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I entered this scratch sprite 1v1 competition
The guidelines were to make a Water/Psychic
I lost because the judge is "anti-tie" as he says, and he insists it would have been a tie had he not been anti-tie.
I want your opinion, the serpent thingy is the thing I made this morning, the squid thing is the other guy's.
Which is better?
Honestly, I can see a number of spots on your outline that could be smoothed out. Right now it looks jaggedy and rough. But the shading is as good as the other one.At a glance, I like the Shading on yours better since it is in accordance with the traditional Pokemon light source, whereas the other's LS is from bottom left. As a critique on yours, right off the bat the outline could use some tidying up. Aside from that, tho, I would make the Base Outline color darker. It looks like it's lacking an outline where the BOC is. I like both concepts tho.
Btw, Monarain says hi.
Back in the day I used to do a little bit of spriting.
Here is some of what I could Find.
Fusions
Recolors of Old Sprites into Advance Generation color Palettes.
From Scratch
Alright, here's my WSC entry so far. Looking for some C&C before I submit :) (Especially on the repose!!)
EDIT: I hope what I've done on the Metang claws is acceptable, I've left a darker shade of blue in the outline instead of using a shade corresponding to the grays... it just looked good that way.Alright, here's my WSC entry so far. Looking for some C&C before I submit :) (Especially on the repose!!)
EDIT: I hope what I've done on the Metang claws is acceptable, I've left a darker shade of blue in the outline instead of using a shade corresponding to the grays... it just looked good that way.
Wow nice mr black let's see . I don't think people will complain about the claws on the random mix. it's preferred not but it's okay. the ice retype is okay nothing to complain about .
the repose , while it looks good on first i have a little problem with the feet and the face . the feet are flat and i don't think any fighting pokemon has regular flat feet like that . and the face . well its just doesn't look like infernape's . on the body i have nothing to complain about . maybe a bit to thick but that's okay .Alright, here's my WSC entry so far. Looking for some C&C before I submit :) (Especially on the repose!!)
EDIT: I hope what I've done on the Metang claws is acceptable, I've left a darker shade of blue in the outline instead of using a shade corresponding to the grays... it just looked good that way.
The fusion and repose look fine, but Infernape's right arm looks off. Since the shoulder armor (or whatever it's called) is facing us, it makes it look like a left arm. And, yeah, there's also the feet thing Satyr mentioned.@Faze: It looks better. To be incredibly nitpicky, right next to the front fin could be rounded a bit more, but it's not really noticable with the new fin placements so you can leave it if you want.
Charizard repose:
I think I need more shading on the tail and body, but are there any structural issues?
It's been done... good job though.
Ice Type Torterra for WSC, comments?
Animation WOOT WOOT
Made in photoshop.
Made all 3 frames from scratch.
No CnC? D:
Looks awesome. My only suggestion is make the mouth more noticeable when its open (third frame)Charizard repose:
I think I need more shading on the tail and body, but are there any structural issues?
Looks pretty good. The only thing I'd reccomend would be to shorten the neck a bit. I don't think necks bend at 180 degree angles. Maybe you could cut a bit of bended area off or something. Not completely sure myself what to do here...
Still, I like the pose of the sprite. Very cool idea.
Yes, I like this one much better than the firstI've been doing some edits to Mizubi
People were saying to fins looked bad and the curves were a bit off, so I've been working on it.
Before:
After:
Improvement?
I figured Charizard's neck was serpentine enough to bend around like that. I tried shortening the neck a bit though, it's the one on the right.
If I go with that one I'll have to realign out the back and wing placement, but is that any better?- Status
