The comments seem okay, a bit more elaboration on what else could happen, what you want to do after that etc woudn't go amiss but isn't necessary per se.
Format seems quite nice, but I'd try not to flood it with colours too much - personally I'd make your moves one colour, the opponent's another, and the after turn effects a third (black probably). I wouldn't bold and underline the turn either, do one or the other. Be careful of that yellow too, it's somewhat hard to see. Anyway, hope this turns out to be a good battle as well as it looks fairly nice from this turn!
EDIT: Bear in mind that what people like is subjective, so what I like may not be the same as what someone else does.