crustaceans freak me the FUCK out but i really like that lobstrosity it is like the most pleasant least pleasant thing. the kinda "dirty" shading and speckled highlights give the carapace (ok out on a limb here) a rly good impression of texture
i think you might have posted your second comic before but i still like it!!
also i don't give you feedback here half as much as i'd like but i get a lot of your drawings and sketches in my facebook feed so know that i always admire it all the same!!
I guess my advice would be to try to make your lines cleaner for your traditional works. It's hard to do but with a little more practice, you can do it! But yeah, you're on a good start! :)