Hi, we are matched up in the Magic tournament. When are you available to play? I can play in the evening on weekdays, exact times depending on the day (class schedule varies). I will be out of town (going to GP Lincoln =D) starting Friday, however.
Your correction would fix my concern, yes. I cannot respond in the poll thread because no discussion is allowed there. Passive voice is fine grammar, which is why I slated it, but as you have it now it's very easily confused as a sentence fragment when it is in-fact a very strange use of the passive voice. I will probably hold a special poll afterward to see if the community is OK with making your fix.