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Discussion in 'Smeargle's Studio' started by Swaggersaurus, Jan 22, 2010.
az the ring finger looks a little awkward on the kamina glasses, and the index looks a little long (or maybe that's just me??) but otherwise it's gr8!!!
keep up the good work buddy :))))))))
In MY art thread I've sometimes quadruple posted before people actually respond. But nontheless, I love your work!
No fucking way.
I've seen you dude, your hair is nowhere NEAR that awesome.
yeah i think you're right the index is too longggg
and yeah the ring finger is totally awkward but i just wanted to draw a hand in an awkward position so............
also wow guys ty and welcome to my art thread!!!!!!!
your comments make me feel fuzztansticc inside :fuzz: :fuzz:
bumpzors double post lol!!!!!
i wanna leave this like this but nj won't let me on account of how she is a racist i guess??
lol ur fucking laze
but its good so ill let ur laze slide
fixed the sketch and cleaned it up a bit and i guess i'm lining it now???
enjoying this very much!!
fuck that mesprit is amazing
Oh wow, that's the girl from the BW2 game right? Really good, but I can't say I expected any less from you. I've gotta say, If I were an artist I could never keep the quality consistent, especially since i'm impatient.
PS: Making Mesprit look cool is no easy feat, but you did it ♪
thanks guys, it really means a lot!!
and yeah it is the bw2 girl. grrr i wish she had a name already----!!
consistency is something i really struggle with haha, for sure. just looking back at stuff like azlocke im like "wow did i ever decide what style to do this in v_v". haha, oh well, you just have to keep on keeping on
i finished lining it:
Niiiice. I think the BW2 might end up being one of my favorites, design-wise.
Anyone else hate the BW2 boy's look though? I think it's the first time too (since every other PC has ranged from looking awesome to okayish). And that rival too... yeurgh.
i don't like the look of the male player character, but i really really like the rival design!!
i actually want them to switch the designs around... :x
it's weird haha my favourite part about this is the shoes v_v
this is at 25% though so i guess it doesn't rly do them justice!!
the little music notes near the ear buds might be the cutest fucking details in the world
this drawing makes me :that: much more excited to play bw2
mesprit's tails are perfect
and SWEET KICKS
just lights and finishing touches to go imo????
lol irdk why i'm posting this step-by-step OH WELL IT'S NICE TO HAVE THE THREAD ACTIVE HUH
"die with a hole in your breast"
this is at 12.5%
no i don't know what is wrong with me
[late] holy balls Az that Mesprit is so excellent. [/late]
The way its pink hair-tendrils look kind of like Cradily are definitely a funny touch, but the best part about it is definitely the loops in its tails. They look so smooth and refined, yet pretty natural at the same time. I also love the way they make Mesprit look like it's having fun (mirroring the female trainer) despite the fact that its right eye seems to be curved in a bit of an angry expression.
The female trainer is absolutely awesome as well, and while I definitely like her shoes the best part of that for me is easily the detail you put in concerning the music player (iPod, w/e). The earbuds and musical notes coming from them are excellent (I especially like the way she's holding them!) but the fact that the cord appears to loops around her entire body and then end at a mostly hidden (behind her hair) iPod in her pocket is just showcasing the incredible things that come with detail! I'm a huge fan of that picture.
As for the most recent one, I don't have too much to say, but I really enjoy the blending that the black appears to create between the heads! It's a cool thing to look at. The tiny person above the woman's head (who I didn't see for a few minutes!) is also pretty cool! Getting that amount of detail into something so small (though I'm assuming you did this on a larger canvas, haha) is pretty nice. :)
how long did that take you .___. the bleach one is so detailed ashodfi
also your mesprit one has gorgeous colors but her shoulder is pointy .___.
How have I NOT given this thread a luvdisk yet
wow, thankyou for such a detailed critique!!
the mesprit tails are definitely my favourite part, yeah
i actually thought the ipod or whatever (hahaha i dont know either!) would be too obscured by her hair which was a bit of a shame, but i'm glad someone noticed it after all!!
i'm rly digging this trainer (i hear rumours she might be called reina??) so it was rly fun drawing her
more pokegirl imgs to come, perhaps??
but yeah the big sketch mesh was on a huge canvas. that img is at 12.5% of the original size so that helps haha :) it's not rly half as nice at 100%... it's about 12.5% as nice...
wow i really appreciated this post hahaha it was nice to get some in-depth and well-considered feedback, ty agaion!!
tyvm!! it took about an hour i guess but it is really sketchy and not finished, so...!!
also i guess it is kinda pointy...
maybe when i finish it up i'll go back to that
idk but i am v grateful that you have now!!
anyway i have something to post so i'm just gonna post it OK here goes
Chapter 6 - The Fallen (Move your mouse to reveal the content)
Chapter 6 - The Fallen (open)
Chapter 6 - The Fallen (close)
ill give it an ok/11