supermarth64
Here I stand in the light of day
AgentLym, the right head looks a bit strange, as it's looking upwards. It also seems to have a red eye and no eyebrows...
Heres my submission so far. I'm thinging about changing the leftmost head, it seems too boring right now.
That looks really good, but the head on the bottom right looks a bit too small compared to the other heads. Try making it bigger? Also, where's the fourth leg? o.OJust the line art so far:
From what I've seen so far, this one looks to me like the best one. I like how the feet are detached from the body. I sure hope someone can stick some good heads on this.
This is unfinished, but a preview of what I've created so far.
I have to be entirely honest, the heads are probably the most difficult part.
If anyone wants to burninate it by using what I've made so far and finishing it with their own work, by all means. I'll probably finish it up soon.
I tried using a 3/4th view, since a majority of Pokemon sprites seem to do that, anyway.
It looks pretty cool, but the right head looks a bit small, and the necks look too short. It looks really bulky though, which is amazing.
How does that look?
This looks really cool, I want to see it finished.
This is unfinished, but a preview of what I've created so far.
I have to be entirely honest, the heads are probably the most difficult part.
If anyone wants to burninate it by using what I've made so far and finishing it with their own work, by all means. I'll probably finish it up soon.
I tried using a 3/4th view, since a majority of Pokemon sprites seem to do that, anyway.
Very nice! Maybe you could make the head on the right's nose a little longer though? If you know what I mean.Well, I didn't get to enter to art part, so I'll enter the sprite section.
I think I'll try my hand at spriting some heads. I'm fairly new to spriting, having only started in Easter break, and feel kind of iffy about doing an entire sprite.
This is unfinished, but a preview of what I've created so far.
I have to be entirely honest, the heads are probably the most difficult part.
If anyone wants to burninate it by using what I've made so far and finishing it with their own work, by all means. I'll probably finish it up soon.
I tried using a 3/4th view, since a majority of Pokemon sprites seem to do that, anyway.
Wow Agent, this is amazing. I love the light effect on the cloud, at the base of the necks. Good Job!!!@ supermarth64
Well, the 'red eye' is supposed to be his mouth, and there is a little eyebrow showing from behind. (he's showing you his 'chin' :P) But, yeah, that was a little... obscure. But I think I fixed it. Thanks for the hint! :)
@ Doug
I took your advice and changed the position of the third head. Also, I fixed the tail up good! And, although you liked the body, I think I made it better, although I'd value your opinion on it!
@ Dragonzrule
I really like yours! How it's flying sideways and stuff is really neat! Great job!
@ Everybody Else
I updated mine! :D
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(Sorry for not including the shinys and stuff. I'll do that once I get a definitive sprite first. ;) )
Anyhow, I think it looks much better this way! But, it's not what I think, it's what you guys think, so send me some opinions! Thanks!
Easily the best one so far. But we're still pretty early here. Looks awesome!OLD-->
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(Sorry for not including the shinys and stuff. I'll do that once I get a definitive sprite first. ;) )
Anyhow, I think it looks much better this way! But, it's not what I think, it's what you guys think, so send me some opinions! Thanks!
ohhh! I really like the Wyverii, I especially I like the color choice you did along with the shading. I for one like the necks attached, and not looking like lightening; I could also be crazy though.
Initial draft. I'm really tired so i'll do more extensive work later on. I've checked this against all types of backgrounds to prevent that strange halo look against the lightning parts.
I'm not keen on doing an action pose for this particular design. The way it's set up could make it very easy for it to look too cluttered or make limb placement confusing. I'm also using pretty large heads which'll complicate action poses further but i'll make one if people want one.
Love this, but as the previous posters said, you should probably make the heads and limbs look more like lightning, like they are being created from within the cloud.
Initial draft. I'm really tired so i'll do more extensive work later on. I've checked this against all types of backgrounds to prevent that strange halo look against the lightning parts.
I'm not keen on doing an action pose for this particular design. The way it's set up could make it very easy for it to look too cluttered or make limb placement confusing. I'm also using pretty large heads which'll complicate action poses further but i'll make one if people want one.
I think this is amazing. I personally prefer that the heads aren't "made of lightning" because lightning doesn't just sit there outside of a storm cloud. It's just exploding air and that doesn't last. The electricity-looking heads and limbs remind me of Jolteon with its electricity-looking fur, which is why I think it works. The cloud body is perfect, too, and the whole thing looks in proportion and uncluttered. Great work. Definitely my favorite.Originally Posted by Fat Wyverii
Initial draft. I'm really tired so i'll do more extensive work later on. I've checked this against all types of backgrounds to prevent that strange halo look against the lightning parts.
I'm not keen on doing an action pose for this particular design. The way it's set up could make it very easy for it to look too cluttered or make limb placement confusing. I'm also using pretty large heads which'll complicate action poses further but i'll make one if people want one.