StallMandibuzz said:
How did I do on my first Chapter of my Scramble? ^_^
Apparently I forgot to actually post what I'd written in response D: I'll try to sum it up here.
I definitely agree with the others in that it's very deep and dark; just the sort of thing I like, really. You've probably seen from my own two updates that I like to properly imagine what a world with Pokémon would truly be like to live in, and I think you've managed to pull that off very well. I'm also very much looking forward to Random shenanigans. :p
I haven't really gone into the darker side of things just yet, since I mostly save that for Nuzlocke runs, but I'm tempted to introduce an element of it to my own Scramble :D