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You're right, I should put more elements into my next fusion.

Eevee/Teddiursa you say? I'll work on it soon.

It's a PNG file. The picture from the link looks a lot better than the one I posted for some reason.
 
NikLink said:
Just a heads up-my next fusion will involve an Ursaring and a Fuzzberry reference. Also why is your brother's sprite taken down from Photobucket?

@Lightning: It looks awesomely awesome. The only gripe I have is with the shading on the gray parts, though I don't know what you can do about it.

@Mordock: In both cases BOTH tusks look tacked on. You should scratch them, or the coneections. They are very good, btw.
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Wonderful. ._. I'm an Ursaring now. -sweatdrop-

I took it down out of the goodness of my heart so as not to humiliate him. But I should put it back up after the response my thoughtful apology got. =/

I'm currently working on a Mudkip scratch, and being veeeeery careful to make it look good. I've gotta put my talent where my keyboard is after all of this.
 
Teh_1337ness said:
Try Ursaring + Typhlosion.
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cool got it

EDIT:
Ursa.png

There's what I've done so far..... I still need to add some parts from Typhlosion..
 
LightningFusion said:
Random fake pokemon on deviantart that I thought looked cool and decided to try and do a pixel over sprite. I still suck at shading.

Original Picture by lydario

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Please critique anyone.
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Woah, way too much dithering going on here. Dithering should only be used to shade flat/gently sloping surfaces, and only in small amounts. All the dithering makes this look like a recolored GS sprite. (Dithering is where you use checkerboard pattern to shade your sprite).

Looks good otherwise. Try using darker outline colors.
 
On Tyursa's right shoulder (from his point of view), you probably could've made it appear that the flame was behind his shoulder, not sitting on it. That would've looked better.

Other than that, great sprite.
 
Actually, I'd say the outline of that is very good. No glaring mistakes that I can see. The only thing I could really fix was that foremost leg. Thin down
the front part of the thigh area of that leg by one pixel, and lighten the outline color to your lightest outline color. Extend the the rear part of the leg up into the body of the sprite for a couple of pixels, including the single line of shading that goes with it.

The only other thing I have to say is lighten your highlight colors. It's hard to differentiate the highlights from the main coloring as it is now, and it makes the sprite look a bit flat.
erzjgm.jpg
 
TVboyCanti said:
Actually, I'd say the outline of that is very good. No glaring mistakes that I can see. The only thing I could really fix was that foremost leg. Thin down
the front part of the thigh area of that leg by one pixel, and lighten the outline color to your lightest outline color. Extend the the rear part of the leg up into the body of the sprite for a couple of pixels, including the single line of shading that goes with it.

The only other thing I have to say is lighten your highlight colors. It's hard to differentiate the highlights from the main coloring as it is now, and it makes the sprite look a bit flat.
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Like so?
Scratch1-1.png

Thanks a bunch for the critiscism, though.

This little Mudkip was pretty hellish to make. I have a newfound respect for you and Headpunch for being so good at scratching. @_@
 
Fuzzberry.png

Hat goes on ear durr. Also Mudkip's head's shading (still) looks too flat. But seriously man that lloks very good for your (enventual) first.

P.S: NO I AM NOT GIVING UP ON THE BEAR THING (it was a justified action though)
 
ROFL. I think Lopunny would have been funnier though. And the tail on the last one would look more connected if it was brown.

@Fuzz: Check out the example I put up to see how I think that front leg should look. And I'm glad you appreciate now how easy fusions are compared to real spriting. But I hope that makes scratch spriting that much more rewarding.
 
NikLink said:
Fuzzberry.png

Hat goes on ear durr. Also Mudkip's head's shading (still) looks too flat. But seriously man that lloks very good for your (enventual) first.

P.S: NO I AM NOT GIVING UP ON THE BEAR THING (it was a justified action though)
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Head still flat. ._. Will fix. Thanks a bunch.

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Scratch1-2.png

Getting better?

About the bear thing...I'm flattered and laughing my ass off at the same time. XD Nice call on the Buizel. I love the lil' orange guys. For the "what I really am," I see...Ursaring, Salamence, Blaziken, Metagross, Deoxys, Charizard, Salamence, and...Gallade?

Now I'm a child-eating, fedora-wearing, MONSTER BEAR! -insert evil laghter here-
 
Fuzzberry said:
Head still flat. ._. Will fix. Thanks a bunch.

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Scratch1-2.png

Getting better?

About the bear thing...I'm flattered and laughing my ass off at the same time. XD Nice call on the Buizel. I love the lil' orange guys. For the "what I really am," I see...Ursaring, Salamence, Blaziken, Metagross, Deoxys, Charizard, Salamence, and...Gallade?

Now I'm a child-eating, fedora-wearing, MONSTER BEAR! -insert evil laghter here-
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Yeah that looks pretty much perfect. A thousand congratadulamnations to you.

Also, it's Ursaring/Charizard/Salamence/Gallade/Deoxys/Metagross/Blaziken/Mewtwo/Dusclops

EDIT: lol 69th post
 
NikLink said:
Yeah that looks pretty much perfect. A thousand congratadulamnations to you.

Also, it's Ursaring/Charizard/Salamence/Gallade/Deoxys/Metagross/Blaziken/Mewtwo/Dusclops
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-bows- Thanks, Nik.

Ahh, I missed the Dusclops. That's the eye, right? I couldn't figure out what that was from.

By the way, I was expecting some sort of pun along with the bear joke. Something along the lines of "Fuzzbeary." XD But maybe I'm paranoid.
 
It's finished! I didn't have the skills to fuse any more parts from teddiursa to Eevee without it looking bad -__-

It's here

There's something wrong with the PNGs on deviantart, so I can't img tag them.

Critique and Comment please.
 
Fuzzberry said:
By the way, I was expecting some sort of pun along with the bear joke. Something along the lines of "Fuzzbeary." XD But maybe I'm paranoid.
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You have to be more paranoid than you are now, actually. Look behind you.

Teh_1337ness said:
It's finished! I didn't have the skills to fuse any more parts from teddiursa to Eevee without it looking bad -__-

It's here

There's something wrong with the PNGs on deviantart, so I can't img tag them.

Critique and Comment please.
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Eevee-Teddiursa.png
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Compare and contrast. I think you placed the tail a bit oddly on your sprite. Also could you put the sprite her so I can put them side-by-side? (Put in on Photobucket directly from your comp)
 
Eevee-Teddiursa.png
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Eeviursa_2_by_Teh133ness.jpg

Don't shoot me for uploading a jpg, it was converted from a bitmap file.

They look close, except I didn't put claws. The tail on mine I probably should have put on closer to the body.
 
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