Simple OU team. Critiq it.

been having some problems with my team, could use some critic. first, my lead.

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Swampert. - lead

252 def 252 hp 4 atk.
Leftovers

Stealth Rock
Ice beam
Roar
Earthquake

Hes an amazing lead, ive never done any better without him, he can take any hit and still stand tall to take another, stealth rock is a general must and the roar just feeds into that stealth rock starting it up, roar also gets rid of that baton pass psychoness, dont need any ttars with 2 swords dance and speed boosts hussling out my Poke.
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Scizor. Revenge/ Normal Sweeper

248 hp 252 atk 8 spd.
Choice band

Pursuit
U-Turn
Bullet punch
Superpower

I kinda of threw scizor in here because, well i had a perfect IV scizor, scizor is a pretty BA pokemon, and he has outstanding speed, i replaced lucario with scizor and scizor is a nice thing to mix up the fight with, throwing in for a random u-turn or bullet punch, not sure if i want to keep him though.
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Electivire - Mixvire

36atk 252spa 220spe
Expert belt

Flamethrower
hidden power ice
cross chop
THunderbolt
my mixfire is pretty good, its just a basic sweeper that helps me cleanup messes when needed, its nice to throw this guy in after withdrawling a suicune before suicune gets thunderbolted or hidden power lightning'd.
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Suicune - Crocune

252 hp 252 def 4 spe
Leftovers

Calm mind
Rest
Sleep talk
Surf
this is what my team is based around, its probably one of the best pokemon out there, even though its pretty much a 1/4 chance gamble once its setup, it can take hits like a madman, its almost impossible to 2hko this suicune and i love it when i need a good stall or just a quick surf.
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Metagross - CHoice bander/ Atom bomb

252 hp 236 atk 12 def 8spe
Choice band

Meteor mash
Earthquake
Explosion
Thunderpunch
I put metagross in here because hes pretty much my panic button, if something is going wrong, i throw in him, and ive yet to see a fire move to 100% kill him, which is nice, because if i know hes about to die, or if i switch him in on a fire move by mistake, i have explosion there for me.
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Gyarados: DDance Offensive

156 HP 104 Atk 100 Def 150 Spe
Leftovers

Bounce
Waterfall
Dragon dance
Earthquake

well, theres not much to say about this guy, hes really just in there to be in there or when a heatran stomps something of mine and suicune doesnt come through for me. its nice to have bounce against dragonites though because they cant do anything about it, and its pretty much the trump card for anything else that poses a threat to me.

Now as you can see my team doesnt have much synergy, when i battle it pretty much turns into a revenge sweeping match and predicting if the other person is going in for the revenge sweep or not ( maybe its like that for everyone) this team is built around suicune, i was thinking of putting a celebi in but im not 100% sure on what to do to make it better hopefully someone who has more OU knowledge will give me some synergy ideas, as im trying to keep suicune and metagross in it.
 
Hiya!

It seems to me that you wanted help, so I guess I will help.

You have Metagross and Scizor on the same team, but what makes it overkill is that they are doing almost the same job. They both carry CB. And you mentioned that you wanted to remove Gyarados for Celebi. If a member should be replaced, it should definitely be Metagross.

I would also like to know how you deal with DD threats, mainly Gyara and Mence after +1. Mence can outsped your entire team with +1 and proceed to 1-2hko your entire team with EQ and Outrage only. You better hope Mence is at 75% to be able to revenge him with Scizor. Gyara is a more dangerous threat, since he also outspeds your entire team with +1 and takes next to nothing from BP. He decimates Swampert and Scizor with Waterfall, and he decimates everything else with Earthquake or Stone Edge.

Since CB Metagross is overkill with CB Scizor, I will suggest Scarf Latias over him. Scarf Latias still outspeeds +1 Mence as well as always outspeed everything slower. Both mentioned threats get hit hard from Draco Meteor, and her other attacks still both threats hard.

Since I only have time for a quick rate, I will end it here. But if you feel like you still need a more in-depth rate, just contact me and I will go more in-depth with this team on a new post when I get the time. Good luck!
 
If ur looking for a Celebi, here is one which has worked for me.

Celebi@Leftovers

EVs - 200 Hp - 160 Def - 150 Sp.Atk
Nature - Timid
Ability - Natural Cure: The Pokémon's status (BURN, PARALYZE, SLEEP, POISON, FREEZE) is healed when withdrawn from battle.
Moveset: -
- Leech Seed
- Recover
- Calm Mind
- Energy Ball

This set uses leech seed, and leftovers to allow you to set up calm mind, energy ball is
there so you can hit hard with the boost.

Energy ball over psychic so theres no immunity. recover for added durability.
The Evs allow for a +1 DD crunch from a Ttar. After 2 CM it can 1/2hit most Ttars.

This is all the help i can give.
 
Hi there. I've noticed that your team has serious problems with the Rotom formes, which is not a good direction to go in, unless you're playing on Wifi. A Rest / Sleep Talk Rotom manages to wall Scizor, Electivire, Metagross, and effectively check your Gyarados and Suicune as well. The combination of Swampert + Rotom + Skarmory, often seen on many stallish teams, especially gives you trouble.

To solve this problem, I recommend using a Rotom-H over Electivire. Honestly, the problem with Electivire is that losing to the extremely common Swampert and Rotom is not a good idea in this metagame. The set I suggest for you is Scarf Rotom, which also covers you Gyarados and Lucario weaknesses to some extent.

Rotom-H (M) @ Choice Scarf
Ability: Levitate
EVs: 6 HP/252 Spd/160 SAtk
Timid nature (+Spd, -Atk)
- Thunderbolt
- Shadow Ball
- Overheat
- Trick
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This is a pretty good team, but I think you put too much physical sweepers. Yu might think about putting a stronger special sweeper because suicune + electrivire aren't good enough. I agree with mtr with replacing electrivire with rotom.
Also mixape:
Nasty Plot
Fire blast
thunderpunch
grass knot

will seriosly hurt your team
 
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