CAP 1 Smogon's First "Create a Pokemon": Reflections, Opinions, and Closing

Are You Satisfied with how the First "Create A Pokemon" Turned Out?

  • Yeah, I felt it was handled really well

    Votes: 147 42.5%
  • Well, it was alright, but a few changes need to be made

    Votes: 106 30.6%
  • No, I hated it

    Votes: 19 5.5%
  • I really liked it, but I think the pokemon is broken, so I'm going to be stupid and say no

    Votes: 43 12.4%
  • "Create A Pokemon?"

    Votes: 31 9.0%

  • Total voters
    346
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cooper you should also mod the next one this was one good project and the next will hopefully be as cool as this one
 
I wish I wa heard more, I'm telling you, an ability that swapped weaknesses and resistances (including Stealth Rock weakness) alongside Sill Swap would have been powerful.

I feel the order could be switched around a bit. Maybe figure a type and THEN design the creature. The competitive stuff should come last, most likely.

Ah well, I have over hundreds of Fakemon and moves already. If this can smhowfid its way to immortallity, I offer all my ideas... such as an electric/dark black sheep Mareep split evolution, amongst many others.
 
I wish I wa heard more, I'm telling you, an ability that swapped weaknesses and resistances (including Stealth Rock weakness) alongside Sill Swap would have been powerful.

I feel the order could be switched around a bit. Maybe figure a type and THEN design the creature. The competitive stuff should come last, most likely.

Ah well, I have over hundreds of Fakemon and moves already. If this can smhowfid its way to immortallity, I offer all my ideas... such as an electric/dark black sheep Mareep split evolution, amongst many others.

Lol, amazing. It's the kind of idea I can perfectly see Game Freak using on the next generation.
 
These are my suggestions for the pre-evo:

Height: 2' 0"
Weight: 23 lbs.

Base Stats: 45/70/40/70/40/65 (BST: 330)

Movepool:

Level:
- Leech life
- Leer
- Ice Shard
7 Focus Energy
10 Knock Off
15 Slash
19 Bite
24 Icy Wind
30 X-Scissor
36 Twineedle (why not?)
38 Night Slash

TMs/HMs:
TM06: Toxic
TM07: Hail
TM10: Hidden Power
TM13: Ice Beam
TM14: Blizzard
TM17: Protect
TM18: Rain Dance
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM28: Dig
TM31: Brick Break
TM32: Double Team
TM39: Rock Tomb
TM40: Aerial Ace
TM42: Facade
TM43: Secret Power
TM44: Attract
TM45: Rest
TM46: Thief
TM54: False Swipe
TM58: Endure
TM62: Silver Wind
TM63: Embargo
TM66: Payback
TM70: Flash
TM72: Avalanche
TM75: Swords Dance
TM78: Captivate
TM80: Rock Slide
TM81: X-Scissor
TM82: Sleep Talk
TM83: Natural Gift
TM84: Poison Jab
TM87: Swagger
TM89: U-Turn
TM90: Substitute
HM01: Cut
HM04: Strength
HM06: Rock Smash
 
These are my suggestions for the pre-evo:

Height: 2' 0"
Weight: 23 lbs.

Movepool:

Level:
- Leech life
- Leer
- Ice Shard
7 Focus Energy
10 Knock Off
15 Slash
19 Bite
24 Icy Wind
30 X-Scissor
36 Twineedle (why not?)
38 Night Slash

TMs/HMs:
TM06: Toxic
TM07: Hail
TM10: Hidden Power
TM13: Ice Beam
TM14: Blizzard
TM15: Hyper Beam
TM17: Protect
TM18: Rain Dance
TM21: Frustration
TM27: Return
TM28: Dig
TM31: Brick Break
TM32: Double Team
TM39: Rock Tomb
TM40: Aerial Ace
TM42: Facade
TM43: Secret Power
TM44: Attract
TM45: Rest
TM46: Thief
TM54: False Swipe
TM58: Endure
TM62: Silver Wind
TM63: Embargo
TM66: Payback
TM68: Giga Impact
TM70: Flash
TM72: Avalanche
TM75: Swords Dance
TM78: Captivate
TM80: Rock Slide
TM81: X-Scissor
TM82: Sleep Talk
TM83: Natural Gift
TM84: Poison Jab
TM87: Swagger
TM89: U-Turn
TM90: Substitute
HM01: Cut
HM04: Strength
HM06: Rock Smash
*warning sirens blast*

NO! NO NO NO! Unevolved Pokemon don't GET Hyper Beam or Giga Impact unless they were fully evolved in a previous generation!
 
Some advice to Hyra: I don't know if you've ever led a community effort before. But, if not, remember this -- you'll have to wear two hats on the next project. In one role, you are yourself -- posting opinions, making suggestions, and voting for stuff. You're used to that... you do it every day. But as the mini-mod you need to put aside your personal opinions and always try to act in the best interests of the community as a whole. Your ability to do the latter, will have a greater impact on the process than anything else. I'm sure you are up to the task. Based on your participation in this one, you seem to have all the right tools to be a good mini-mod. I look forward to seeing how it turns out. You have a lot of talented people behind you. Don't be afraid to lean on them when you're not sure what to do. Good luck!

Oh, don't worry. I want to increase community participation. Polls lend themselves to a read, click, leave nature (I've done this many times). My idea is to remove the polls so that people have to back their votes up with support. It adds to discussion. They can also change their minds, up until the time the "poll" closes.

Honestly, how many times have you guys been life "WTF? who voted for that option" when no one posted in support of it? I wish to remove this factor. It means more work for me, but it will lead to a better, more cohesive end result.
 
Oh, don't worry. I want to increase community participation. Polls lend themselves to a read, click, leave nature (I've done this many times). My idea is to remove the polls so that people have to back their votes up with support. It adds to discussion. They can also change their minds, up until the time the "poll" closes.
interesting idea, i can see it would have some advantages but i would advise against it on certen polls, manly the type polls where its just personal preference. i think that the first part of the type poll last time was good, but in the second take the top 2 from each poll and put each combo (6) + each individual type (4) for the next part of the poll.

Honestly, how many times have you guys been life "WTF? who voted for that option" when no one posted in support of it? I wish to remove this factor. It means more work for me, but it will lead to a better, more cohesive end result.

i do like the structure as it is, and am not fully convinced of this now model, but i do also see why you want the new structure it, however i see another way of going about geting people to considor the arguements, put something in the 1st post about reading trough the hole thread before posting, it will help a bit but still let those people who are not confident enough to/dont have the time to/cant explain their full arguement to have some say.

also i would surgest starting the art thread sooner, maybe straight after the type/s are chosen. the previous poll had to chose the abilitys before the sprites and now it has compoundeyes without propar compoundeyes.

also sorry about my spelling, its crap
 
I still don't see why someone would use LO and Substitute in the same set...it's not like the sub lets you set up anything, and in Sandstorm or something you're losing 16% a turn + 25% every two turns for subbing and having it get broken, you're only able to really get 4 hits in. Unless there's no LO recoil while behind a substitute? Anyway, I'd probably try to use a set like this:

Syclant @ Life Orb - Compoundeyes
Naive (+Speed, -Sp. D)
(144 Atk, 108 Sp. Atk, 252 Speed)
-Superpower
-Blizzard
-Earth Power
-Bug Buzz

EV's guarantee a OHKO on Blissey with SR+Spikes, or three layers of spikes, or really anything that gets it down to 75%. Maxed Speed, and Earth Power is for fires that would otherwise be troublesome. Walled by Steels as per usual, but Forretress really doesn't like Earth Power all that much (2HKO with Rocks, potential OHKO if they opt for Shed Shell over Lefties). Blizzard is for STAB and destroying things in general, and Compoundeyes helps that out.
 
I still don't see why someone would use LO and Substitute in the same set...it's not like the sub lets you set up anything, and in Sandstorm or something you're losing 16% a turn + 25% every two turns for subbing and having it get broken, you're only able to really get 4 hits in.
useing sub does not give you LO damage, you would only sub against something like blissey/cressy T wave or on a switch, not an attack that would break your sub.
Unless there's no LO recoil while behind a substitute? Anyway, I'd probably try to use a set like this:

Syclant @ Life Orb - Compoundeyes
Naive (+Speed, -Sp. D)
(144 Atk, 108 Sp. Atk, 252 Speed)
-Superpower
-Blizzard
-Earth Power
-Bug Buzz

EV's guarantee a OHKO on Blissey with SR+Spikes, or three layers of spikes, or really anything that gets it down to 75%. Maxed Speed, and Earth Power is for fires that would otherwise be troublesome. Walled by Steels as per usual, but Forretress really doesn't like Earth Power all that much (2HKO with Rocks, potential OHKO if they opt for Shed Shell over Lefties). Blizzard is for STAB and destroying things in general, and Compoundeyes helps that out.
ok several problams
1. you cant get earthpower and superpower on the same set.
2. aside from the evs its the same as mixant from the analersys.
3. relying on 3 layers of spikes is a bad idea, maybe make it so after switching in on a blizzard it 1kos? but you would probably need to take away lots off speed.

oh and umbrelarva, that looks fine, what about the stats?
and BTW cool avy
 
EV's guarantee a OHKO on Blissey with SR+Spikes, or three layers of spikes, or really anything that gets it down to 75%.
I just don't see why people would bother. Run Mountaineer and just accept Blissey as a counter. Running @Specs keeps you even more alive and doing more damage than LO and keep it around for some late-game sweepage as glass-cannons are meant to do.
 
I just don't see why people would bother (bliss is on 1/3 of all teams, bother.). Run Mountaineer and just accept Blissey as a counter (what does mounteneer have to do with it? compouneyes is not helping with bliss) . Running @Specs keeps you even more alive and doing more damage than LO and keep it around for some late-game sweepage as glass-cannons are meant to do (Cspecs is no where near as threaterning as LO it is walled by stuff like milotic and snorlax.) .
 
So....Hyra is obviously the next mod, I respect that. Is this on Shoddy yet, or no? I really want to use one. It works so well with my team. Oh and I compiled a list of possible next POkemon:
-My idea on Warlax. Just the desacription and Moves could be kept. I think if we were to give an option to make a move other than the two I made, it would get really broken.
-Marowak Evo. I think a lot of people liked Rocko's [My avatar]
-Farfetch'd evo. " "
-a Fire/Dragon type
-Ghost/Fire sounds awsome
-Mismagius evo
-Miltank/Tauros pre-evo
-Pinsir evo
-Sudowoodo Evo
-Absol evo
-Torkoal evo
-Stantler evo
-Spinda
-Zangoose/Seviper [If chosen you NEED both to go along with the rivalry]
-Sanslash
-others

I pretty much put a lot of UU/BL pokes in there. A lot are in need of Evos, cough*Farfetch'd*cough. And don't yell at me for posting this. I mean come on, we need a foundation for the next poll.
 
So....Hyra is obviously the next mod, I respect that. Is this on Shoddy yet, or no? no, doug is looking at wether he can do it I really want to use one. same It works so well with my team. Oh and I compiled a list of possible next POkemon:
-My idea on Warlax. Just the desacription and Moves could be kept. I think if we were to give an option to make a move other than the two I made, it would get really broken.
-Marowak Evo. I think a lot of people liked Rocko's [My avatar]
-Farfetch'd evo. " "
-a Fire/Dragon type
-Ghost/Fire sounds awsome
-Mismagius evo
-Miltank/Tauros pre-evo
-Pinsir evo
-Sudowoodo Evo
-Absol evo
-Torkoal evo
-Stantler evo
-Spinda
-Zangoose/Seviper [If chosen you NEED both to go along with the rivalry]
-Sanslash
-others

I pretty much put a lot of UU/BL pokes in there. A lot are in need of Evos, cough*Farfetch'd*cough. And don't yell at me for posting this. YELLLLL we do not start by saying "lets have a fly/fight farfrched evo" we vote on each part in turn. I mean come on, we need a foundation for the next poll.
no. we vote on the types next.
 
Did I say anything about types in that post? How can we make types when we don't have a Pokemon? Obviously they would have the first type the first evo has, but we can vote on a second. That list was a possible list for a poll on what to creat a new Pokemon on.
 
Did I say anything about types in that post? How can we make types when we don't have a Pokemon? (look go back and read ALL of the polls near the begining, sorry but you dont know what you are talking about) Obviously they would have the first type the first evo has, but we can vote on a second. That list was a possible list for a poll on what to creat a new Pokemon on.

i ment we vote for the types, then we chose if we want to make it an evo (probably not) then we choose everything else about it. like the one that worked.
 
Ok, So here's my thoughts and opinions on the actual pokemon.

Though I did not participate actively all the way through, I at least lurked on most of the polls and took in what was going on.

First to Coop, You handled it aswell as anyone really could the first time round, Some errors on you're part made a bit of a hassle of the actual moveset pokemon however You have to be congratulated on what you made.

Now onto the Pokemon. I feel like Common Sense was overidden many times on this pokemon, and though I was really excited with the start of it, I'm not to keen on the end result.

First of all, the Bug looks rather stocky and sharp, Something other drawings had over advantage over it. (JSC's is a perfect example, even though I voted for neither) (This is not shown in the lil mini sprite which does look awesome). Arm's look out of place into where they protude from the actual Abdomen of pokemon. Also the way the icicles come from the pokemon's back don't look right from both angles.

The abilities are poor for this poke to say the least. How are they Compound eyes? Look at other pokemon, and then look at this one, You notice that the eyes on this differ from a far greater deviant than between the others, As for mountaineer, it's about as useful as run away. The way I suggested it made is so much more, Alas I don't feel as the Ability is of any use, or how it relates to mountaineer.

Dex entries 2 and 3 are amazing, though they should be re-wrote to actually compliment each other. I feel Dex 1 overshadows other good choices, and the 100x stronger part just ruins it. If the pokemon is that frail in defences how can it be smased so easily?

How can you punch something without a hand? Posion Jab, yeah that's fair, the Fang, that's fair but Ice Punch? I feel the same way about Shadow Claw.
I feel that it should have Pursuit in it's egg moves, If it's as aggressive as the Dex points it out to be, then it'll chase it's prey till the end, It also seems to be a cannibal, so leech life should be a must move. Bug Bite should also be a given move, if it likes to bite and has fangs. I also thinks his egg group should be extended to monster, as that's how much it's painted as one. Maybe the Egg Group is added on Evo.

Trivial Info:

Dex: No 542
??? Pokemon
HT 4'6
WT 135.8lbs
(Footprint)?

Hold Item:
Icy Rock 4%

Base EXP
Medium Slow (Can't remember exact #)

Hatch Rate: 6,400 (Like Scyther, Pinisir and Hera)
Catch Rate: 43
EV's from Fighting: 1 Atk, 1 Speed

Locations:
Route 238, Cilager Mountain, Route 239


As for pre-evo, Dependant on what he looks like, i believe all fangs and slash's should be removed from his arsenal of choice, and thus Crunch striken from his Egg Moves.

I believe he should also not learn Sheer Cold as a move, or Bug Buzz (Evo Only). Pre-vo moves that he could learn instead. Harden, Headbutt, (Option of Zen Headbutt egg move).

How will he evolve? Generic level up? Item Evo? Move Evo? Happiness Evo? I'm gonna go for a level 31 Evo (Quite standard for 2 Evo Poke).

As for next mod, I'd like to try my hand and dabble in this, However if i had to choose someone, I would have to go for Doug, his commitment to his drawings and him constantly striving gives him my backing

Longest post whoo :D.

 
Agreeing with Ghandi on everything except for the Punch part. Metang/gross have similar arm-like appendages, yet they get the punches.
 
Agreeing with Ghandi on everything except for the Punch part. Metang/gross have similar arm-like appendages, yet they get the punches.

If you look at Gross, he does look like he has the somewhat basis of a fist (Notice the claw's to close) So it makes a fist, granted a very distorted fist but a fist none the less.

Syclant has a Spike Limb not a fist

And Eric thanks :D
 
Looking at Cyzir's original drawing, the arms look a lot like Metagross's. The only difference I see is that Syclant has 'slots' that shards of ice can come come up through.
 
Ok, so one hand is a spike, the other is a cannon (Notice the inverted fingers opening up for a hollow inside where ice is produce) Unless it can attempt to punch with those fingers, it's not really a punch at all (fingers closed would make it look like a peace symbol)
 
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