CAP 27 - Part 12 - Pokedex Submissions

[King Of Moths]

Final Submission

Astrolotl, the Radiant Pokémon

Sword: This Pokémon is rumored to have come from space. Its flames are released in powerful bursts that radiate with solar energy.

Shield: Astrolotl is popular in nighttime shows and celebrations. Shooting into the sky, it releases balls of nitrogen that explode in eye-catching displays.

 

[Quanyails]

Disqualifications:

• King Of Moths: Incorrect use of prepositions in the phrases "radiate with" and "explode in".
• Krazyguy75: Missing comma before "and" in Sword entry, questionable use of "who" as a relative pronoun for a Pokemon.
• Shadowshocker: Inconsistent use of "it" vs. "they" in Shield entry.
• tiernothebeast: Questionable use of the adjective "innate", missing verb in the clause "able to regrow an entire arm in a week".

The rest move on!

Thanks to Estronic and Hematite for their help in GPing these entries!