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Yilx's just looks like more of a Pokemon to me, and I feel that it represents the typing and stat spread better (A piece of paper with 64/100/120 defenses?...).
But, Mos-Quitoxe, your design is amazing and I love it. Good luck to you two!
I feel like I'm betraying my first love by not voting Yilx's design, which I was rather excited for at first, but Mos-Quixote brought it home with his supporting material. It really helps people appreciate your work when you show how much thought you put into your design.