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[Rmt] I will try it again

eipa

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@Lefties
impish
252/252/0/0/0/4
~Steal Rock
~Ice Punch
~Waterfall
~Earthquake
My Lead. It should lay first stones, then strike.
I did it because of its reliability and the high attack value as a starter made to me the same major problems of the neck to hold.


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@LO/ Sash
adamant/Hasty
4/52/0/252/0/204
~Grass Knot
~CC
~Nasty Plot
~Fire Blast
A typical Special Swepper. It is, despite its low Stayingpower by Sash and endure a blow up.
I have taken it, because it certainly is a strong Pokemon.


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@Lefties
calm
252/0/0/0/252/4
~Cm
~Moonshine
~IB
~GK/HP{fire/electric}

It is the defensive part of my team. It will boost a bit and then slam.
I´ve chosen it because it rocks @Shoddy!

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@Lefties
Bold
252/0/220/0/0/36
~Thunderwave
~Leech Seed
~Rest
~Grass Knot
It is also what defensive. It soltle the opponent miss a Hax properly and then stall.

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LO
adamant
4/252/0/0/0/252
~Chross Chop
~Ice Punch
~Thunderpunch
~Eq
There is also a Swepper. I have chosen because of its strength. I could also be a Porygon-Z with Trick + Choice Scarf take, please give me tips:)
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Mence
@LO/Yachi Berry
4/252/0/0/0/252
~DD
~Outrage
~Eq
~Crunch

To this end I have to say not much. it is the finisher in my team.


Pffft, has once again. I hope this is all the rules. If not: Please do not close immediately but please report what I've done wrong. I have the most use of the Google translated done, so you complain to if it ^ ^

mfg eipa
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I know I'd certainately like a little more information. Its difficult to rate when we have such little info on how you intend to use your Pokemon. Also Electivire should really only be used if you intend to make the most out of Motor Drive its ability. I would probably prefer Jolteon or Gengar. Apart from that it seems a staple team of staple pokemon in a staple tier. I might suggest that the team needs better synergy, but I think that type of thing is down more to the player than the rater. Hope I helped!
 
I would like to see a better presentation firstly. The EVs would look better with 252 Atk / 252 Spe, instead of 0/252/0/0/252/0

Also please dont use acronyms which no one uses, or just dont use them at all, while its easy to work out the move, its easier if the move is just there...

Nearly all your sets are different from the analysis, not necessarily a bad thing, but what are these reasons?


Nature of mence?
Why does it have crunch, SE Crunch = 160 Base power, neutral Outrage = 180 base power.

Have a nice day.
 
IB = Ice beam
CC= Close Combat
CM=Calm Mind
GK=Grass Knot
Eq= Earthquake
DD=Dragon Dance
I would like to see a better presentation firstly. The EVs would look better with 252 Atk / 252 Spe, instead of 0/252/0/0/252/0
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Wich Pokemon? Swampert?

I know I'd certainately like a little more information. Its difficult to rate when we have such little info on how you intend to use your Pokemon. Also Electivire should really only be used if you intend to make the most out of Motor Drive its ability. I would probably prefer Jolteon or Gengar. Apart from that it seems a staple team of staple pokemon in a staple tier. I might suggest that the team needs better synergy, but I think that type of thing is down more to the player than the rater. Hope I helped!
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Jolteon...hm...I´m going to use Gengar. Is this Set okay: ?
@Expert belt
hasty
0/100/0/156/0/252
~Shadow Ball
~Sub
~Focus Punch
~B00m/Hp{fire} / Hypnosis

Or should I use a Porygon-z with Trick & Choice Scarf?

mfg eipa
 
this is terrible. I dont understand what youre saying, the acronyms/abbreviations make no sense, and the format is awful. Edit it so its legible to human beings and then I will rate it. Sorry, but you didnt get it right on try number two. Look at other RMTs to see what is expected.
 
No, look in the RMT archive. there are also other bad RMTs in this forum, but they at least don't use these awful acronyms. Use the export to text option on Shoddy if you are too lazy to type the attacks/items. And Cresselia has Moonlight, the move Moonshine doesn't exist.
 
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