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C+C please
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Most Humorous gooooo!
C+C please
OK, it was meant to look like Unown was attacking something.
Any faults with my sprites?This will (hopefully) eventually be my repose for WSC
100% scratched, my first repose. Please critique :)
@Arch: Very nice for a scratch repose, not enough shading though. Looks too flat, you need to curve the shading around the shape of the body if that makes any sense. Everything else seems good though, I like it.
@Alchemator: I swear you used Devolution Spray from the first Pokemon TCG set for that Seviper... As for the actual sprite, I'm not quite sure how the end of the tail got there, looks kind of weird to me, like it's coming out of nowhere.
@Politoed Hunter: The shading where the tail connects to the body on Persian-Z doesn't work. The base of the tail needs the same shade as the lower half of the body, and that shading should curve around with the tail appropriately.
Hehe I like the fridge Rotom. Not sure fridges have those massive black spaces though, but then again this IS a Pokemon. Although, do I see an outlining error at the top of the sprite? Looks like you overlapped the grey line segments.
Unown's done well but I don't think it's a Pokemon that'll net you any credit for reposing. Too basic imo, and the repose isn't even that different from the original sprite (and how can it be, it's Unown xD)This will (hopefully) eventually be my repose for WSC
100% scratched, my first repose. Please critique :)
@Arch: Very nice for a scratch repose, not enough shading though. Looks too flat, you need to curve the shading around the shape of the body if that makes any sense. Everything else seems good though, I like it.
@Alchemator: I swear you used Devolution Spray from the first Pokemon TCG set for that Seviper... As for the actual sprite, I'm not quite sure how the end of the tail got there, looks kind of weird to me, like it's coming out of nowhere.
@Politoed Hunter: The shading where the tail connects to the body on Persian-Z doesn't work. The base of the tail needs the same shade as the lower half of the body, and that shading should curve around with the tail appropriately.
Hehe I like the fridge Rotom. Not sure fridges have those massive black spaces though, but then again this IS a Pokemon. Although, do I see an outlining error at the top of the sprite? Looks like you overlapped the grey line segments.
Unown's done well but I don't think it's a Pokemon that'll net you any credit for reposing. Too basic imo, and the repose isn't even that different from the original sprite (and how can it be, it's Unown xD)
Thanks for the C+C, I'll make the changes soon.
BTW, it looks like Infernape is flipping us off. xD
Unown was 100% scratched, so I'm pretty proud of it. :3
D/P/P Unown sprite for reference:
I see a big difference. :/
Indeed I did overlap the outline on Rotom. By one pixel. xDSorry, I didn't mean to be harsh. Your Unown scratch is very well done. I was just offering my advice for getting into finals and getting votes.
Hehe, one pixel makes all the difference; you're a spriter you know that :)
I've completed an ice retype of Tyranitar...
Not my most creative piece of work, but I think it looks pretty cool. I've edited the original Tyranitar sprite where I can (eg. making head spikes/tail spike noticeably pointier/sharper) but hopefully I'll think of more edits later.
C&C will be highly appreciated, as usual! As well as the Infernape, I'm really hoping for some feedback there as my first repose.Sorry, I didn't mean to be harsh. Your Unown scratch is very well done. I was just offering my advice for getting into finals and getting votes.
Hehe, one pixel makes all the difference; you're a spriter you know that :)
I've completed an ice retype of Tyranitar...
Not my most creative piece of work, but I think it looks pretty cool. I've edited the original Tyranitar sprite where I can (eg. making head spikes/tail spike noticeably pointier/sharper) but hopefully I'll think of more edits later.
C&C will be highly appreciated, as usual! As well as the Infernape, I'm really hoping for some feedback there as my first repose.
Oh, no, you wasn't harsh at all. Thanks for the crit. Do you suggest making a different Pokemon repose for the WSC?
I'm thinking of doing my own Zombie series, I don't know if it's been done though, anyway here's my zombie Charmeleon.
One of my friends stated it should be a little green, would that be better?
that looks pretty good but yeah i definitely think you should use some more colors, dark green and maybe red would look good
zombie series. seems intresting. lets see. zombie's are indeed green combined with red. most of the time they have parts of flesh cut out or loose. maybe you can sprite that. bones are most of the time in this order of colour : Dark red -red -white/greyI'm thinking of doing my own Zombie series, I don't know if it's been done though, anyway here's my zombie Charmeleon.
One of my friends stated it should be a little green, would that be better?
also i'm suspecting a zombie charmeleon wouldn' have a flame right.
Hope you will finish this!!!
ps :how are you gonna make gastly/haunter/.. etc into a zombie. i wonder.
These are very cool Revolt, but they seem to be facing the wrong way? Also I'd still like more critique on my WSC sprites, and I don't know what is meant by a 'Devolution Spray' despite looking it up on Serebii lol.
Most Humorous gooooo!
C+C please
I get the feeling that MrBlack will win this one (again).
There is a reason I do that, I'm on xat chat's alot, so I make them face to the right, so I can make them into avatars, and it'll look better if you have a shadow thing for your xat account.
Ah right, cool.
Heeeeeeeeres KECLEBUFFET!
for WSC but i think it's to long and i already cropped some parts to the point that going even further will ruin the sprite . what should i do (don't say make another one)
BTW note to myself gengar is an horrible baseFor the WSC:
First fusion I've done in a while.
For the WSC:
First fusion I've done in a while.
Looks great, I'm getting completely outclassed here lol. Something I would do, however, is check that you aren't surpassing the height restrictions as it seems pretty big.
I'm also looking for a new style or spriting thing to try, since Wobbuffet is getting slightly dry and hardly anything reposes well.
Same, I'm looking for project / theme ideas as well. :/
Quilava repose from scratch.
CnC?
That shading by his neck made a HUGE difference, thanks. :3
How does the body shading look now?I am so incredibly pissed off right now
I entered this scratch sprite 1v1 competition
The guidelines were to make a Water/Psychic
I lost because the judge is "anti-tie" as he says, and he insists it would have been a tie had he not been anti-tie.
I want your opinion, the serpent thingy is the thing I made this morning, the squid thing is the other guy's.
Which is better?
I edited the Charmeleon as best I could, now it has cuts and if you can see, it has a little patch of flesh missing at the base of it's tail.
he's missing the flame...is that on purpose?
I think that's on purpose to be accurate.
When their flames go out they die.true, true...- Status
