X&Z, I didn't intend for there to be a pun. In fact, I don't get the pun you're pointing out :D
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Super Spriting/Trainer Card/other art nonsense thread
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TENTAmew looks pretty COOL!? TENTA-COOL!? Come on, I can't beleive you didn't post that on purpose! That sounds like something my brother would say...
Anyways, I have created a name for my Fakemon. It shall be known as Monarain (Monark+Rain). The basic Pokemon that it evolves from is Peist (Peon+Moist) I am still working on the middle form's name. I will post the other forms tomorrmow, once I finish ______, since Peist is already finished.
'Night.
P.S.:@GTS: Thanks for the comment.
How about Kniet (NAI-et)? Knight + Wet! Peist-Kniet-Monarain sounds good to me. Also, I approve of Tentemew, though the eyes look a litle bit freaky.
P.S: Apparently there is a store of some sort in MM9, and I was not informed of the fact util just recently. Huh.
Comments and criticisms are welcome, especially on the wings, hands, and tail. I would like to know if I shaded water right, since I have not done it before.
Nice Job on this one, the line art is perfect and the shading is fine. You used dithering correctly to shade the flat wings, though maybe a bit much. The only thing I would say is that the dark patch on the lowest wing tip is too large, shrink it down so it's just around the edge.
Actually, you left an extra pixel in the outline of the right side of the main body, and there are some errors where the main body meets the bottom "fin", but I don't feel very nitpicky tonight so I'll let Headpunch cover those. Nice sprite, one of the best scratches I've seen in this thread in a while.
Oh yeah, forgot to post my Digimon sprite from last weekend. MarineAngemon's kind of lame but it was requested, plus it was small and simple so it was easy to do. Kind of rushed it, so let me know if there's any major mistakes.
Nice Job on this one, the line art is perfect and the shading is fine. You used dithering correctly to shade the flat wings, though maybe a bit much. The only thing I would say is that the dark patch on the lowest wing tip is too large, shrink it down so it's just around the edge.
Actually, you left an extra pixel in the outline of the right side of the main body, and there are some errors where the main body meets the bottom "fin", but I don't feel very nitpicky tonight so I'll let Headpunch cover those. Nice sprite, one of the best scratches I've seen in this thread in a while.
Oh yeah, forgot to post my Digimon sprite from last weekend. MarineAngemon's kind of lame but it was requested, plus it was small and simple so it was easy to do. Kind of rushed it, so let me know if there's any major mistakes.
It should be fixed now, and I undestood what you meant with the body, so that should also be fixed. Thanks for the "Nice sprite" comment. It makes me feel good since this is only my third scratch. :)
Here is the Monarain Family Tree.
Peist
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Kniet
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Monarain
Comments and crits are welcome.
As for the Digimon, since I've never played Digimon, I'm not familiar with the material. But, I did notice one thing that should prob. be fixed, and that's the outline. From what I can see, (I didn't load it up in Paint, so I might be mistaken) the outline is just black. It's lacking the base outline color most sprites have. Otherwise, it looks good (although sickeningly cute). Keep up the good work with the Digimon sprites!
P.S.:@NikLink: Just out of curiosity, but did you get that name simply out of me saying "'Night"? Cause I like it. :)Just a quick notice, but some of you may be wondering why my sprites are not showing up. Well, I've finally upgraded to a better sig, aka, made my sig link to my Photobucket. While doing this, I moved my sprites into two albums for convenience. Unknowingly, I messed up all of the IMG codes because of this. I am going to repost the Monarain Tree soon, and if you want to see any of my older sprites, you'll have to click the sig, since I really don't want to have to go back through thirty pages re-posting every picture. Sorry for the inconveinence.OKay, now that I've seen the evolution line, I do have a few criticisms:
-The angles of Kniet's body parts in relation to each other look weird,.
-The left parto of Kniet's main 'fin' is colored badly, with alternating light and dark colors.
-Peist looks too... plain. It's just a ball.
But that's just me being a nitpicker, awesome scratch! If you're wondering how I got the name, it's because I thought, 'What goes between peon and monarch?' and 'What goes between moist and rain?' and I came up with knight and wet. Voila, named!
In defense of Peist: Does that mean that Voltorb is "too plain" since it's just a ball? Peist is a head for crying out loud! At least it has a nose!
Okay, now that my halfway-serious rant about Peist is done, I do see what you mean about Peist's pose. I tried to get it in a "I'm-a' goin' ta' stab ya'" pose, and I'm not sure if that worked too well. I might do it in a different pose later.
As for the shading, I was trying to go for the same "light glinting off of the water" shading I went for with Monarain. For example, if you look at an ocean/pond, the ripples create areas the light can't reach, thus creating gaps in the shading.
Thanks for the comment, though. I was actually on the same train of thought with the name. I had thought of "wet" but I couldn't come up with a good word to go with it. Thanks for coming up with Kniet, since I would have prob. come up with some stupid name that sounded horrible. ;)
EDIT: Since I thought I should update this, the Gallade Dex has been updated with GDN:013; Latios.
GDN:013
And yes, Staraptor is still giving me trouble.@Canti- Awwww. Marine Angemon is cute.....lame, but cute. It looks good enough to me, except for the outline thing that X mentioned. It's great for a rush job.
@X- I love Monarain, but I'm not feeling the other two quite as much. Kniet in particular; the positioning of the fin closest to his body looks really awkward to me. There's no glaring problems with Peist, but no glaring good either. But...who am I to talk? My scratching is nowhere near yours. Solid job on all of them.
On a different note, requests,anyone?@X&Z latios seems slightly unporportional first of all the head is too big and the wings are also slighlty too big and lastly, was is that thing out of his @$$! But othere than that great job! :) Also fuzz try golem and rhyperior (i know that it's hard xD)
Maybe I am your brother :P
EDIT: Since I thought I should update this, the Gallade Dex has been updated with GDN:013; Latios.
GDN:013
And yes, Staraptor is still giving me trouble.
It looks pretty good. I hope Staraptor looks good :P
@Fuzz: You got a new avatar :P It's very cute.
Try Shiny Latias + Typhlosion, using Typh as a base. I've come to love Shiny Latias (aesthetically and in battle :D) Calm Mind Defensive is indestructable and can sweep well ^_^
Speaking of battling, I think I just fought Niklink (he had the same username) on Shoddy. He beat me T_T
The main thing that's giving me problems is the fact that I'm not that familiar with bird anatomy, and thus can't figure out how its wings unfold. It's only opened its wings in the Anime, so pretty soon I'll have to look through some episode pictures to get a good idea... and by pretty soon, I mean around next week...
@CM: That thing sticking out of its arse is one of Lat's tail feathers. Its head is actually around the same size as the standard Gallade head if you count the Helm as part of the head. And, personnally, I thought Lat's wings looked somewhat unproportional for Latios. And besides, aren't splices all about making something that's grossly misfigured so that it looks funny? That's what I always thought it was about.
@Fuzz: I've actually started redrawing Kniet already. I'm hoping to have it redone sometime tonight or tomorrow. As for Peist, it's just a first form, so it's isn't neccesarily going to be that impressive. As a Peist, it's very inexperienced at using it's powers, and thus can't make itself look cool. Thus, it is simply a head with a nose and eyes. Most first forms seem to be pretty simple.Tah dah, X&Z.That might help :DX&Z Haha lol
@Crazymonkeyz- Not exactly. ^_- Rhylem wasn't that bad.
@1337- Isn't it? -squee- Thanks.
Tytias took some thinking outside the box. I'm not wholly satisfied withe the highlights of the wings and the pattern of the face. But she's cute in a demented kind of way.
Mmm, most. Peist just struck me as outstandingly...plain. Moreso than most. But anyway. I look forward to seeing the re-done Kniet. Your scratches are killer.
Hey I'm not always right everybody makes mistakes...
@Crazymonkeyz- Not exactly. ^_- Rhylem wasn't that bad.
Also i'm tossing in gabite + altariaFuzz, that still looks pretty good :D The head looks awesome.
I'm gonna be uploading a Latias/Latios related picture soon, after I finished it. I didn't do a fusion though.The simplicity of different usernames.....
Requests, anyone?
Here's one :
Behold Azutios using recover
What happened to Breloom/Ludicolo?Bood, I'm working on him. The sprites are hard to fuse.
Hybrid, that's pretty cool :D- Status
