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Grammar-Prose Team Queue (Past Generations)

Discussion in 'Archives' started by Komodo, Sep 19, 2010.

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  1. Fatecrashers

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    I finished this off.
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    I'm not sure if the content's alright, but Venomoth looks like it's written and ready to be added to the queue.
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    Yes, I suppose it looks fine, albeit a bit on the short side. I will add it to the queue.
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    I checked Shuckle. I didn't realize it hadn't been added to the queue, and thus apologize profusely.
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    Please try to be careful about that in the future. For that analysis particularly, you likely wasted your check because there were several substantial content issues. It's not 'against the rules' or anything, I just really don't want you guys wasting your own time.
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    Yeah, I was for some reason under the impression that the "Copyediting" tag meant that an analysis was on the queue. Stupid mistake on my part.
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    oops, i forgot to post here this afternoon -- in any event, oddish has been finished off by me so its ready for upload now!

    edit: i also finished cubone
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    checked cicada's first analysis, Uxie (Rain Dance support).

    let us pause for a second to honor this monumental achievement
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    4/4 on chesto rest kingdra

    and 2/2 on normal arceus
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    Can we add Skuntank (Trapper) to the queue please.

    I have received a request to grammar check it and would like to make sure that everything meets the site's approval before checking it.

    EDIT: And I also gave Bastiodon (Update) its first check on request.
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    This has been updated with your all's checks. Keep up the good work!
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    I checked Jirachi (Update) remember?

    I also checked Kabuto just now.
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    Second check for it done.

    also guys luvdisc this thread!
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    The OP should be updated.
    Yeah!
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    i finish bastiodon
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    Masquerain (Update) has been checked once.

    I think I essentially rewrote Shuckle but I think it was needed. If it's fine, it can be added to the queue (I'm fine with it myself).

    edit: well, more like 25% of it so it's not all too bad.
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    i finish venomoth
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