Grammar-Prose Workshop v6

[rahul_3301]

ok then I'll do one more and try to explain some of the not so obvious changes to make sure i am learning correctly and building my thought process

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Kingambit

Black Glasses + and Tera Dark should exclusively be used with Kowtow Cleave, (AC) as these propel Kingambit's offensive pressure; with 5 five Supreme Overlord boosts, Kingambit can reach feats like 2HKOing Dondozo with Kowtow Cleave and 1HKOing Walking-Wake along with OHKOing Walking Wake i felt that this sentence was structured weirdly, ig i would ideally break it into 2 but taking the previous suggestion of lateral change i think 'along with' or 'as well as' type bridge words can save it too and, (AC) at +2, (AC) Dragonite through Multiscale with Sucker Punch. Air Balloon allows Kingambit to setup set up on would be would-be checks in such as Landorus-T and most Great Tusks (RC) Tusk sets; (ASC) become a sturdy switch in switch-in to offense offensive threats like Kyurem, Roaring Moon, and Dragonite who that rely on their Ground-type coverage to hit it (is 'hit it' considered casual writing or not. maybe should be 'damage it') (RC); (ASC) and gain an immunity to Spikes that limits would otherwise chip Kingambit before it gets going. yeah this one was interesting, read up on comma lists vs semicolon lists and since this has phrases and its own commas i felt ASC was better. Kingambits Kingambit's offensive potential (this is probably my QC team speaking but elaborate on potential? ig not a GP thing though) and defensive utility in the late game late-game make it a nearly staple near-staple on offensive archetypes from bulky offense to hyper offense while still fitting on balance teams. Physical teammates like Ogerpon-Wellspring Ogerpon-W, Zamazenta, and Swords Dance Iron Valiant can overwhelm shared checks like Zanazenta Zamazenta, Landorus-Therian Landorus-T, and Dondozo. Dark Type Dark-type offensive threat threats in Darkrai (RC) and Samurott-Hisui can form a Darkspam Dark-type spam core with Kingambit to overwhelm Dark resists Dark-resistant Pokemon like Zamazenta, (AC) as well as Tera and tera Fairy users like Gholdemgo Gholdengo and Moltres together. okay this one felt like maybe i am overcooking but zama and tera fairy users x AND y, the double 'and' felt weird so separated those.

 

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Kingambit

Black Glasses + Tera Dark should exclusively be used exclusively with Kowtow Cleave, (AC) as these propel Kingambit's offensive pressure (RSC). (AP) With 5 five Supreme Overlord boosts, Kingambit can reach feats like 2HKOing a 2HKO on Dondozo with Kowtow Cleave, (AC) an on OHKO and 1HKOing Walking-Wake, (AC) and at +2, (AC) Dragonite through Multiscale with Sucker Punch. Air Balloon allows Kingambit to setup set up on would be would-be checks in Landorus-T and most Great Tusks Tusk, become a sturdy switch in switch-in to offense threats like Kyurem, Roaring Moon, and Dragonite, (AC) that who rely on their Ground-type coverage to hit it, and gain an immunity to Spikes that limits Kingambit before it gets going. Kingambits Kingambit's potential and defensive utility in the late game late-game nearly make it a nearly staple on offensive archetypes from bulky to hyper offense, (AC) while still fitting on balance. Physical teammates like Ogerpon-Wellspring Ogerpon-W, Zamazenta, and Swords Dance Iron Valiant can overwhelm shared checks like Zanazenta Zamazenta, Landorus-Therian Landorus-T, and Dondozo. Dark Type Dark-type offensive threat threats in Darkrai (RC) and Samurott-Hisui Samurott-H form a Darkspam Dark-type spam core with Kingambit to overwhelm Dark resists Dark-resistant Pokemon like Zamazenta and Tera Fairy users like Gholdemgo Gholdengo and Moltres together.

Tried another one!

 

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Chien-Pao

Chien Pao Chien-Pao appreciates Mandibuzz defogging away hazards to prevent teammates like Mandibuzz, whose Defog prevents it from being worn down by entry hazards (RP) It can also bring Chien Pao in safely using a slow U-Turn, (AC) while its slow U-Turn allows it to bring Chien-Pao in safely. Furthermore, (AC) Mandibuzz is a great switch in switch-in to Fighting Fighting-type attacks from enemies foes like Choice Scarf Sneasler and Choice Scarf Great Tusk, (AC) to which Chien Pao is extremely vulnerable. (AP) to (RC) (I'm not sure whether this constitutes rewording what the author is saying unnecessarily, but the phrasing felt quite clunky as I think it is split into too many sentences) Mandibuzz is also as well as being capable of checking set up setup sweepers like Azumarill or Scizor with Foul Play. In return, Chien-Pao deals with opponents foes like Sandy Shocks or Baxcalibur, (AC) that may who can cause problems for Mandibuzz. Kingambit has impressive offensive synergy with Chien Pao Chien-Pao due to its neutrality to Fairy-type moves, being able its ability to eliminate opponents foes like Hatterene with Iron Head (RC) and Choice Scarf Flutter Mane with Sucker Punch after rocks Stealth Rock. In return, (AC) Chien-Pao Chien Pao hits threats to Kingambit like DD Dragon Dance Dragonite, Iron Treads, Landorus-Therian Landorus-T, (AC) and defensive Gliscor.