you didn't even consider any of my fixes............... not even the most simple ones like 'Pokemon'.......
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<@Hipmonlee> those seem like good suggestions
<@Hipmonlee> reading over it
I hope this will actually encourage you to at least read and consider some...
I did read them and I think they are good. I just haven't had a chance to update it yet. Check when I last edited the OP. The analysis has been shoddy for months, what's another day?
SubChomp has to be sorted into Bright Powder and Salac. Bright Powder Garchomp is trying to take advantage of Sand Veil to gain free turns, SubSalacChomp is using Substitutes to activate Salac Berry to sweep. The item isn't a minor change, they play completely differently.
I've already addressed this. Both sets are using substitute and sand veil to their advantage. BOTH sets are using substitute to get free turns, BOTH sets are using substitute to get free swords dances. An extra 8% of luck compared to a speed boost is entirely a style preference. You are subbing solely to get an SD in at some point. There is no difference other than the choice of: do you want to sweep by outspeeding things or by having a sub up?
Also, the SubSalacChomp set needs an EV spread of 60 HP / 248 Atk / 200 Spe with a Jolly nature. If you do keep the set how it currently is, at least give it 30 Spe IV to have Salac activate after three Substitutes.
This EV spread is clearly already in the analysis. Did you even read it?
An item change is not necessarily a minor difference. Why are both Garchomp and Heracross separated into Band/Scarf sets? It's just a "style change", whether you'd like more speed or more power. Why do you think Bulky Gyarados and Life Orb Gyara are separated into different sets? It's just a "style change", whether you'd like more offensive capabilities or can take hits better.
Once again, I've already addressed this. CSChomp and CBChomp (and Heracross too) are played completely differently. The scarfers are used exclusively as revenge killers while the banders are used to dish damage out. The CBers are played recklessly while the scarfers use opportunity to their advantage.
I agree with Chris. Even if it is Opinions, saying things like "Garchomp is without question the best pokemon in OU." is too subjective. We can all agree that "Garchomp is a top-tier OU, perhaps THE best Pokemon in OU.", but to state it like fact is going too far. I always will prefer Lucario for a Swords Dancer for the simple fact that it gets Extremespeed and Bullet Punch so it will not be revenge-killed as easily.
All statistical and empirical evidence point to Garchomp being the best pokemon in OU. Preference is fine for team building, but this is a GARCHOMP analysis, not a team building guide. Every pokemon guide hypes the pokemon up, and guides for the shitty pokemon tell you how shitty they are.
"If your team is not prepared for this set with at least two "counters", you will lose an overwhelming majority of your matches." is also an exaggeration. Look at two of the most recent successful teams, husk's and ipl's offensive teams, or even Aldaron's offensive team many months back. Did any of them have Garchomp counters? No, they just brought it down with sheer offense and speed, all three of their teams were very successful.
husk and ipl both had pokemon faster than Garchomp that could hit it hard. Using revenge killers is how offensive teams counter things. If you actually looked at husk or ipl's teams you would realize that any smart player using garchomp is going to get at least one kill, reiterating the need for at least two pokemon that can beat it.
I think this analysis needs to be redone, more professionally and objectively. The current analysis does not emphasize Garchomp's power enough, but yours over-emphasizes it.
Once again, my analysis only hypes Garchomp in the opinions section and the sd set (the best set in ou). If you looked at other analyses you would realize that mine is tamer than most of them (i.e. Kyogre). Analyses are always subjective, lol. Unless you can say something more than "unprofessional" I am not buying that argument since I think it would be both unprofessional and irresponsible to not hype Garchomp in its ANALYSIS.
But not an absurdly excessive amount!
It's not an absurdly excessive amount. In case you guys didnt notice I cut a large portion of the analysis out because I didn't touch it. The only sections with anything that could be considered as hype are the SD set and the Opinions section.
analogy to your flygon analysis and to the gyarados analysis
I'm not comparing garchomp to anything specific, nor am i doing it in nearly every section. Garchomp is better than Gyarados so of course it should be hyped more.
I don't hype Garchomp for "half of the analysis". If you paid attention, there are about 5 total sentences that hype Garchomp at all.
I'll update it tonight and I'll edit this post when I do so that you guys can keep commenting.
edit- its updated