The description "crooked" is possibly one of the most vague criticisms I have ever seen. Are you actually trying to convey a point or are you just typing words that look enough like criticisms to not at least appear completely useless? In the future, specific examples would be a safer way critique scratches. Any perceived harshness is, in this case, meant. Vague/useless criticisms are a special pet peeve of mine, regardless of whether or not they are directed at me.
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Super Spriting/Trainer Card/other art nonsense thread
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I actually really like the scratch, but is it just me or does it not have eyes. Mabey make a bit more prominatnant eyes.The eyes are covered by its shaggy hair.
Sorry if I offended you, Headpunch.
I will criticise more specifically from now on.
I will get a couple fusions done tonight and edit this post when I'm done.
Cool. It kind of looks like there are two Exeggcute's near its feet.No one likes my scratch? I added some more stuff to it.
that would be his buttDZRL, that latest one is great. I dunno but your sprites actually look like they come from a game. Your colour choice is also great, i wish you could help me with mine...Lot of stuff:
Revamps from Crystal:
Its damn fun doing these, Crystal has such awesome poses.the pidgyot? or oto cant tell is really coolomg MetalGarx you work is awesome dude how do you do that i want to learn it maybe you can help me <_>. Usually my work looks amateur like and i can't find good ideas. I hope somone can help me <_>Hey guys i made a new sort of sprite it's Scizor and Poliwrath. Not many has changed from Poliwrath but i was out of ideas so i'd like you guys to give me tips =/ Here it is:
The Claw on it's right hand needs to be bigger. It's wings are at a odd angle. Might ned to have a more distinct line between the body, and it's left clawthanks for the comments guys :D
they were my first revamps!
one more:
It actually takes quite a while to do these. I usually start by first making the "white" actual white, if you get what i mean. Then i start outlining a particular part with the middle outline for it. then i fill in the actual white with the highlight and rest with base colour. Then shade in the darker parts and outline and one part is ready. Also you have to make sure you get rid of the dithering(the checkerboard dots) and the pixels outside the outline. Final touching up and voila!, a revamp!!
Chileon: like others said, the raised calw is too small. the other claw sortof blends into the belly, try outlining that with the dark outline. The wings are also odd, the poliwrath is leaning but the wings are straight..they should be tilted as well.Thnx for the advice i'll consider these tips in my new sprite. I hope i get better someday i still suck meh ;o;
EDIT: I sprited this i think it's pretty good but as usual there might be some errors well here it is, Weavetops:
there's something about the left sycthe that's off.the scythes are at zonky angles...
new revamp! this time a yellow sprite:
Lot of stuff:
Revamps from Crystal:
Its damn fun doing these, Crystal has such awesome poses.
can you re-do the Crystal Sprites in my thread? and please tell me your cost for itYour trade thread?? so you must like the crystal poses if you want them revamped . I just suggest that you use actual TTar as the DP pose is much better. I can easily give you Shiny Primeape and Ampharos. But i cant animate the sprites, sorry :(
Cost, do you mean pokes or stuff? nah, i dont have wifi, just credits and enough time to do them^^
Arcanine:
Someone please help me to improve can someone check if it looks good or if i can change some things, just tips c'mon i need it:
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