or Stealth rock is the best way to set up. Not to mention it lets it destroy other set up users.

I do agree that HP Ice should not even be slashed with Focus Blast.
 
Alright! 3 stamps + mean's I can get started on the actual analysis. WOOT!
Thanks for digging information for Raichu you guys.

Now onto the above discussion:
On paper, Focus Blast is a superior choice in almost all fronts (you would have to deal with grass types some other way) but it's accuracy is awful. It also forces you to use Focus Blast against bulky ground types.

I've got to agree with Heysup, without encore setting up a nasty plot is just to hard, and it's useful move outside of setting up too. Still, an all out sweeper set isn't awful, and it's a handy tool against stall team's. Maybe I can mention it in additional comments or keep the slash?


Edit: Rough outline of the actually analysis. I figured I should post it If going on the right track.

Edit 2: To true.
 
At the above post, there's still plenty of things to Encore on Stall. Uxie's Stealth Rock, Spiritomb's Sucker Punch, Hitmontop's Foresight. There's probably more, but UU Stall is seen less than not.
 
Just looking at the analysis as whole and not delving into the detail yet, I see a few problems. Firstly, the damage calculations should be in the format:

<ul class=”damage_calculation”>
<li>(insert your damage 1 here</li>
<li>(" " damage 2 here)</li>
</ul>

I'm not a GP checker, but I'll give it a go at spelling/grammar checking:

Blue = Insertions/Changes, Red = Deletions, Bold = Comments

[Overview]

<p>It's great Speed along with its (When "its" used when it is possessing something, the apostrophe is left out) decent offensive stats and good movepool allow to act as serviceable sweeper. Its unique access to Encore and Nasty Plot ("P" in "Plot should be capitalised) gives it an easier time at setting up a boost and it helps differentiate itself from the likes of Nasty Plot Mismagius and Nasty Plot Toxicroak. Unfortunately, its frailty and lack of useful resistances means that it will rarely get a chance of switch in. With that said, if a quick Encore user who can also pose as a powerful offensive threat is needed, then Raichu is a great choice. (Try avoiding "you" as much possible, it sounds a bit too colloquial)</p>

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Attacker
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Thunderbolt
move 3: Hidden Power Ice
move 4: Encore / Focus Blast
item: Life Orb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Respectable Speed and decent Special Attack allow Raichu (Insert noun here) to serve as an Nasty Plot user. Nasty Plot boosts Raichu's modest Special Attack to incredible levels, giving Raichu an ideal opportunity of sweeping. Thunderbolt is Raichu's STAB move of choice and it allows Raichu to OHKO Milotic and Slowking after a Nasty Plot boost. Hidden Power Ice provides Raichu with some much needed coverage, allowing Raichu to hit ground and grass types for super effective damage. Encore gives Raichu a much better chance at (Reworded here, sounded a bit iffy before) setting up a Nasty plot. Encore is the best option in general, for it makes attaining a Nasty Plot boost easier, but Focus Blast may be used to get past dedicated special walls and it gives Raichu incredibly good coverage. </p>

(Use given format for damage calcs here)

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Although Nasty Plot Raichu is incredibly powerful, it still runs into trouble depending on the moves used (Rephrased). Chansey is a good counter to Raichu, as even though it risks being 2HKO'd by a Nasty Plot boosted Focus Blast, it can utterly cripple Raichu with a Thunder Wave or Toxic. Raichu also has difficulty getting past Registeel without Focus Blast. Dugtrio is capable of removing the aforementioned threats with ease, giving Raichu an easier time at sweeping. Ironically, Dugtrio is also an excellent check to Raichu, as it can switch into 3 out of 4 of Raichu's moves with relative ease and OHKO with Earthquake. Mixed Houndoom (Newbies following this may not know what "MixDoom" is) serves as an excellent lure to Dugtrio and it is capable of killing it with Sucker Punch. Raichu will be hard pressed to switch into anything with its subpar defenses, so one must only switch into non-attacking move that can't really hurt Raichu. For example, switching into a Donphan who is going to use Stealth Rock or a Toxicroak attempting to use Swords Dance or Sucker Punch, and even Chansey using Wish are all ways you can set up Nasty Plot. After you've Encored your foe into uselessly repeating a move that can't hurt Raichu, set up Nasty Plot on the switch or simply attack with Thunderbolt or Hidden Power Ice to scout ahead. It isn't recommended to directly switch into bulky waters because Raichu still takes a decent amount of damage from their attacks due to it's frailty.</p>

[Team options]

<p>Raichu appreciates Stealth Rocks and Spikes support to turn some key 2HKO's into OHKO's. Claydol can use Stealth Rocks and has the added bonus of being immune to ground type moves. Omastar is effective at laying down both Stealth Rocks and spikes and can even opt for Toxic spikes which gives Raichu an easier time at beating Chansey. (Removed all the line starts)</p>

<p>Dugtrio is effective at removing both Chansey and Registeel who can hamper Raichu's sweeping effort. Rhyperior and Torterra act as nice alternatives and while they cannot trap Registeel and Chansey, they can use the aforementioned pokemon as a setup fodder. Strong fighting types like Hariyama and Hitmonlee are easily capable of switching into Chansey and threatening it with their powerful STAB moves. Venusaur can be used to counter Lanturn and Quagsire, who otherwise completely wall Raichu.

<p>Dugtrio itself is a great check to Raichu, and it is impossible to outright counter Dugtrio due to its ability, Arena Trap. Mixed Houndoom is an effective partner, because it can lure out Dugtrio and OHKO with Sucker Punch. One must be wary that Dugtrio may carry Subsitute to dodge Sucker Punch and take out Houndoom. Running a Rock Polish Torterra is a good idea here alongside Raichu because if Dugtrio manages to take out Raichu, you can give your Torterra some much needed can use the time to set up and possibly sweep the opposing team. </p>

[OPTIONAL CHANGES]

<p>Raichu can use a more physically oriented moveset with Substitute, Focus Punch and Volt Tackle to get past Chansey. Unfortunately, Raichu is easily walled by bulky grass and ground types and it is somewhat inferior to Hariyama, who can create powerful 101 substitutes and deal significantly more damage. A specialized support set can be used with Encore and Wish, but typically Raichu is outdone by Clefable in those regards who boasts superior defenses.</p>

[COUNTERS]

<p>Chansey as an excellent counter to Raichu due to it's phenomonal Special walling ability. Chansey can cripple Raichu with Thunder Wave or Toxic or simply wear it down with Seismic Toss. It needs to be wary of a Nasty Plot boosted Focus Blast which can 2HKO. Lanturn and Quagsire wall Raichu's entire moveset and it can cripple it with Thunder Wave and Earthquake respectively. Registeel and Steelix can serve as an excellent counter provided that Raichu lacks Focus Blast. Priority is also a good idea at taking out Raichu. It's fraility means that strong priority users like Hitmontop and Azumarill can cripple Raichu. Dugtrio is a top notch check to Raichu, trapping it with it's ability Arena Trap and OHKOing with Earthquake.</p>
 
Woops, I just realised I made a mistake in the first line, lol. It should be:

Raichu's great Speed along with its (When "its" used when it is possessing something, the apostrophe is left out) decent offensive stats and good movepool allow to act as serviceable sweeper.
 
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[Overview]

<p>Raichu's great Speed along with his its decent offensive stats and good movepool allow him to act as a serviceable sweeper. His It's unique access to Encore and Nasty Plot give gives him it an easier time at setting up and Raichu it helps differentiate itself from the likes of Nasty Plot Mismagius and Nasty Plot plot Toxicroak. Unfortunately, its frailty and lack of useful resistances resists mean mean's that it will rarely get a chance to switch-in. of switch in. With that said, if a quick Encore user who can also pose as a powerful offensive threat is needed, then Raichu is a great choice .</p>
[Delete the space in between "choice" and that last period]

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot Attacker
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Thunderbolt
move 3: Hidden Power Ice
move 4: Encore / Focus Blast
item: Life Orb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Respectable Speed and decent Special Attack allow Raichu to serve as an excellent Nasty Plot user. Nasty Plot boosts Raichu's modest Special Attack to incredible levels, giving him Raichu an ideal opportunity to sweep. of sweeping. Thunderbolt is Raichu's STAB move of choice and it allows him Raichu to OHKO Milotic and Slowking after a Nasty Plot boost. Hidden Power Ice provides Raichu with some much needed coverage, allowing Raichu to hit Ground- and Grass-types ground and grass types for super effective damage. Encore gives Raichu a much better chance time at setting up a Nasty Plot. Encore is the best option in general, as for it makes attaining a Nasty Plot plot boost easier, but Focus Blast may be used to get past dedicated special walls and it gives Raichu good coverage. </p> [Make sure to delete all spaces between your final periods and the </p> marks]

<ul class=LO 2+ Focus Blast Damage Calculations >
<li>vs 252/156+ Registeel: 83.5% - 98.4%</li>
<li>vs 252/252+ Clefable: 103.6% - 121.8%</li>
<li>vs 0/252+ Chansey: 57.4% - 67.7%</li>
</ul>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>Although Nasty Plot Raichu is incredibly powerful, he it still runs into trouble depending on the moves that are used. Chansey is a good counter to Raichu, as even though it risks being 2HKO'd by a Nasty Plot boosted Focus Blast, she it can utterly cripple Raichu with a Thunder Wave or Toxic. Raichu also has difficulty getting past Registeel without Focus Blast. Dugtrio is capable of removing the aforementioned threats with ease, giving Raichu an easier time at sweeping. Ironically, Dugtrio is also an excellent check to Raichu, as he it can switch into 3 out of 4 of Raichu's moves with relative ease and OHKO with Earthquake. Mixed Houndoom serves as an excellent lure to Dugtrio and he it is capable of killing it with Sucker Punch.</p>

<p>Raichu will be hard pressed to switch into anything with his its sub-par subpar defenses, so one must only switch into a non-attacking move that can't really hurt Raichu. For example, switching into a Donphan who is going to use Stealth Rock or a Toxicroak attempting to Swords Dance or Sucker Punch, or and even Chansey who is using Wish are all ways you can set up setup a Nasty Plot. After you've Encored your foe into uselessly repeating a move that can't hurt Raichu, set up a Nasty Plot on the switch or simply attack with Thunderbolt or Hidden Power Ice to scout [Remove this space] . It isn't recommended to directly switch into bulky Water-types waters because Raichu still takes a decent amount of damage from their attacks due to his it's frailty.</p>

[Team options]

<p>Raichu appreciates Stealth Rock Rocks and Spikes support to turn some key 2HKO's into OHKO's. [Delete these spaces] Claydol can use Stealth Rock Rocks and has the added bonus of being immune to Ground-type ground type moves. Omastar is effective at laying down both Stealth Rock Rocks and Spikes. spikes and Omastar can even opt for Toxic Spikes, spikes which gives Raichu an easier time at beating Chansey.</p>

<p>Dugtrio is effective at removing both Chansey and Registeel, who can hamper Raichu's sweep sweeping effort. Rhyperior and Torterra act as nice alternatives and while they cannot trap Registeel and Chansey, they can use the aforementioned pokemon as a setup fodder. Strong Fighting-types fighting types like Hariyama and Hitmonlee are easily capable of switching into Chansey and threatening her threatning it with their powerful STAB stabbed moves. Venusaur can be used to counter Lanturn and Quagsire, who otherwise completely wall Raichu.</p>

<p>Dugtrio itself is a great check to Raichu, and it is impossible to outright counter Dugtrio due to his its ability, Arena Trap. Mixed Houndoom is an effective partner, because he it can lure out Dugtrio and OHKO with Sucker Punch. One must be wary that Dugtrio may carry Subsitute to dodge Sucker Punch and take out Houndoom. Running a Rock Polish Torterra is a good alongside Raichu because if Dugtrio manages to take out Raichu, Torterra can use the time to setup and possibly sweep the opposing team.</p>

[OPTIONAL CHANGES]

<p>Raichu can use a more physically oriented moveset with Substitute, Focus Punch, and Volt Tackle to get past Chansey. Unfortunately, Raichu is easily walled by bulky Grass- and Ground-types grass and ground types and it is somewhat inferior to Hariyama, who can create powerful 101 substitutes and deal significantly more damage. A specialized support set can be used with Encore and Wish, but typically Raichu is outdone by Clefable in those regards who boasts superior defenses.</p>

[COUNTERS]

<p>Chansey as an excellent counter to Raichu due to her it's phenomenal special Special walling ability. Chansey can cripple Raichu with Thunder Wave or Toxic or simply wear it down with Seismic Toss. She It needs to be wary of a Nasty Plot plot boosted Focus Blast, however, which will can 2HKO. Lanturn and Quagsire wall Raichu's entire moveset and they it can cripple him it with Thunder Wave or and Earthquake respectively. Registeel and Steelix can serve as an excellent counters counter provided provived that Raichu lacks Focus Blast. Priority moves are is also a good idea for at taking out Raichu. It's frailty fraility means mean's that strong priority users like Hitmontop and Azumarill can effortlessly take out cripple Raichu. Dugtrio is a top notch check to Raichu, trapping him it with his it's ability Arena Trap and OHKOing with Earthquake.</p>

A couple of things:

-With the new gender rule, most Pokemon are reffered to as him, he, his, etc. The only exceptions are genderless Pokemon (it), all female Pokemon (her, she, hers), and Pokemon that look exceptionally female. In this case, Raichu would be a male, so look through and try to find any other examples where you referred to him as "it" and try to fix those.
-The end of a paragraph should look like this.</p>
Not this. </p>
Try and fix those.

Other than that, great job!
 
A few things:

You describe Raichu's speed as "great" in the overview, then as "respectable" in the analysis. This is kind of inconsistent, so one of these words should be changed. I think "great" might be a little overboard, so I'd say change that one, since we want our overviews to be very frank about the abilities of pokemon, lest positive overviews become meaningless. I know you already use the word "good" in that sentence, so maybe "nice" or "high" would work. Otherwise, the speed might be "good" and the movepool "great". I know it seems like a nitpick, but these things are important because these analyses are mainly for new readers who don't necessarily know where base 100 sits in UU. You might want to take a look at where you use the word "incredibly" as well.

You refer to Stealth Rock as "Stealth Rocks" in the Team Options section. I know the battle dialog refers to "pointed stones" but analyses should always use the name of a move, rather than a description of the actions it represents.

Edit: I notice you cover Dugtrio more thoroughly and accurately in the Team Options. Because of that, it might be better to forgo mention of Houndoom until there, rather than what I said in the following paragraph.

When you discuss Dugtrio in the additional comments, I would consider talking about more than just Houndoom. First of all, putting Raichu and Houndoom on the same team, while not untenable, is difficult to pull off since they both share similar (and many) weaknesses. Second, while Houndoom certainly deserves mention as a Dugtrio lure, it has started to become standard and thus predictable. Because of this, you should either mention something else or at least qualify that many players know Houndoom can beat Dugtrio. I don't think this is your position, but the way you give one sentence to the issue and then move on makes it seem like Houndoom is the end-all be-all destroyer of Dugtrio. Also, the MixDoom is not the only set that can beat Duggy with SP. I think a good rewrite of that section might be, "Ironically Dugtrio is also an excellent check to Raichu, as it can switch into 3 out of 4 of Raichu's moves with relative ease and OHKO with Earthquake. Houndoom with Sucker Punch can lure and kill Dugtrio, as can Ground-weak pokemon that utilize Substitute. Good Dugtrio users might not fall into these traps, however, so any player using Raichu should look for signs that the opponent might have Dugtrio, such as the presence of Scyther or Swellow, and play cautiously."

Also in the other options, I think that you might add that Substitute allows Raichu to survive much longer and thus use Encore more often. To me, Sub-Encore is the main reason to use that set, with Volt Tackle and Focus Punch simply being Raichu's strongest attacks to use when holding Leftovers.
 
Thanks for the GP check Dr. Reid, I really appreciate it.
I appreciate the comments, Scoopapa and I added most of your changes them to the set.

Hey Scoopapa, does this look good?

"Raichu can move set consisting of Substitute, Encore, Focus Punch and Volt Tackle with Leftovers to get around his usual counters. Unfortunately, Raichu is easily walled by bulky Grass- and Ground-types."


PS: Can I keep incredibly? It's one of my favorite word. (I only used it once)
 
Thanks for the GP check Dr. Reid, I really appreciate it.
I appreciate the comments, Scoopapa and I added most of your changes them to the set.

Hey Scoopapa, does this look good?

"Raichu can move set consisting of Substitute, Encore, Focus Punch and Volt Tackle with Leftovers to get around his usual counters. Unfortunately, Raichu is easily walled by bulky Grass- and Ground-types."


PS: Can I keep incredibly? It's one of my favorite word. (I only used it once)

That looks good, just fixing grammar and adding examples:

"Raichu can use a move set consisting of Substitute, Encore, Focus Punch and Volt Tackle with Leftovers to get around his usual counters, such as Clefable and Chansey. Unfortunately, Raichu is easily walled by bulky Grass- and Ground-types."

And lol yeah incredibly is probably fine. I was comparing it to Houndoom earlier but I do remember I was surprised by it's power when I tried it.
 
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[Overview]

<p>Raichu's respectable Speed along with his decent offensive stats and good movepool make him a dangerous sweeper. Access to both Encore and Nasty Plot differentiates Raichu from the likes of Nasty Plot Mismagius and Nasty Plot Toxicroak. Unfortunately, his frailty and lack of useful resistances mean it is relatively hard to switch Raichu into battle. With that said, if a quick Encore user who also poses a powerful offensive threat is needed, then Raichu is a great choice.</p>

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Thunderbolt
move 3: Hidden Power Ice
move 4: Encore / Focus Blast
item: Life Orb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Nasty Plot boosts Raichu's modest Special Attack to incredible levels, giving him an opportunity to sweep. Thunderbolt is Raichu's STAB move of choice and OHKOes Milotic and Slowking after a Nasty Plot boost. Hidden Power Ice provides pseudo-BoltBeam coverage and allows Raichu to hit Ground- and Grass-types for super effective damage. Encore gives Raichu a much better chance at setting up a Nasty Plot, but Focus Blast can be used to get past certain defensive Pokemon, including Registeel, Clefable, and Steelix.</p>

[moved damage calcs to AC]

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

While Thunderbolt and Hidden Power Ice provide nearly perfect neutral coverage (only resisted by Lanturn and Shedinja in UU), sometimes that isn’t enough for a sweep. Focus Blast can help Raichu break through teams since it scores super effective hits on a number of key targets, as shown in the following damage calculations:

<ul class=LO 2+ Focus Blast Damage Calculations >
<li>vs 252/156+ Registeel: 83.5% - 98.4%</li>
<li>vs 252/252+ Clefable: 103.6% - 121.8%</li>
<li>vs 0/252+ Chansey: 57.4% - 67.7%</li>
<li>vs 252/252+ Steelix: 140.7% - 165.5%</li>
</ul>

[added Steelix calc since he takes +2 LO HP Ice easily: 40.7% - 48%]

<p>Although Nasty Plot Raichu is incredibly powerful, he still has trouble with some Pokemon depending on which moves he carries. Chansey is a good counter to Raichu, as she can cripple Raichu with Thunder Wave or Toxic; however, if Raichu carries Focus Blast, he can 2HKO Chansey. Raichu also has difficulty getting past Registeel without Focus Blast. Dugtrio is capable of removing the aforementioned threats with ease, giving non-Focus Blast Raichu an easier time at sweeping. Ironically, Dugtrio is also an excellent check to Raichu, as it can switch into 3 out of 4 of Raichu's moves with relative ease and OHKO with Earthquake. Houndoom with Sucker Punch can lure and kill Dugtrio, as can Ground-weak pokemon who utilize Substitute. Good Dugtrio users might not fall into these traps, however, so any player using Raichu should be wary of signs that the opponent might have Dugtrio, such as the presence of Scyther or Swellow.</p>

<p>Raichu will be hard pressed to switch into any attack with his subpar defenses. Instead, switching into predicted non-damaging moves and using Encore is a more reliable method to set up Raichu. For example, Donphan using Stealth Rock, Toxicroak using Swords Dance or Sucker Punch, or even Chansey using Wish are all opportunities Raichu can use to set up a Nasty Plot. After Raichu has Encored his foe into uselessly repeating a move, he can set up a Nasty Plot on the switch or simply attack with Thunderbolt or Hidden Power Ice to scout. It isn't recommended to switch Raichu directly into bulky Water-types since Surf will 2HKO him.</p>

[Team Options]

<p>Raichu appreciates Stealth Rock and Spikes support to turn some key 2HKOs into OHKOs [you need to say which ones lol]. Claydol can use Stealth Rock and is also immune to Ground-type moves. Omastar is effective at laying down Stealth Rock, Spikes, and even Toxic Spikes (which give Raichu an easier time at beating Chansey).</p>

<p>Dugtrio is effective at removing both Chansey and Registeel. While Rhyperior and Torterra cannot trap Registeel and Chansey, they can use the two as setup fodder. Strong Fighting-types like Hariyama and Hitmonlee are capable of easily switching into Chansey and threatening her with their powerful STAB moves. Venusaur can be used to counter Lanturn and Quagsire, who otherwise completely wall Raichu.</p>

<p>Dugtrio is a great check to Raichu, and it is impossible to outright counter Dugtrio due to his ability, Arena Trap. Mixed Houndoom is an effective partner because he can lure and OHKO Dugtrio with Sucker Punch. However, some Dugtrio carry Substitute, which renders Sucker Punch ineffective. Rock Polish Torterra is a good partner because he can set up on Dugtrio if Dugtrio manages to revenge kill Raichu.</p>

[Optional Changes]

<p>Raichu can use a moveset consisting of Substitute, Encore, Focus Punch, and Volt Tackle with Leftovers to get around his usual counters, such as Clefable and Chansey. Unfortunately, that set is easily walled by bulky Grass- and Ground-types. A specialized support set can be used with Encore and Wish, but Clefable is usually a better choice with her superior defenses.</p>

[Counters]

<p>Chansey is as an excellent counter to Raichu due to her phenomenal special walling ability.
Chansey can cripple Raichu with Thunder Wave or Toxic or simply wear him down with Seismic Toss. She needs to be wary of a Nasty Plot-boosted Focus Blast, however, which will 2HKO. Lanturn and Quagsire are immune to Thunderbolt and can easily survive Hidden Power Ice and Focus Blast while crippling him with Thunder Wave and Earthquake, respectively. Registeel and Steelix are excellent counters to Raichu without Focus Blast. Priority moves from Pokemon like Hitmontop and Arcanine take out Raichu easily due to his frailty. Finally, Dugtrio is a top notch check to Raichu, since he is able to trap Raichu and OHKO with Earthquake.</p>


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[Overview]

<p>Raichu's respectable Speed along with his decent offensive stats and good movepool make him to a dangerous sweeper. Access to both Encore and Nasty Plot differentiates Raichu from the likes of other specially oriented sweepers like Nasty Plot Mismagius and Nasty Plot Toxicroak. Unfortunately, his frailty and lack of useful resistances mean that it is relatively hard to switch Raichu into battle. With that said, if a quick Encore user who also poses as a powerful offensive threat is needed, then Raichu is a great choice.</p>

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Thunderbolt
move 3: Hidden Power Ice
move 4: Encore / Focus Blast
item: Life Orb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Nasty Plot boosts Raichu's modest Special Attack to incredible levels, giving him an opportunity to sweep. Thunderbolt is Raichu's STAB move of choice and OHKOes Milotic and Slowking after a Nasty Plot boost. Hidden Power Ice provides pseudo-BoltBeam coverage and allows Raichu to hit Ground- and Grass-types for super effective damage. Encore gives Raichu a much better chance at setting up a Nasty Plot, but Focus Blast may be used to get past certain defensive Pokemon, including Registeel, Clefable, and Steelix</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

While Thunderbolt and Hidden Power Ice provide nearly perfect neutral coverage (only resisted by Lanturn and Shedinja in UU), sometimes that isn’t enough for a sweep. Focus Blast can help Raichu break through teams since it scores super effective hits on a number of key targets, as shown in the following damage calculations:

<ul class=LO 2+ Focus Blast Damage Calculations >
<li>vs 252/156+ Registeel: 83.5% - 98.4%</li>
<li>vs 252/252+ Clefable: 103.6% - 121.8%</li>
<li>vs 0/252+ Chansey: 57.4% - 67.7%</li>
<li>vs 252/252+ Steelix: 140.7% - 165.5%</li>
</ul>


<p>Although Nasty Plot Raichu is incredibly powerful, he still has trouble with some pokemon depending on which moves he carries. Chansey is a good counter to Raichu, as she can cripple Raichu with Thunder Wave or Toxic; however, if Raichu carries Focus Blast, he can 2HKO Chansey. Raichu also has difficulty getting past Registeel without Focus Blast. Dugtrio is capable of removing the aforementioned threats with ease, giving non-Focus Blast Raichu an easier time at sweeping. Ironically, Dugtrio is also an excellent check to Raichu, as it he can switch into 3 out of 4 of Raichu's moves with relative ease and OHKO with Earthquake. Houndoom with Sucker Punch can lure and kill Dugtrio, as can Ground-weak pokemon who utilize Substitute. Good Dugtrio users might not fall into these traps, however, so any player using Raichu should be wary of signs that the opponent might have Dugtrio, such as the presence of Scyther or Swellow.</p>

<p>Raichu will be hard pressed to switch into any attack with his subpar defenses. Instead, switching into predicted non-damaging moves and using Encore is a more reliable method to set up Raichu. For example, Donphan using Stealth Rock, Toxicroak using Swords Dance or Sucker Punch, or even Chansey using Wish are all opportunities Raichu can use to set up a Nasty Plot. After Raichu has Encored his foe into uselessly repeating a move, he can set up a Nasty Plot on the switch or simply attack with Thunderbolt or Hidden Power Ice to scout. It isn't recommended to switch Raichu directly into bulky Water-types because since Surf will 2HKO him.</p>

[Team Options]

<p>Raichu appreciates Stealth Rock and Spikes support to turn some 2HKOs into OHKOs. Claydol can use Stealth Rock and is also immune to Ground-type moves. Omastar is effective at laying down both Stealth Rock, and Spikes and even for Toxic Spikes. Omastar can also set up Toxic Spikes, (which give Raichu an easier time at beating Chansey.)</p>

<p>Dugtrio is effective at removing both Chansey and Registeel. While Rhyperior and Torterra cannot trap Registeel and Chansey, they can use the two as setup fodder. Strong Fighting-types like Hariyama and Hitmonlee are capable of easily switching into Chansey and threatening her with their powerful STAB moves. Venusaur can be used to counter Lanturn and Quagsire, who otherwise completely wall Raichu.</p>

<p>Dugtrio is a great check to Raichu, and it is impossible to outright counter Dugtrio due to his ability, Arena Trap. Mixed Houndoom is an effective partner because he can lure out and OHKO Dugtrio with Sucker Punch. However, some Dugtrio carry Subsitute, which renders Sucker Punch ineffective. Rock Polish Torterra is a good partner because he can set up on Dugtrio if Dugtrio manages to revenge kill Raichu.</p>

[Optional Changes]

<p>Raichu can use a moveset consisting of Substitute, Encore, Focus Punch, and Volt Tackle with Leftovers to get around his usual counters, such as Clefable and Chansey. Unfortunately, that set is easily walled by bulky Grass- and Ground-types. A specialized support set can be used with Encore and Wish, but Clefable is usually a better choice with her superior defenses and Magic Guard.</p>

[Counters]

<p>Chansey is as an excellent counter to Raichu due to her phenomenal special walling ability. Chansey can cripple Raichu with Thunder Wave or Toxic or simply wear him down with Seismic Toss. She needs to be wary of a Nasty Plot-boosted Focus Blast, however, which will 2HKO. Lanturn and Quagsire are immune to Thunderbolt and can easily survive Hidden Power Ice and Focus Blast while crippling him with Thunder Wave and Earthquake, respectively. Registeel and Steelix are excellent counters to Raichu without Focus Blast. Priority moves from Pokemon like Hitmontop and Arcanine take out Raichu easily due to his frailty. Finally, Dugtrio is a top notch check to Raichu, since he is able to trap Raichu and OHKO with Earthquake.</p>
This is expertly written; I found very few mistakes. I'll happily give this its second GP stamp, just fix the few errors I found.

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Thank you for the GP Check. I had a lot of help though, (thanks again you guys)

There is still the matter of the mention of Stealth Rock and Spikes turning 2HKO's into OHKO's. I was thinking of changing it to simply mentioning that Raichu is apt at switching and appreciates the extra residual damage. (in more detail of course)
 
If you have any specific examples of which 2HKOs get converted to OHKOs, mentioning them would be good; otherwise, it reads fine.
 
Ah right, here's my change then:

"Raichu appreciates Stealth Rock and Spikes support to turn
2HKOes against Registeel and Specially Defensive Venusaur into OHKO's"


There is also the matter of Quagsire:
(Quagsire takes 95.2% - 112.2% from Focus Blast.) should I give it a separate mention from Lanturn?

Lanturn and Quagsire are immune to Thunderbolt and can easily survive Hidden Power Ice and Focus Blast while crippling him with Thunder Wave and Earthquake, respectively.

Should I change it to:


Lanturn is immune to Thunderbolt and can easily survive Hidden Power Ice and Focus Blast while crippling him with Thunder Wave. Quagsire is also immune to Thunderbolt and is easily capable of surviving a Hidden Power Ice while crippling Raichu with Earthquake, but he should be wary of Nasty Plot-boosted Focus Blast which OHKOes.
 
"Raichu appreciates Stealth Rock and Spikes support to turn some 2HKOs, such as those against Registeel and Specially Defensive Venusaur, into OHKOs."
That sounds good to me. Also, for Quagsire:
"Lanturn and Quagsire are both immune to Thunderbolt and can easily survive most of Raichu's coverage moves and cripple him with Thunder Wave or Earthquake, respectively. Quagsire without Special Defense investment should be wary of a Nasty Plot-boosted Focus Blast, however, as it can OHKO him."
That's how I'd word that one. It also mentions that Specially Defensive Quagsire can take the hit decently (252/252+ takes 63.2% - 74.4%).
 
Awesome! Thanks a ton Rising Dusk, I appreciate it!
Changes have been implemented and I'm giving the analysis one more sweep.

Edit: I "think" it's ready now.
 
This didn't really need a check, but here are some mostly subjective suggestions:

[Overview]

<p>Raichu's respectable Speed along with his decent offensive stats and good movepool make him a dangerous sweeper. Access to both Encore and Nasty Plot differentiates Raichu from other specially oriented sweepers like Nasty Plot Mismagius and Nasty Plot Toxicroak. Unfortunately, his frailty and lack of useful resistances mean that it is relatively hard to switch Raichu into battle. With that said, if a quick Encore user who also poses as a powerful offensive threat is needed, then Raichu is a great choice.</p>

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Thunderbolt
move 3: Hidden Power Ice
move 4: Encore / Focus Blast
item: Life Orb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Nasty Plot boosts Raichu's modest Special Attack to incredible levels, giving him an opportunity to sweep. Thunderbolt is Raichu's STAB move of choice and OHKOes Milotic and Slowking after a Nasty Plot boost. Hidden Power Ice provides pseudo-BoltBeam coverage and allows Raichu to hit Ground- and Grass-types for super effective damage. Encore gives Raichu a much better chance to set up a Nasty Plot, but Focus Blast may be used to get past certain defensive Pokemon, including Registeel, Clefable, and Steelix</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

While Thunderbolt and Hidden Power Ice provide nearly perfect neutral coverage (only resisted by Lanturn and Shedinja in UU), sometimes that isn’t enough for a sweep. Focus Blast can help Raichu break through teams since it scores super effective hits on a number of key targets, as shown in the following damage calculations:

<ul class=LO 2+ Focus Blast Damage Calculations >
<li>vs 252/156+ Registeel: 83.5% - 98.4%</li>
<li>vs 252/252+ Clefable: 103.6% - 121.8%</li>
<li>vs 0/252+ Chansey: 57.4% - 67.7%</li>
<li>vs 252/252+ Steelix: 140.7% - 165.5%</li>
</ul>

<p>Although Nasty Plot Raichu is incredibly powerful, he still has trouble with some Pokemon depending on which moves he carries. Chansey is a good counter to Raichu, as she can cripple Raichu with Thunder Wave or Toxic; however, if Raichu carries Focus Blast, he can 2HKO Chansey. Raichu also has difficulty getting past Registeel without Focus Blast. Dugtrio is capable of removing the aforementioned threats with ease, giving non-Focus Blast Raichu an easier time at sweeping. Dugtrio is also an excellent check to Raichu, as he can switch into 3 out of 4 of Raichu's moves with relative (relative to what?) ease and OHKO with Earthquake. Houndoom with Sucker Punch can lure and kill Dugtrio, as can Ground-weak Pokemon who utilize Substitute. Good Dugtrio users might not fall into these traps, however, so any player using Raichu should be wary of signs that the opponent might have Dugtrio, such as the presence of Scyther or Swellow.</p>

<p>Raichu will be hard-pressed to switch into any attack with his subpar defenses. Instead, switching into predicted non-damaging moves and using Encore is more reliable. For example, Donphan using Stealth Rock, Toxicroak using Swords Dance or Sucker Punch, and even Chansey using Wish are all opportunities Raichu can use to set up a Nasty Plot. After Raichu has Encored his foe into uselessly repeating a move, he can set up a Nasty Plot on the switch or simply attack with Thunderbolt or Hidden Power Ice to scout. It isn't recommended to switch Raichu directly into bulky Water-types because Surf will 2HKO him.</p>

[Team Options]

<p>Raichu appreciates Stealth Rock and Spikes support to turn some 2HKOs, such as those against Registeel and Specially Defensive Venusaur, into OHKOs. Claydol can use Stealth Rock and is also immune to Ground-type moves. Omastar is effective at laying down both Stealth Rock and Spikes. He can also set up Toxic Spikes, which (spacing) give Raichu an easier time at beating Chansey.</p>

<p>Dugtrio is effective at removing both Chansey and Registeel. While Rhyperior and Torterra cannot trap Registeel and Chansey, they can use the two as setup fodder. Strong Fighting-types like Hariyama and Hitmonlee are capable of easily switching into Chansey and threatening her with their powerful STAB moves. Venusaur can be used to counter Lanturn and Quagsire, who otherwise completely wall Raichu.</p>

<p>Dugtrio is a great check to Raichu, and it is impossible to outright counter Dugtrio due to his ability, Arena Trap. Mixed Houndoom is an effective partner because he can lure out and OHKO Dugtrio with Sucker Punch. However, some Dugtrio carry Substitute, which renders Sucker Punch ineffective. Rock Polish Torterra is a good partner because he can set up on Dugtrio if Dugtrio manages to revenge kill Raichu.</p>

[Optional Changes]

<p>Raichu can use a moveset consisting of Substitute, Encore, Focus Punch, and Volt Tackle with Leftovers to get around his usual counters, such as Clefable and Chansey. Unfortunately, that set is easily walled by bulky Grass- and Ground-types. A specialized support set can be used with Encore and Wish, but Clefable is usually a better choice with her superior defenses and Magic Guard.</p>

[Counters]

<p>Chansey is as an excellent counter to Raichu due to her phenomenal special-walling ability. Chansey can cripple Raichu with Thunder Wave or Toxic or simply wear him down with Seismic Toss. She needs to be wary of a Nasty Plot-boosted Focus Blast, however, which will 2HKO. Lanturn and Quagsire are both immune to Thunderbolt and can easily survive most of Raichu's coverage moves and cripple him with Thunder Wave and Earthquake, respectively. Quagsire without Special Defense investment should be wary of a Nasty Plot-boosted Focus Blast, however, as it can OHKO him. Registeel and Steelix are excellent counters to Raichu without Focus Blast. Priority moves from Pokemon like Hitmontop and Arcanine take out Raichu easily due to his frailty. Finally, Dugtrio is a top notch check to Raichu, since he is able to trap Raichu and OHKO with Earthquake.</p>

Changes in Bold and removals in red.

Rising Dusk has confirmed that this was unncessary. For convenience, I'll put the strictly necessary changes in blue.
 
I completely forgot that I promised I would proofread this for you, sorry :( anyway I don't expect to catch a lot at this point, but hopefully I'll clean up anything left over by the GP folks!

pink is grammar edits
blue is prose/content edits


[Overview]

<p>Raichu's respectable Speed, decent offensive stats, and good movepool make him a dangerous sweeper. Access to both Encore and Nasty Plot differentiates Raichu from other specially-oriented sweepers like Nasty Plot Mismagius and Nasty Plot Toxicroak. Unfortunately, his frailty and lack of useful resistances mean that it is relatively hard to switch Raichu into battle. With that said, if a quick Encore user who also poses as a powerful offensive threat is needed, then Raichu is a great choice.</p>

[SET]
name: Nasty Plot
move 1: Nasty Plot
move 2: Thunderbolt
move 3: Hidden Power Ice
move 4: Encore / Focus Blast
item: Life Orb
nature: Timid
evs: 252 SpA / 4 SpD / 252 Spe

[SET COMMENTS]

<p>Nasty Plot boosts Raichu's modest Special Attack to incredible levels, giving him an opportunity to sweep. Thunderbolt is Raichu's STAB move of choice and OHKOes Milotic and Slowking after a Nasty Plot boost. Hidden Power Ice provides pseudo-BoltBeam coverage and allows Raichu to hit Ground- and Grass-types for super effective damage. Encore gives Raichu a much better chance to set up a Nasty Plot, but Focus Blast may be used to get past certain defensive Pokemon, including Registeel, Clefable, and Steelix.</p>

[ADDITIONAL COMMENTS]

<p>While Thunderbolt and Hidden Power Ice provide nearly perfect neutral coverage (only resisted by Lanturn and Shedinja in UU), sometimes that isn't enough for a sweep. Focus Blast can help Raichu break through teams since it scores super effective hits on a number of key targets, as shown in the following damage calculations:</p>

<ul class=LO 2+ Focus Blast Damage Calculations >
<li>vs 252/156+ Registeel: 83.5% - 98.4%</li>
<li>vs 252/252+ Clefable: 103.6% - 121.8%</li>
<li>vs 0/252+ Chansey: 57.4% - 67.7%</li>
<li>vs 252/252+ Steelix: 140.7% - 165.5%</li>
</ul>


<p>Although Nasty Plot Raichu is incredibly powerful, he still has trouble with some Pokemon depending on which moves he carries. Chansey is a good counter to Raichu, as she can cripple Raichu with Thunder Wave or Toxic; however, if Raichu carries Focus Blast, he can 2HKO Chansey. Raichu also has difficulty getting past Registeel without Focus Blast. Dugtrio is capable of trapping and removing the aforementioned threats with ease, giving non-Focus Blast Raichu an easier time sweeping. Dugtrio is also an excellent check to Raichu, as he can switch into 3 out of 4 of Raichu's moves with ease and OHKO with Earthquake. Houndoom with Sucker Punch can lure and KO Dugtrio, as can Ground-weak Pokemon who utilize Substitute. Good Dugtrio users might not fall into these traps, however, so any player using Raichu should be wary of signs that the opponent might have Dugtrio, such as the presence of Scyther or Swellow.</p>

<p>Raichu will be hard-pressed to switch into any attack with his subpar defenses. Instead, switching into predicted non-damaging moves and using Encore is more reliable. For example, Donphan using Stealth Rock, Toxicroak using Swords Dance or Sucker Punch, and even Chansey using Wish are all opportunities Raichu can use to set up a Nasty Plot. After Raichu has Encored his foe into uselessly repeating a move, he can set up a Nasty Plot on the switch or simply attack with Thunderbolt or Hidden Power Ice to scout. It isn't recommended to switch Raichu directly into bulky Water-types because Surf will 2HKO him, however.</p>

[Team Options]

<p>Raichu appreciates Stealth Rock and Spikes support to turn some 2HKOs, such as those against Registeel and Specially Defensive Venusaur, into OHKOs. Claydol can use Stealth Rock and is also immune to Ground-type moves. Omastar is effective at laying down both Stealth Rock and Spikes. He can also set up Toxic Spikes, which give Raichu an easier time beating Chansey.</p>

<p>Dugtrio is effective at removing both Chansey and Registeel. While Rhyperior and Torterra cannot trap Registeel and Chansey, they can use the two as setup fodder. Strong Fighting-types like Hariyama and Hitmonlee are capable of switching into Chansey and threatening her with their powerful STAB moves. Venusaur can be used to counter Lanturn and Quagsire, who otherwise completely wall Raichu.</p>

<p>Dugtrio is a great check to Raichu, and it is impossible to outright counter Dugtrio due to his ability, Arena Trap. Mixed Houndoom is an effective partner because he can lure out and OHKO Dugtrio with Sucker Punch. However, some Dugtrio carry Substitute, which renders Sucker Punch ineffective. Rock Polish Torterra is a good partner because he can set up on Dugtrio if Dugtrio manages to revenge kill Raichu.</p>

[Optional Changes]

<p>Raichu can use a moveset consisting of Substitute, Encore, Focus Punch, and Volt Tackle with Leftovers to get around his usual counters, such as Clefable and Chansey. Unfortunately, that set is easily walled by bulky Grass- and Ground-types. A specialized support set can be used with Encore and Wish, but Clefable is usually a better choice with her superior defenses and her ability, Magic Guard.</p>

[Counters]

<p>Chansey is as an excellent counter to Raichu due to her phenomenal Special Defense and HP. Chansey can cripple Raichu with Thunder Wave or Toxic, or simply wear him down with Seismic Toss. She needs to be wary of a Nasty Plot-boosted Focus Blast, however, which will 2HKO. Lanturn and Quagsire are both immune to Thunderbolt and can easily survive most of Raichu's coverage moves and cripple him with Thunder Wave and Earthquake, respectively. Quagsire without Special Defense investment should be wary of a Nasty Plot-boosted Focus Blast, however, as it can OHKO him. Registeel and Steelix are excellent counters to Raichu without Focus Blast. Priority moves from Pokemon like Hitmontop and Arcanine take out Raichu easily due to his frailty. Finally, Dugtrio is a top-notch check to Raichu, since he is able to trap Raichu and OHKO with Earthquake.</p>


Great analysis, I caught almost nothing ^_^
 
Thanks for the cleaning up the analysis Snorlaxe!

(I can't believe I missed putting <p> in one of my paragraphs.)
I think the analysis is finished and upload worthy... finally.
Thanks for the constant grammar checks and GP checks you guys. It's been a long journey... almost there!
 
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