Landorus-T (Double Booster set)

#27
Very minor thing, and someone from GP can correct me if I'm wrong, but

Alternatively, Landorus-T can simply opt to run max Speed with an Adamant nature to outpace Adamant Lucario and Timid Heatran without a boost, (AC) at the cost of bulk.
seems to flow better and be clearer.
 

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#28
@Nutrix, although I'm not an official GP member, I suggest that the comma shouldn't be there. I know it seems awkward to have such a long sentence without a comma, but the comma that you placed seems to break the flow of the sentence and isn't required. Correct me if I'm wrong or missing something though.
 

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#29
Very minor thing, and someone from GP can correct me if I'm wrong, but



seems to flow better and be clearer.
Sorry, but that comma doesn't need to be there. Something along the lines of, "Alternatively, Landorus can simply choose to run 252 EVs with an Adamant nature, allowing it to outpace Adamant Heatran and Timid Lucario at the cost of some bulk."

Stolen from Jukain.
 

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