Small Objective Changes - (Typos, Poor Wording, Etc.)

Oglemi

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#1
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The Dutch Plumberjack

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#2
http://www.smogon.com/dex/rs/pokemon/crawdaunt/
The Generation 3 NU analysis mentions a bunch of Pokemon that are banned in NU.
all done, although Crawdaunt looks to need a whole rewrite. Also the only Pokemon with a primary type as Flying are the Noivern line and Tornadus.
for what it's worth since there wasn't really a proper ADV NU metagame way back when (at least not one we were writing analyses for), pretty much all the ADV NU mons were given an "OU" or non-tier-specific analysis att. many pre-DPP analyses have some quirks like this, and other than full revamps it's better to just leave them be.
 

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#5
With the advent of Hyper Training in Pokemon Sun and Moon, the IV spreads are not necessarily indicative of the user's resulting Hidden Power.

Adding that extra information would therefore be a lot of busywork for very little payoff, as it's only relevant to non-Level 100 metagames.
 

Sondero

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#6
Magnet Pull, Arena Trap and Shadow Tag should say that 'ghost types' are unaffected by its trapping effect if applicable (starting gen 6)

http://www.smogon.com/dex/sm/abilities/magnet_pull/

http://www.smogon.com/dex/sm/abilities/arena_trap/

http://www.smogon.com/dex/sm/abilities/shadow_tag/
Perhaps another way to include that would be to add more descriptions to the smogdex entries for individual types?
This would include that...
 
#15
Thunder:
GS Onward - always hits in Rain
http://www.smogon.com/dex/sm/pokemon/palkia/

Set Details
..."Timid should be used on non-Sticky Web teams, but Palkia should only be used on Sticky Web since it's the only environnment where it excels. Psychium Z is mandatory to power up Heal Block into Z-Heal Block, which boosts Palkia's Special Attack by +2."

should be spelled "environment"
did

Not sure if this is an intentional choice to keep things succinct, but the Grassy Terrain description entirely lacks the effects it has on Ground Moves and what it does to Nature Power etc. Brevity is important but at a bare minimum I think it needs to mention the ground damage reducing effect.

http://www.smogon.com/dex/sm/moves/grassy_terrain/
those effects are already listed on the individual move pages; however, you bringing this up helped me realize that the Nature Power and Secret Power descriptions for previous generations were inaccurate. Thanks!
 
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Zard97

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#16
http://www.smogon.com/dex/rs/moves/assist/
http://www.smogon.com/dex/dp/moves/assist/
http://www.smogon.com/dex/bw/moves/assist/

Assist can actually use:
- Roar, Whirlwind, Bounce, Dig, Dive, Fly, Nature Power, Transform in gen III
- Roar, Whirlwind, Shadow Force, Bounce, Dig, Dive, Fly, Nature Power, Transform in gen IV
- Roar, Whirlwind, Shadow Force, Bounce, Dig, Dive, Fly, Sky Drop in gen V
(all these according to bulbapedia so please check other sources to be 100% sure)(also it's very likely I missed something)
 

BM

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#20
Multitype's description should be edited to incorporate the effects of holding a Z-Crystal, and this is crucial for the likes of Groundceus, Bugceus, Ghostceus and Steelceus, as all of the analysis of these pokemon incorporate some sort of set which features a z-move. Something like this could work:

"Type changes depending on the held Plate or Z-Crystal. Prevents a held Plate from being removed."
 

DawnManeDuskWings

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#22
In Ubers Ferrothorn analysis I made some error when I was writing the analysis:
Magearna is also a reliable counter to Xerneas and is able to switch into Yveltal, which potentially threatens Ferrothorn with Taunt or Heat Wave.
Magearna can't realistically handle Yveltal with Heat Wave so I would say this should be changed to:
Magearna is also a reliable counter to Xerneas and is able to switch into Yveltal, which either overwhelms Ferrothorn with strong Dark Pulse or shuts it down with Taunt.
 
#23
https://www.smogon.com/dex/gs/pokemon/raichu/
https://www.smogon.com/dex/gs/pokemon/dugtrio/

GSC Raichu's "Support" moveset lists Encore and an option for Reflect, but Raichu can't have both Encore and Reflect on the same moveset in GSC without hacking due to Encore being learned through breeding and Reflect having to be learned in Gen I and transferred over with the Time Capsule. Similarly, Dugtrio's moveset lists Rock Slide and an option for Beat Up, which cannot be on the same moveset for the same reasons (Time Capsule → Rock Slide, Breeding → Beat Up).
 

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