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  • mm, probably going to be pretty busy today, and in the coming coming weeks with x-mas/new years/traveling... I'll try to be there as much as I can, but it's hard to promise much... :S
    mmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmi don't know, i guess.
    my mom, dad, and sis are all american citizens from their tests. i dont have to take the test, i just gotta wait or something until they make me one(meaning, no test, just free american citizenship). but i'm okay, anyways
    the hell.
    i aint american.
    i am the only one in my family without an american citizenship.
    spainftw
    its aight tho.
    im drawing that aipom whilst listening to the Majora's Mask theme.
    quite fucking awesome, Australian sir.
    that would be great man! feel free to do whatever you want for it; maybe something about uturning/volt switching since it's the premise of it but really you're the artist haha. thank you so much!
    I couldn't really decide about the second, I'll change that.

    The first is correct though. You can use semicolons in lists instead of commas in places where a stronger form of punctuation is needed.

    I have a cake that has three colors; red, blue, and green.

    I have a cake that has three colors; red, which is on top; blue, which is in the middle; and green, which is at the base.
    Thanks for the GP check! A few things though:

    Firstly, you need to include a key. Red is deletions, and bold is additions, right?
    You need to point out punctuation changes. I don't want to have to comb through the analysis to find the red period you didn't point out.
    Hidden Ability is the correct term.
    The subtle nuances that separate colons from semicolons are kinda difficult to explain, but semicolons are generally used when linking two clauses that, contextually, are not related.
    Lastly, a Dream World section is not needed if the ability has been released.

    You're right about immolate though. Kinda surprised me there :)
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