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(Archive) Small Objective Changes Thread

http://www.smogon.com/bw/articles/bw_gravity

In the "Gravity Users" section, in the analysis for Forretress, the word "get" is repeated, probably as a result of a typo.

Generation V Guide to Gravity said:
This is really useful, as Forretress can set up Gravity then Volt Switch out, using its defensive stats as a shield to get get your next Pokemon in safely, ready to abuse Gravity.
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There should be only one "get."

Also, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Defensive Teams," there is a comma which is not followed by a space.

Generation V Guide to Gravity said:
Hippowdon can use its massive bulk to check the many physical sweepers in BW,such as Excadrill.
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There should be a space after the comma after "BW."

In addition, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Offensive / Balanced Teams," there are two words without a space between them.

Generation V Guide to Gravity said:
Toxic also helps weaken opposing weather inducers such as Ninetales and Politoed, letting youcontrol the weather.
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There should be a space between the words "you" and "control."
 
Oh, and here's another one in the same article:

Generation V Guide to Gravity said:
As a Fire-type, Heatran also serves as an excellent check to Pokemon such as Scizor and Celebithat can cause problems for this team.
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There should be a space between "Celebi" and "that."
 
Another one in the same article:

Generation V Guide to Gravity said:
Sandstorm also helps shut down any opposing Pokemon that might try and change the weather—once they have been sufficiently weakened,a Choice Band Pursuit can often cripple them enough to prevent them from switching in again.
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There should be a space after the comma after "weakened."
 
Professor Lamb said:
http://www.smogon.com/bw/articles/bw_gravity

In the "Gravity Users" section, in the analysis for Forretress, the word "get" is repeated, probably as a result of a typo.
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fixed

Also, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Defensive Teams," there is a comma which is not followed by a space.
Click to expand...
fixed

In addition, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Offensive / Balanced Teams," there are two words without a space between them.
Click to expand...
fixed
There should be a space between "Celebi" and "that."
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fixed

There should be a space after the comma after "weakened."
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fixed
 
Alright, well here are a few more in the same article.

Generation V Guide to Gravity said:
Durant has great Attack,Defense, and Speed stats, but the remainder of its stats are well below average, which means that it may require some careful prediction to get in safely.
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There should be a space after the comma.

Generation V Guide to Gravity said:
Eviolite boosts theDefense and Special Defense of NFE Pokemon by 50% each, and withDusclops's already impressive defenses, makes it exceptionally hard to take down. Those impressivedefenses let it switch in on Excadrill, one of the best Rapid Spinners in the game, survive two Earthquakes, and then use Pain Split to heal its health.
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There should be a space between the words "the" and "Defense," "with" and "Dusclop's," and "impressive" and "defenses."

Generation V Guide to Gravity said:
Hidden Power Ice nails Gliscor, which,again, can fire off Swords Dance-boosted Earthquakes that can be tough to switch into.
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There should be a space after the comma.
 
"Despite the sheer threat presence this set has, it can useless against most other things still be stopped by most dedicated physical walls - other Arceus, Lugia, Skarmory, and Giratina."

some grammar errors in exteme killer set, last paragraph.

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/arceus-normal

also the virizon analysis states "If one wants Virizion to act as a mixed sweeper, a Work Up set is a viable option" even though it's alrady listed as one of the options

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/virizion/ou
 
ssbbm said:
"Despite the sheer threat presence this set has, it can useless against most other things still be stopped by most dedicated physical walls - other Arceus, Lugia, Skarmory, and Giratina."

some grammar errors in exteme killer set, last paragraph.

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/arceus-normal

also the virizon analysis states "If one wants Virizion to act as a mixed sweeper, a Work Up set is a viable option" even though it's alrady listed as one of the options

http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/virizion/ou
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fixed, thanks
 
Cobalion's counters selection last paragraph said:
Thanks to its Fighting-type resistance, Unaware Quagsire ingnores Cobalion's stat boosts, can survive several hits, and KO it with STAB Earthquake.
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Page found here.
 
not sure if this deserves a separate post or something so sorry if i'm doin it wrong, but i found another error:

credits page

ShinyAzelf
Wrote several Diamond/Pearl Pokemon analyses.
Was a driving force behind clearing out the Little Cup Diamond/Pearl Wrote several Introduction to GSC Statusearl Pokemon analyses sub-forum.
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not sure what this is supposed to say, haha
 
@sirndpt: removed the GSC thing. The closest thing I can relate that to is this, which probably has nothing to do with ShinyAzelf. So, changed it back to the original >.>

No idea where the GSC is supposed to go to though. Don't remember seeing it elsewhere.
 
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