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Dhjona's Fakedex

DiamondDust said:
I would be overjoyed if you made a poison, steel, or fighting eeveelution.
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I'll see what I can do.;)

XandZero2 said:
I think you should put the Left Peakid's beak on the Right Peakid and it wold look great. I like the right one, minus the beak that looks like a nose, so if you switched the beaks, I think it would look better.

As for an Eeveelution, I request a Flying type one. I want a Pure Flying that's not a Pokemon with Multitype, darnit. *cougharceuscough*
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I will do that, and see of Peakid get's better.

A flying type eeveelution would probably look like a Hippogriff. But i will see what i can do. ;)

Alchemator said:
These are great! I can't wait for you to do more!

They're so good that I felt the urge to draw one of them... You might say it was a failure though :(

(If you're curious: http://i306.photobucket.com/albums/nn259/Alchemator/Picture004.jpg, I'll let you guys try to guess what it is <.<)
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Uhm.. what i can say more than.. thank you. ^^

DiamondDust said:
It looks like a rock typed rhydon with a wooden penis.
Oh haha I get it, WOOD =/
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LOL.^^




more rates maybe?
 
I changed Peakid, but which one is better now? Only the wings and tail are different on the right sprite.


rates?
 
It looks great, honestly. The only problem I have is that it's the same pose as Peakid, which I find kinda' boring. Otherwise, great lineart.
 
your totally right on that one. i'm not gonna change it though, but promise you that his evo will have another pose.;)

more rates?
 
Pretty good, I think they all look very well made. Syphone looks like it has Riolu's head (closer inspection says no, but from where I'm sitting it does). The reason people think Syphonia is Gyarados is because they both have the fin-thing on top of their head and the yellow scales on their belly.

The only pokemon that stands out to me is Bunneggi. It just doesn't fit in with the rest of the pokemon. I think it is because of the "clothing" it has, or the huge eyes. Either way, it looks like it belongs more in Digimon because it has the crosshatch thing that looks like clothing. You could change it to a different colored fur, and I'm sure it would look more pokemon-esqe.

That's all I have to say, great job, though.

Edit: Also, in the games they typically add Eeveelutions in twos, and if you want to keep up that tradition, might I suggest a Fighting-type? It would be a great pairing with the ghost type.
 
b O.O d said:
Pretty good, I think they all look very well made. Syphone looks like it has Riolu's head (closer inspection says no, but from where I'm sitting it does). The reason people think Syphonia is Gyarados is because they both have the fin-thing on top of their head and the yellow scales on their belly.
Thank you. And the thing about gyarados, i all ready thought that that was the reason.;)

The only pokemon that stands out to me is Bunneggi. It just doesn't fit in with the rest of the pokemon. I think it is because of the "clothing" it has, or the huge eyes. Either way, it looks like it belongs more in Digimon because it has the crosshatch thing that looks like clothing. You could change it to a different colored fur, and I'm sure it would look more pokemon-esqe.
It is not clothing, it's supposed to be an easter basket with a easter egg in it.^^ but thanks for your honest critism, i shall see what i can do with it.;)

That's all I have to say, great job, though.

Edit: Also, in the games they typically add Eeveelutions in twos, and if you want to keep up that tradition, might I suggest a Fighting-type? It would be a great pairing with the ghost type.
i'm thinking about it, but what do you have in mind how it should look like.
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see the Bold above.
 
update time. Peawk is finished.


which one is better, left or right? also please explain why your choice is better and say if you like peawk or not. thnx in advance.
 
I personally prefer the left. Its head color provides more contrast to the pink than the brown does in the right one; the left's brown chest color also contrasts nicely with the dark gray head color.

There are just a few changes you could make to improve it. If the wing stripes on the left one were the dark gray head color, they would stand out more. I also notice that you shaded the tail feathers on the left but not on the right. They definitely need shading, but just the base color and the shadow color should do the trick. The way you have it now makes them look cylindrical. Also, in my opinion, it looks equally as good with or without the colored wing tips.

As far as lineart goes, you need to fix the wing it's favoring. I assume that it's supposed to be folded, but the way it's drawn, Peawk's actually holding it out from its body rather than tucking it against it. Another problem is that its right foot is noticeably larger than its left. The last thing I noticed is that you need to add black into more parts of its outline, especially to its feet.

Overall it's nicely done, but I'm sure you could have given it a different pose than Peakid.
 
Headpunch said:
I personally prefer the left. Its head color provides more contrast to the pink than the brown does in the right one; the left's brown chest color also contrasts nicely with the dark gray head color.

There are just a few changes you could make to improve it. If the wing stripes on the left one were the dark gray head color, they would stand out more. I also notice that you shaded the tail feathers on the left but not on the right. They definitely need shading, but just the base color and the shadow color should do the trick. The way you have it now makes them look cylindrical. Also, in my opinion, it looks equally as good with or without the colored wing tips.
I did not shade the right tail feathers on purpose. It's now just as Starly or Staravia has. And i wanted to know which shade on the tail feathers was better.;)

As far as lineart goes, you need to fix the wing it's favoring. I assume that it's supposed to be folded, but the way it's drawn, Peawk's actually holding it out from its body rather than tucking it against it. Another problem is that its right foot is noticeably larger than its left. The last thing I noticed is that you need to add black into more parts of its outline, especially to its feet.
Your totally right about the wing it's favouring. And about the right foot, i noticed it too, but at that time i wasn't in the mood to change it.^^ But i will change all the critics you point out. Thanx it is very usefull.;)

Overall it's nicely done, but I'm sure you could have given it a different pose than Peakid.
I know.^^ But his evo will have another pose.
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See the bold above.

More people who have critism on my Peawk?
 
So far, it all looks awesome.
Except Bunneggi. It just looks waaay too cartoony. Also, the reason the basket looks so much like clothing is because its leg is in front of it. Overall its just... ick...
Other than that, the Dex is pretty good. Although, Aggron's head on Ferrex is too obvious.
 
Well, i'm back and ready to sprite some fakemon. :D ^^


here is a fakemon i made for a contest, where you had to retype a pokemon into Halloween style.
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i still have to warm up from the long stop, but will as soon as possible post a new sprite.
 
I sough you before on serebii with that awesome thunderwolf :p
But I think the gyarados-look-alike-familyy is a sprite from aquakip?! I'm pretty shure I think
 
I totally love them specially the syphon evo line, they are incredibly well done.

also, about eevee evo line, i guess you'll add much more, what about a rock type there like rockeon, like dog/lion made of rocks.

i love also the scogon, dragonice and panthigris, so well done. xD
 
nice repose.

that is pretty cool, love your fakedex, the pokes look pretty cool, though you could,ve made the aggron head a little less obvious
 
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