Rampaging Pokemon & Rampaging Items! (A Suspect Warstory)

[diinbong]

Eh, I thought the fake sections were kinda dumb but overall the story was really good! Nice battle you two!!

although I'm sure I've read the fake ending part in another story but whatever gg

 

[jrrrrrrr]

Nice warstory, you fooled me!

And Lucario doesn't even come close to OHKOing Garchomp with ES, even after a Swords Dance. It's defenses are much, much better than people give them credit for, which is why he wouldn't have SDed anyways lol. Scarfchomp came in real handy for both of you, Blissey is just a royal pain in the butt!

Looks like Scizor is such a great Garchomp counter...it came into Outrage and promptly got destroyed.

PS that scarfchomp was probably Jolly, which is why it didn't just instantly OHKO Blissey like you seemed to be expecting it to.

 

[Xia]

A refreshing break from the sub-par warstories that come through here too often.

The ending was great, but you had me hook, line, and sinker with the Kyogre bit. I had to get closer to thescreen to make sure my contacts were alright. XD

 

[Annoying Old Party Man]

great warstory! I liked the kyogre and the ending.

 

[Blue_Tornado]

Nice warstory, you fooled me!

And Lucario doesn't even come close to OHKOing Garchomp with ES, even after a Swords Dance. It's defenses are much, much better than people give them credit for, which is why he wouldn't have SDed anyways lol. Scarfchomp came in real handy for both of you, Blissey is just a royal pain in the butt!

Looks like Scizor is such a great Garchomp counter...it came into Outrage and promptly got destroyed.

PS that scarfchomp was probably Jolly, which is why it didn't just instantly OHKO Blissey like you seemed to be expecting it to.

Eh, to tell the truth, I was actually predicting a ScarfChomp on his side all battle, but it turned out Yache in the end (Blissey used Ice Beam). I guess you skipped through that part...
Speaking about that Ice Beam, if I knew that it was Yache, I could've just switched-in Latios instead of Blissey to ensure the win, but instead I was a victim of assumptions and it all came to that near-max damage roll.

This is a bit late, but I want to reply to the whole SD Lucario thing: I actually knew that he wouldn't KO with that, but when writing I guess I was a bit drowsy in that part. Oh well.

I'm glad that people are commenting on this again. It was already on the 3rd page of Stark. Phew.

Well, what can I say? Enjoy!

PS: In need of some good warstoryable battles. lol, I really want to write another one, but my last attempt failed a bit because I picked a not-so-good-enough battle. I hope I'll find a good battle soon.