[Rmt] My first Team here

[eipa]

So, this is my first Team @Smogon. I can´t speak english very well, but I go and try to build a team...

Swampert
@Leftovers
impish
252/252/0/0/0/4
~Steal Rock
~Waterfall
~Ice Punch
~Eatrhquake


Mence
@Life Orb
adamant/hasty
4/252/0/0/0/252
~DD
~Crunch
~Fire Blast / Earthquake
~Outrage

Celebie
@Lefties
bold
252/0/220/0/0/36
~Thunderwave
~Leech Seed
~Rest
~Grass Knot

Electivire
LO
adamant
4/252/0/0/0/252
~Chross Chop
~Ice Punch
~Thunderpunch
~Eq

Infernape
@Sash/LO
0/64/0/252/0/192
~Close Combat
~Steal Rock/ Hp {ice}
~Tb / Gk
~ Fireblast

Cresselia
@Leftovers
Calm
156/0/0/102/252/0
~CM
~Moonshine
~Hp {electric}
~Physic

mfg eipa

 

[KnightoftheWind]

Descriptions much?

 

[eipa]

I can not so good English, so that I can describe what this POKE make. But I probiers times:

Swampert should interpret pebbles, and then just slam.

Mence is a normal Swepper, like Infernape and Electivire.

Celebi should paralyze the enemy and use Leech Seed, then it will stall.
Cresse is my biggest Staller, it will deal with Calm Mind boost, then strike

thx@ Google Transalator...


mfg eipa​

 

[Lee]

3. Have some actual words in your post beyond your six Pokemon and their moves. Not following this makes your post quite boring to read and rate. All Pokemon should have a good reason for being in your team anyway, so why not post that reason? If you are having trouble with this one, start by giving an explanation for each team member. Why are they there? What role do they serve? How do you get them in? Then, give an explanation of how you would open with the team and how you would go about using it. All of these things help people rate your team and allow us to offer more helpful advice.

This does not mean add one sentence saying "Standard x" or "all-around awesome" after each Pokemon. If you put thought into making the team, you can put thought into posting it.

I'm sorry, it's impossible for our raters to do anything with such small descriptions. If you PM me some more information, I'll help put it into better English for you and we'll try and work something out.