Hi! Im back again!
you still need sprites? I made an atomic hyena:
Is this OK? I know its not on the list thing.
It reminds me allot of the Ice Wolf, in both pose and concept alike. Just my opinion, but they just look too similar.
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It reminds me allot of the Ice Wolf, in both pose and concept alike. Just my opinion, but they just look too similar.Hi! Im back again!
you still need sprites? I made an atomic hyena:
Is this OK? I know its not on the list thing.
Yeah... it looks a lot like the ice wolf...
YAY! Finally the dragon epic is finished!
But do you guys like it?
I'm good with it!!!! :D Thanks dude!
It definitely has. Much of the back end coding is done but it has seriously stalled things to not have this part done...
We're trying! +)
On a more serious note, I should have the redrawn Atomic Hyena concepts done by later tonight in both Concept A and Concept B flavors. +)
OM NOM NOM NOM NOM.
Meh.. I expected an other reply. :( :p I thought you would been overwhelmed and found the sprite fantastic. I'm used to that you like my work (very) much :P, but now it sounds like you don't like it much, that it's just okay and nothing more. And if so, please say what can be improved.
@ES: Nice sprite, but it has some shading proportions. Like at the tail, there should been more highlight. And I suggest that you make the colour of the mouth/throat black. And go for a different colour, purple would be nice or dark blue of light green.
Are those wings? Because if so, I think you should see a little bit of the other wing. If it is a dorsal fin, then put it more up, towards the head. My suggestion is to do this, because I think it would look a lot better/cooler.
He put four "!s" and a ":D". I think he likes it. a lot. :)
What I would suggest doing is to make black outlines on the "odd leg" so that it stands out more from the other one.
Yeah, I noticed. But the ''I'm good with it'' part made me thing he's not finding it awesome. Also, the exlamation marks could be used a way to comford me, not hurt my feelings.
Question: Jon, does your boss like it?
Well Jon clarify it all soon. ^^
You meen the hidden leg or the left hind-leg? Because the outline of the hidden leg is already completely black.YAY! Finally the dragon epic is finished!
But do you guys like it?
I'm sorry dude! Let me try this again...
HOLY F*&^ING S#!%!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THATS AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! YOU SIR ARE A GOD!!!!!!!!!! :D!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Better? ;) Thats what I meant to say last time anyway!
ALSO! My boss loves it!
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Dude! Awesome! I think it looks great! There ARE some shading issues like Dhjona said but I think with a few tweaks it could be AMAZING! Thanks!And Dhjona, I had a question. I noticed you submitted your Earth Lion into the spriting contest, and claimed it was spliced from Persian, Luxray, and a couple other Pokemon. So is it actually spliced or is it full scratch?
It's full scratch. Made a mistake (posted the wrong link).
I'm good with it. :P Just kidding. At a more serious way: i'm glad you and boss like it so much. Sorry for the misunderstanding, though. ;)Maybe you have to tweak the sprite a bit, then, because the lion has Luxray's eyes and possibly bits of Persian in it too.I'm going to redo my worm. I redesigned it and this one looks FAR cooler than the other. the other was too plain...I just wish i could scan the picture into my computer...oh well. hopefully I'll be doing that. and I made a baby for the turtle and atomic hyena to sprite :D
is that atomic fish supposed to replace my sharks?I said I'd make Hyenas, so I made hyenas. They are four days late, but they are here, arent they? +)
Tell me what you guys think, and I'll sprite the most well supported design.
Crazy Cerberus design that I though of when my brother mentioned how Hyenas are well identified with their tongues. Prob. got carried away, but w/e.
The original designs hands seemed unique to me, so I expounded upon the idea. Stretch hands, anyone?
My second attempt to make use of a tongue in the design, and my personal favorite. Where it's underbelly would be is actually a vertical mouth, and the tongue tends to loll out as it runs, resembling a tail. Also, I do realize that this looks kinda bland currently. I plan on adding spots though, and that will add to the coloring. ;)
Enjoy! When I get back, I'll update this post with some more Armadillos. ;)I vote the third. the first looks like a chameleon and the second looks like lugia and the demon from ghost buster's had a baby :/
Weird mouth. I like.
As for actual criticisms, throw some designs or something on the Carapace, as it looks a little too plain. Also, bending the legs a bit would also do wonders for creepy-ness aspect.carapace is the body body right? will do, but that will come with teh colors. as to bending the legs I dont think i will...seems fine as is...
thanks for the crit!
WOW... I LOVED your old design but this this is just... wow. I CANNOT wait to see how this turns out!I'm glad you like. the other one felt too...plain...
oh and heres an update :)
I'm glad you like. the other one felt too...plain...
oh and heres an update :)
Very nice. One recommendation I can give though, is to dither the edges of the ground it is breaking out from. That way it blends in a bit better with the surrounding terrain. As for your previous question, yes, the carapace is the body. +)
If no-one objects, I can start spriting out the AT Hyena sometime tomorrow and have it hopefully done at the end of the week. +)
@aXl This comes down from the top... My boss is breathing down my neck to get families of creatures finished so we can actually start moving forward with at least some of them. With that said I NEED you to finish your Earth Bull family before you spend time on other things. So please put your hyenas on hold for awhile and focus on that instead.
Besides I have renewed talks with the person who made the concepts of the ones you originally sprited and I may have a deal that will allow us to use their stuff... at least in some form. Thanks!
Uh-oh. I can help deter your boss with some improved sprites. Aything you want me to sprite in particular?
