Tangrowth (Minor Additions) +

[Colonel M]

I fixed this. Thanks for the catch.

 

[darkie]

If you're going to rewrite it, you can go ahead and do so.

 

[Colonel M]

Yeah let me. I'll get to work with this because I want to re-word the crap I wrote. I'll repost when its "re-done".

 

[Colonel M]

Actually darkie, I sort of change my mind. I'd rather not re-write this, unless if you feel that it should be.

 

[darkie]

It reads fine.

edit: I did make some changes that i'll edit into the OP, though.