Ubers Ribombee

[LBDC]

[SET]
name: Sticky Web
move 1: Sticky Web
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Stun Spore
move 4: U-turn / Quiver Dance
item: Focus Sash
ability: Shield Dust
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe


[SET COMMENTS]
Ribombee is the fastest Sticky Web user available in the Ubers metagame, outspeeding all relevant users of Taunt; unlike Shuckle, Ribombee has some offensive presence thanks to Stun Spore and Quiver Dance. All of these positive traits make Ribombee a good option as a suicide lead for offensive teams. Ribombee's access to Stun Spore helps in matchups against faster foes such as Zacian-C and Eternatus, crippling them. It also helps to prevent Pokemon like Gyarados from setting up on Ribombee. Thanks to Focus Sash, Ribombee survives at least one hit, allowing it to set up Sticky Web most of the time and potentially cripple opposing Pokemon with Stun Spore. With maximum investment in Special Attack, Moonblast allows Ribombee to hit Dragon-types like Dragapult hard. U-turn allows Ribombee to escape bad matchups, like Excadrill with Rapid Spin, and bring a different teammate in safety. On the other hand, Quiver Dance improves Ribombee's offensive presence. After a Quiver Dance boost, Ribombee can break Zacian-C's Substitute, which could be annoying for Ribombee's teammates otherwise. Users of Substitute like Zacian-C and Gyarados are invaluable teammates for Ribombee because they can prevent Ditto from revenge killing, as it normally ignores the Speed drop from Sticky Web. Other powerful Pokemon like Haxorus are also good options for teammates. Ghost-types like Polteageist can block Rapid Spin, preventing Sticky Web from being removed. All of the aforementioned attackers benefit from Sticky Web dropping the Speed of the opposing Pokemon.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[LaBalladeDesCieux, 464398]]
- Quality checked by: [[Minority, 222996], [Cynara, 224455]]
- Grammar checked by: [[deetah, 297659]]

 

[Minority]

Ribombee is the fastest Sticky Web user available in the Uber metagame, outspeed all relevant users of Taunt, making it a good option to suicide lead for offensive teams.

In this sentence I would briefly include a mention of Shuckle, and why a player might use Ribombee as opposed to Shuckle.

QC: 1/2

 

[Cynara]

has everything I expect from a Sticky Web lead.

Quiver Dance make Ribombee less passive

Its easier to say Quiver Dance improves Ribombee's offense presence. It is not a passive pokemon at all.

QC: 2/2

 

[LBDC]

Thx Minority and Cynara! Send to GP

 

[deetah]

Add Remove Comments (RC) = Remove Comma (AC) = Add Comma
Very many edits here, so I'm not going to stamp this yet. Implement everything here and tag me again for another look.

Ribombee

[SET]
name: Sticky Web
move 1: Sticky Web
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Stun Spore
move 4: U-turn / Quiver Dance
item: Focus Sash
ability: Shield Dust
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe


[SET COMMENTS]
Ribombee is the fastest Sticky Web user available in the Uber Ubers metagame, outspeed outspeeding all relevant users of Taunt, and unlike to Shuckle, Ribombee have has some offensive presence thank thanks to Stun Spore and Quiver Dance. All of these positive traits make Ribombee a good option to as a suicide lead for offensive teams. Ribombee's access acces to Stun Spore help helps in match-up matchups against faster foes, (RC) such as Zacian-C or and Eternatus, in cripple crippling them. It also help helps to prevent Pokemon like Gyarados to set-up from setting up on Ribombee. Thank at Thanks to Focus Sash, Ribombee live survives at least a one hit, allow to settle allowing it to set up Sticky Web most of the time and potentially cripple opposing Pokemon with Stun Spore. Moonblast, with an full investment in Special Attack, hit hard super effective foes, like Dragapult. With maximum investment in Special Attack, Moonblast allows Ribombee to hit Dragon-types like Dragapult hard. While U-turn allows Ribombee to escape at bad match-up matchups, (AC) like Excadrill with Rapid Spin, and bring a teammates different teammate in safety. On the other hand, Quiver Dance improves Ribombee's offense presence. After Quiver Dance's a Quiver Dance boost, Ribombee can break Zacian-C's Subsitute Substitute, witch which could be annoying for Ribombee's teammates otherwise. Users of Substitute, (RC) like Zacian-C or and Gyarados, (RC) are invaluable teammates for Ribombee teams, for because they can prevent Ditto to ignore Speed drop of Sticky Web and revenge kill Ribombee teammates from revenge killing, as it normally ignores the Speed drop from Sticky Web. Other powerful Pokémon, (RC) Pokemon like Haxourus is Haxorus are also good options for teammates. Ghost-types like Polteageist can prevent block Rapid Spin, (AC) to remove the Sticky Web of Ribombee preventing Sticky Webs from being removed. All of the aforementioned attacker benefits attackers benefit from Sticky Web dropping the Speed of opposing Pokémon Pokemon.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[LaBalladeDesCieux, 464398]]
- Quality checked by: [[Minority, 222996], [Cynara, 224455]]
- Grammar checked by: [[username1, userid1]]

 

[LBDC]

I have implemented the GP check deetah ! (promise it is last time when I write Pokémon with a é :sob: )

 

[deetah]

Add Remove Comments (SC) = Semicolon
Much, much better. Correct these final things and then it's good to go.

GP 1/1

Rimbombee

[SET]
name: Sticky Web
move 1: Sticky Web
move 2: Moonblast
move 3: Stun Spore
move 4: U-turn / Quiver Dance
item: Focus Sash
ability: Shield Dust
nature: Timid
evs: 4 HP / 252 SpA / 252 Spe


[SET COMMENTS]
Ribombee is the fastest Sticky Web user available in the Ubers metagame, outspeeding all relevant users of Taunt; (SC) and unlike Shuckle, Ribombee has some offensive presence thanks to Stun Spore and Quiver Dance. All of these positive traits make Ribombee a good option as a suicide lead for offensive teams. Ribombee's access to Stun Spore helps in matchups against faster foes such as Zacian-C and Eternatus, crippling them. It also helps to prevent Pokemon like Gyarados from setting up on Ribombee. Thanks to Focus Sash, Ribombee survives at least one hit, allowing it to set up Sticky Web most of the time and potentially cripple opposing Pokemon with Stun Spore. With maximum investment in Special Attack, Moonblast allows Ribombee to hit Dragon-types like Dragapult hard. U-turn allows Ribombee to escape bad matchups, like Excadrill with Rapid Spin, and bring a different teammate in safety. On the other hand, Quiver Dance improves Ribombee's offense offensive presence. After a Quiver Dance boost, Ribombee can break Zacian-C's Substitute, which could be annoying for Ribombee's teammates otherwise. Users of Substitute like Zacian-C and Gyarados are invaluable teammates for Ribombee because they can prevent Ditto from revenge killing, as it normally ignores the Speed drop from Sticky Web. Other powerful Pokemon like Haxorus are also good options for teammates. Ghost-types like Polteageist can block Rapid Spin, (AC) (Remove the comment) preventing Sticky Webs Web from being removed. All of the aforementioned attackers benefit from Sticky Web dropping the Speed of the opposing Pokemon.


[CREDITS]
- Written by: [[LaBalladeDesCieux, 464398]]
- Quality checked by: [[Minority, 222996], [Cynara, 224455]]
- Grammar checked by: [[deetah, 297659]]

 

[LBDC]

Implemented, and it is ready to go!