the first one of NatGeo's fixes isn't actually correct
It is ...
http://idioms.thefreedictionary.com/be-all+and+end-all
Try searching in the reverse order.
the first one of NatGeo's fixes isn't actually correct
It should be be-all, end all
The "and" needs to be changed to a comma.Beware of Early Bird Houndoom and Kangaskhan, and Sleep Talk.
To be honest, I don't even know what this sentence is supposed to tell us.Encore might be a little more free if you prefer that, but you don't have to keep using Trick.
Found a couple more issues with an analysis (I can already hear Komodo groaning)
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/mr_mime
In the Hypnosis set:
The "and" needs to be changed to a comma.
In the Tricking Baton Passer set:
To be honest, I don't even know what this sentence is supposed to tell us.
http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/umbreon
In Umbreon's only set, he's given a Careful (SpD+/SpA-) nature. This should be changed to Calm (SpD+/Atk-) as it possesses no attacks whatsoever, and a lower attack nature would be preferred over a lower special attack nature due to less damage taken.
A small change, I know, but that's what this thread is for anyways.
*from confusion.
Sorry, forgot to include the keyword, haha. >_>