Umm...I think it looks about right. The last turn should have pictures though, FNT next to Mamoswine, and technically Infernape at like 3% about to faint depending on when LO recoil kicks in. Other than that I think its fine.
i would asume introducing them when they come. i just thought it'd seem like a really unique warstory to have it unfold for each player. and ermm..it's an old battle and the team changed.
but..jolt/azelf/gon were choiced..though you thought jolt was life orbed since you weren't looking at the bar. heatran was life orbed, but it died right away so that doesn't matter. infernape was life orbed. and starmie was..life orbed. that team was a tad too offensive, wasn't it? and i'll start my half in a little bit. i'm going to bed now. most likely tomorrow/monday.
Spoiler tags seems like a good idea. Sprites and percentages after each turn as well. As for leftovers/life orb, do we want to introduce it then take it out, or just list at the start of the battle. Although since we are doing spoiler tags introducing then taking it out probably makes more sense.
Extending from that, which of your pokes have Life Orb / Leftovers? Since Pokemon Online logs do not display recoil from Life Orb or healing from Leftovers in the log.