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Congratulations, Transcendent God Champion ! That is certainly dope.
What is the proccess of submiting the book to the editors like?
That is an awesome thing to accomplish, hope your carreer get even better from now on ^_^

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On a complete non-related subject: I can't help myself to stop self-sabotage.
I have a lot of things I want to write, but before I even start, I convince myself that it won't do any good or the idea is silly. So the day passes with me just scrolling memes and more memes.

One is a Death Note fanfic where a random guy kill politicians in absurd and gore ways -- I just have deep feelings of doing it myself, so I guess this would be a good way to deal with this stress.
The other is a screenplay of a sports series focused on soccer, as I am brazilian and I pretty much know some things about it. It would be a Captain Tsubasa without bullshit, I guess.

I write profissionaly because I am a journalism student and do some freelance works. It feels like this drains my inspiration and will to write for fun.

Anyone has ideas of what could I do?
 
Congratulations, Transcendent God Champion ! That is certainly dope.
What is the proccess of submiting the book to the editors like?
That is an awesome thing to accomplish, hope your carreer get even better from now on ^_^

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On a complete non-related subject: I can't help myself to stop self-sabotage.
I have a lot of things I want to write, but before I even start, I convince myself that it won't do any good or the idea is silly. So the day passes with me just scrolling memes and more memes.

One is a Death Note fanfic where a random guy kill politicians in absurd and gore ways -- I just have deep feelings of doing it myself, so I guess this would be a good way to deal with this stress.
The other is a screenplay of a sports series focused on soccer, as I am brazilian and I pretty much know some things about it. It would be a Captain Tsubasa without bullshit, I guess.

I write profissionaly because I am a journalist student and do some freelance works. It feels like this drains my inspiration and will to write for fun.

Anyone has ideas of what could I do?
All I can suggest is picking something to start, committing to a schedule, and then not letting yourself skip no matter how bad what you've written. If you're sufficiently embarrased use a pen name/alternant handle, but don't let quality deter you.
 
Quantum Tesseract The schedule thing is a good idea, I think I will do it starting next week :D
It is not much a matter of quality in my writing, as I believe I can develop thinags fairly well, if I convince myself it is not dumb sit down to write a fanfic or something. But it is a slow ride, I guess...
 
Not sure if this is the best place to post this, but I would like to make an important announcement:

5:32 PM (8 minutes ago)

"Congratulations! Your book, Purity Before Existence, has finally completed the publication process. It will be available on the Xlibris website for purchase within 3-5 business days. You will receive a sample copy of your book in 10-15 business days.

You will first receive an Author Proof Copy of your book. A notification email with a tracking number will be sent as soon as it is shipped out from our printer facility. If everything is satisfactory with your Author Proof Copy, please inform me, so we can start printing the complimentary and additional copies you will be ordering."

What is your experience with xlibris? There seem to be a lot of negative reports about them online, which raises questions over the quality of this company. You can google "xlibris scam" to see what I am talking about, if you have not done so already as part of your research on how to publish your book. Here is an example of an article you can find by doing such a search. I am not sure if or how much any of this relates to your situation, but I just thought I would make it known anyway.
 
I have received numerous requests from Xlibris via phone to pay them large amounts of money in exchange for various marketing services, but I have refused all of them. I am generally very careful when dealing with people, as you're probably aware, and do not like taking unnecessary risks.

But anyway, thank you for taking your time to bring that article to my attention (I have read it before though). And also... thank you for giving me so many ideas and sources of inspiration as I wrote this book. It would be absolutely unfair to say that many aspects of Purity Before Existence were not influenced by some of your fanfictional ideas. Also, just to let you know, one of your usernames, along with those of numerous other members of Smogon will be included in the Acknowledgements section of my book :)

Tell us about the book!

I have given some information about it in this post of mine. I will make a thread about my novel, and link to it in this thread once my book is available for purchase :)

Congratulations, Transcendent God Champion ! That is certainly dope.
What is the proccess of submiting the book to the editors like?
That is an awesome thing to accomplish, hope your carreer get even better from now on ^_^

Thank you very much.

The editing and publishing processes actually take far more time than I had initially imagined, which is why the book's release was delayed so much. I basically had to contact my editor and publishing company a lot via phone and email, in order to give them precise sets of instructions regarding how to do things, including designing the book's cover.
 
I've had a concept to write that I've been developing in my head since, like, April but I've been putting it off for months. I wanna try and work on it slowly but surely at some point and I'm thinking of writing it as either a gamebook or as a branching visual novel/text adventure (more likely the former rather than the latter) due to me thinking that it is a good match for the concept and because I personally like the idea of the reader making certain decisions throughout the story that can change the character mechanics and shit and, in turn, seeing how they could alter the ending in subtle ways (i.e. the attitudes of the characters in the leadup to and the actual execution of the final act in the story rather than the actual events).

Basically, what I'm here to ask is whether anyone has any experience with writing in the format and could offer any tips, and also asking for the methods you all use to motivate yourself 'cause I'm in a rut for literally everything atm.
 
Martin I am struggling with the same motivational issues - not just for writing, but for everything atm. I believe doing small things first can be good to start getting going with the writing stuff. like writing a little each day, or writing short stories rather than something more extense untill you feel pumped up. That is what I am trying to do starting next week, lets see how it goes.

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Just editing to make that presentation template because it looks cute :]

What do you lke to write?:
I write non-fiction, mostly. I've been working for the last three years as a journalist working mainly with internet media, so writing news and more in-depth stories occupied my mind these last years.

For two years, I was editor-in-chief of two football sites with some colleagues. There, I worked with interviews and texts regarding sports analyses. I briefly worked with historical researches aswell.

I was a writer for two radio programs hosted at a regional radio station here - one daily, without especific thematics; and other aired weekly, only about music. I wrote the radio show itself, and also quick reviews for the website. I went with my own music blog shortly after, but I was too lazy to actually travel to go to shows n' shit so I abandoned it. D:

Right now I am a writer for a podcast with two friends, but I am dropping the project soon.

Are you working on a current project?:
Nothing relevant in this moment. ;{ I have some projects I want to start soon, though.

One is a music blog based on this concept of short reviews.

I want to try some fiction too. There are two things that I have in mind by now and I will start soon. This thread got me pumped tbh, :]

One is a Death Note fanfiction, as I stated above. Without the genius stuff, because I am a pretty dumb guy and could not conduct the story that way. My country is living a complicate political scenario and I want to focus my will of slap congressmen's mothers face with a fish in a story where a guy just kill them in horrible ways. :]

Other is a series about football. Like a Captain Tsubasa without special powers and stuff, focused more in the characters drama than in the sport itself. I plan to do it based in some brazilian famous players, as they have rich backgrounds that could easily be adapted to fiction. I might do it in a screenplay format, thinking of it like an anime, because it is a format I'm not familiar with, and I want to be.

I do not have plans to publish anything -- not under my name, at least. I am too recluse and introverted to actually publish anything that have a more personal approach to it. I'm okay with sharing my work as journalist because there is not that much of me within the articles. If I ever finish the projects I mentioned above, not even my girlfriend and closer friends will see them, I guess. However, if I manage to write them in english (which I struggle with, as you might see), I might post it to strangers on internet read.

Do you have a method?:
I try concentrating on making a good start. If an article for a newspaper, the first paragraph; if it is a shorter story, a strong lead; if a longer thing, a good first chapter, etc. With so many options and memes to scroll through, if I don't catch the audience right away, they probably won't stay to read the rest of my thing.

I also focus better if I take steps into writing. If I am writing something based of an interview, I would do a list of things I need to do, and do them separately, with breaks between each step. It would be like:

- Searching for infos do avoid making dumb question to whoever I will be interviewing;
- Do the interview;
- Mark the important parts;
- Based on that, write down a sketeleton of how I want to conduct the story
- Write the thing down
- Read all over again two or three times.

If I have the time, I do one step a day to keep fresh.

Favorites:
I like reading manga the most. D: It have been a long time since I read fiction... I prefer reading things based on real things, like reporters writing about their investigations. Brazilian journalist Caco Barcellos have a solid work on this subject, called 'Abusado', dealing with favelas situations in Brazil.

Misc:
Brazil is good and even our football team is getting better omg im hyped

here is a cool song to thank you by reading through all this :]
 
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1 What do you like to write?
Sweet nothings (but mostly poetry).

2 Are you working on a current project?
Define working. I'm slowly just finishing notebooks really.

3 What got you interested in writing?
As weird as this may sound, immortality. I know, I know - look at me, the crackpot. But really, you live on through your words. I've always worried about just fading away - writing is my way of quieting that fear and it helps keep me sane in this world where you can't always say what's on your mind.

4 Are you branching out?
No. Writing is mostly a private affair for me. Although I guess I'm branching out by posting here, mhm?

5 Do you have a method?
I write until I hate myself and feel better about the world around me.

6 Favorites?
Anything Murakami, Hemingway, Nabokov or Bukowski.

7 Misc
I live in South Africa, in a small town, in the middle of nowhere. It's quaint, quiet and nothing ever happens here that anyone outside of here would care about. I'm currently 21 and right now I'm reading "Brief loves that live forever" by Andrei Makine.

Nice to meet y'all. :toast:
 
I apologize for this once again, but due to some unforeseen factors, my book will not be released until at least January of next year. I realize that I have been disappointing people by making them wait for an unreasonably long time already, so I am really sorry about this. I promise however, that it will be released as soon as I return to Smogon.
 
aaa that is bad ;[ we'll still go after the book, so np, hope things get better soon!

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I could overcome the block I mentioned earlier and actually start writing the fanfic :].

I'll try to keep it up with one chapter each two days (that way I can write in portuguese first then calmly translate to english).

Which would be good ways to share the story under a tpseudonm pseudonym or smtn when I feel comfortable of doing so?
Is the ol' fanfiction.net any good for this purpose?
 
aaa that is bad ;[ we'll still go after the book, so np, hope things get better soon!

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I could overcome the block I mentioned earlier and actually start writing the fanfic :].

I'll try to keep it up with one chapter each two days (that way I can write in portuguese first then calmly translate to english).

Which would be good ways to share the story under a tpseudonm pseudonym or smtn when I feel comfortable of doing so?
Is the ol' fanfiction.net any good for this purpose?
Fanfiction works, but it's easy for stuff to get lost and it's text editor is terrible. Some sites like Sufficientvelocity and Spacebattles have large fan bases and will generally give quick, regular, and somewhat comprehensive reviews on stories, but most of them require an account for commenting and thus would cut off a bunch of potential people would would otherwise express appreciation or criticism.
 
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Fanfiction dpworks, but it's easy for stuff to get lost and it's text editor is terrible. Some sites like Sufficienvelocity and Spacebattles have large fan bases and will generally give quick, regular, and somewhat comprehensive reviews on stories, but most of them require an account for commenting and thus would cut off a bunch of potential people would would otherwise express appreciation or criticism.

Yeah, I just created an account and looks like everything is still in 2009 there. and looked like that there are some dam weeabo cringey community there too. oo'
I would look that two others, thanks :}
 
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Writing is one of my hobbies, although I might not publish them now, since I'm not comfortable with that yet, I'm on the verge of writing normal books and manga books (my manga drawings skills are currently trash), but right now, I'm focusing on just plain writing.

What do you like to write?: Anything that includes Romance, or Action/Comedy at least.

Are you working on a current project?: I've written a lot of unpublished pieces that I just written for fun. I am writing a book right now, but it's kinda holiday and I'm sluggish on writing it, although maybe in the future when I'm more comfortable with writing, I might start a serious project and might get it possibly published

What got you interested in writing?: I always loved drawing and writing as a kid, so I wanted to make comic books or just normal books to put in my library to get a lot of gold stars so I can brag to my parents; now I shift towards the manga side of drawing, but before I hone my art skills, I thought that I would be better off just writing for now since it would take time to be good at writing AND drawing.

Are you branching out?: As of now, my pieces of writing are private, very private. Although I don't mind sharing on Smogon if I'm comfortable with the piece.

Do you have a method?:
I usually get a lot of chapters done whenever I listen to music (anime soundtracks specifically), but sometimes I get distracted easily when it's very ambient and calm, so listening to exciting music helps me concentrate on writing a lot, I usually finish it on the get-go, although it takes around a week usually to finish a piece of writing.

Favorites: I love romance books, but I can read about anything really. What really moves me in Romance books is the perspective and feelings that are expressed by the text, and it really touches me, how the main character(s), show this feeling of romance throughout perspective, feelings and thoughts in the text.

Misc: I don't really have any inspirations that are authors. Also I come up with bad titles, I don't know why, but I always seem to lose focus whenever it comes to titles, so I usually get a friend to help me with this stuff.
 
Hi, Im Ardy and I guess this is a good place for a first post xD

  • What do you like to write?: Ooh, Novels for sure. Usually crime thrillers, but some fantasy/adventure too.
  • Are you working on a current project?: Yeah, Im currently working on a couple of books on my wattpad account, as well as a couple poems in private.
  • What got you interested in writing?: Id always been good at writing, but my fifth grade language teacher really made me realise I could actually craft stories well enough to write full novels.
  • Are you branching out?: Not so far.
  • Do you have a method?: I write casually, but I usually try to get in a couple of hours of writing atleast once every three days.
  • Favorites: Genre: Thriller. Series: The City Trilogy. Book: Silence Of The Lambs.
  • Misc: Im currently reading "I Am Pilgrim" by Terry Hayes, its looking to be a great read.
 
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Hi everyone. This is my first post on here while I lurk and get a feel for the place, but what a great start to talk about something I love!

What do you like to write?: Mostly fanfiction, although I have tried to write original stuff.
Are you working on a current project?: Four fanfics at the moment. Two Mystery Dungeon inspired, a trainer 'fic and one for Zootopia.
What got you interested in writing?: I've always been a daydreamer and liked to tell stories. I suppose I'm always in some kind of daydream. If I'm not mentally occupied I end up chronically bored so it's a great way to keep my mind active too. Plus I just love writing for the enjoyment of others as well as my own!
Are you branching out?: I recently wrote a 70 chapter fanfic that I am now editing and illustrating. It sparked a love for writing epic length stories. One of my current projects ties in with that story from another more side-character's point of view that covers more of their history. I've also started to write back-stories for my fanfics that gives a deeper insight for myself before I write, since I just can not plan out and stick to a chapter plan.
Do you have a method?: I pants everything. I pretty much just dive straight in and write. I also try to write daily, although I've recently fallen out of habit after Christmas lol.
Favorites: I love to write Pokemon Mystery Dungeon fanfiction. As for genres, typically sci fi, cyberpunk and dystopian. I recently ventured out and wrote a cyberpunk Mystery Dungeon fanfic that incorporated glitches, fannon and small plot elements from Red and Blue...
Misc: Titles are hard. Sometimes I can think of a great one and other times I end up stuck with a code-name and just can't grab onto a good title. I make sound tracks for my writing. I then end up attaching a song to a character or plot element and can't remove it so whenever I listen to the song I get nostalgic... I also really need to read more. I have a terrible habit of picking up books and putting them down that it's a wonder I ever finish writing anything!
 
  • What do you like to write?: This may be a bit of a stretch given the context of this thread, but I typically write song lyrics. Outside of that, it's usually smut - if I'm honest.
  • Are you working on a current project?: I just joined a new band recently, and I have about 9 songs that I need lyrics for, with two of them completed so far. We have a pretty awesome studio opportunity available to us if we can be ready to go by March, so I guess that's my current goal. Also working on a long-term erotic fan-fic, but that's very early stages and pretty far on the back burner of my priorities at the moment.
  • What got you interested in writing?: Music has been my primary outlet since I was about 15 (now 21). I originally played bass, but have been writing lyrics since I started with music. About 4 years ago I switched to doing vocals, and have found a much bigger connection with that.
  • Are you branching out?: Nah. No room in my major for a writing course.
  • Do you have a method?: I HAVE to write pen-on-paper when I'm working on lyrics. I am physically incapable of writing lyrics on a computer or phone, minus a random line or two here or there.
  • Favorites: I have never really had an inspiration for anything in my life that I can remember. There are particular vocal styles that I like to emulate though. I base mine off of Brendan Murphy (Counterparts) and Derrek (Defeater). I probably butchered the spelling of both of their names, though. I could not tell you the last time I read a book, however.
  • Misc: I live in New Hampshire, no agent or anything.
I'm not a member of this band anymore - they've changed their name and style pretty greatly, but I wrote all of the lyrics and performed for this album. I do scream all of my vocals, so be aware of that.
https://sunwalkernh.bandcamp.com/album/full-circle
 
Cool to see this thread is getting semi-consistent use again. In between these introductions, however, I want to talk about inspiration.

What inspires you to write? Where do you find inspiration? What happens when you're lacking new ideas, or as some would call it, get a case of the dreaded writer's block?

I'll share a few things I've done to drum up inspiration, but first a little backstory. (Eek! Backstory!)

So I've gotten back into writing short stories. I was working on some longer pieces over the last few years, but I'm hooked on the short format once again and I've been cranking them out on weekends when I have the time. So, why did I shift back over to this shorter format? Well I've found myself flooded with this sudden rush of inspiration lately. All of these interesting little premises (or seeds as I like to call them) have wormed their way into my brain and I've been racing to get them all down. It started when, at the end of 2016, I asked those in attendance at my critique group to set a goal for 2017. The goal I set is to start at least 50 short stories. I don't promise to finish them all, but I do plan on getting a good chunk of them written down even if I don't come to a conclusion for each one.

To keep track of my progress I created a folder on Google docs. In one document I keep a running list of ideas and the stories that I've written that count toward my quota. So far there are three.

Now, to come back to my earlier bit about how to find inspiration for my stories. Right now I've been fortunate and the inspiration has been finding me, but sooner or later the flood will slow to a trickle. To help myself out, I've gathered some techniques on inspiration that I'll share.


Technique #1.
->Flip the Premise

I found this technique while browsing YouTube. Lately, my YouTube watch history has become infested with filmography, video movie essays, and movie reviews. I'm a very visual writer in that I like to picture what I write as a moving scene. That probably makes a lot of sense to other writers because writing is transcribing the imagination. You see your characters do something in your head and you write it down. While watching these videos on YouTube about film editing, composition, dialog, etc, I've found that my writing is getting closer and closer to actualizing the scenes that I see in my head.

One video essay in particular described this technique called "Flip the Premise." It's actually a technique the essayist found on another channel, which I've since started watching, too. Essentially, with Flip the Premise you take a plot (or, a premise, at its most basic level) and flip it on its head. The originator of the idea explains it best when he says "You take all the good guys, you make them the bad guys. You take all the bad guys, you make them the good guys."

So think of the plot from the movie The Lion King. Rather than making Simba the hero, with the Flip the Premise technique you actually rewrite the story so that Scar is the hero. Of course, you'd have to rewrite Scar's character and actions to make him sympathetic to your readers, because killing his brother and banishing his nephew in order to usurp the crown is not going to win over a lot of sympathy. But that's the challenge! How can you turn Scar into the hero? Ideally, once you've rewritten the new premise, the story has become its own beast altogether and not just a complete ripoff of The Lion King. The beauty in this technique is that it doesn't even have to be about lions anymore, either! (True, The Lion King is influenced a lot by Hamlet, so theoretically you can use that as a base instead.) You can have it suit whatever universe you're writing in, be that about humans, cyborgs, werewolves, caterpillars, or balloon animals.


Technique #2.
->Real World Fiction

Have you ever seen or read a news story that was so crazy, so shocking that you (maybe not in these exact words) said, "Truth is stranger than fiction?" Well there's a reason people rely on that adage to describe real-world events: the real world is filled with unbelievable stories! Crime is a facet of our world that produces some incredible twists and turns. Open your local newspaper and turn to the police blotter to get a small sample, or Google "strange crime stories" for the really wild stuff. There was one such case about a teenager from my home state the press nicknamed the Barefoot Bandit who broke into homes throughout the Pacific Northwest and Canada, sometimes just to soak in the homeowner's bathtub or eat their ice cream, leaving his wet footprints behind. He used money he stole to buy supplies in order to live as a survivalist until he started stealing vehicles on his way across the country. He stole cars, boats, and even small planes, teaching himself how to fly just by reading the manuals and playing flight simulator games. Eventually, he stole a Cessna 400 from an airport in Indiana and escaped to the Bahamas where he was later caught and extradited back to the U.S. to face charges. Doesn't that just read like a crime novel?

If you're not after crime stories, there's plenty more inspiration to be had elsewhere. I just bought four magazines today on various fields of study just to have a catalog of real-world information at my fingertips for future stories. These include magazines on astronomy, archaeology, the top 100 scientific discoveries of 2016, and the Smithsonian Institute. I write science fiction and fantasy predominately, so my hope is to find some inspiration between the pages of these magazines to fuel the creation of a new world or technology for me to explore in my writing. Flipping through the Smithsonian magazine just now I landed on an article called "The Lovers of Shanxi," about a couple moving to a small village in Western China during WWII to look for ancient architectural riches before they were lost forever. I can already imagine what they found in that small village ... and it's certainly unlike anything they ever thought possible!


So those are just two of my favorite techniques I use for finding inspiration. Are there some that you as a writer rely on to kick start your stories or to inject more juice when things slow down? Are there any specific stories that you're working on that are derived from some interesting factoid or real-life event? I'd love to hear what inspires you, so share them in the thread!
 
I often create many interesting "worlds" or "universes" that have battles with stats, and my friends seem to be interested in my stories.

But the down side is, there isn't really a language that I'm strong in.
Neither my Chinese nor my English can reach native level, so I just can't imagine what happens when it comes to literature.
I get really stuck when I need to describe anything in words.

So in the end, I ended up only listing the stats of each character and each attack/ weapon, etc with very simple description.
I'm just very scared of writing in proper paragraphs.

I'm currently under apprenticeship of a manga "shifu" / master.
I enjoyed improving my drawing skills under her, but she keeps telling me that I have to write a story.
She wants a complete manga from me, instead of just drawings.

I know that telling a story via manga as a medium would solve the language/ literature problem for me, but it still feels very intimidating to me.
Because in the end, I still have to write things down in words.
 
Hey, this thread is several years old and somehow managed to escape my notice. It's totally rad that there are people working seriously at this craft, and congrats to Transcendent God Champion for actually shipping.

So, hi, folks. When I was a teenager, I used to write long forum posts and play Pokemon. Now, I mostly just write stories.

What do you like to write?: I like writing speculative fiction, and tend to favor fantasy over sci-fi. My sci-fi stories usually lean toward "techno thriller" (think Michael Crichton) that are basically set in a contemporary setting with one or two new technologies that are slightly more advanced than they are in the present day. ("Five minutes into the future," some might call it.) Creative fiction is also cool.

Are you working on a current project?: I'm writing for several visual novel projects. One of them, Necrobarista, just got announced, and it has a really cool trailer that you should definitely watch. (If you pause the trailer in the right spots, you can see some of my writing.)

What got you interested in writing?: I read a lot as a kid. I often used elementary school assignments as an excuse to write pulpy stories (usually detective stories inspired by the Three Investigators and the Hardy Boys). Around the end of elementary I started spending less time with books and more time online, though one of my favorite internet forum activities did involve crafting artistic works of fiction and falsehood. Nearly a decade later, during my college years, I watched Brandon Sanderson's 2010 JordanCon lectures, where he talks about how writing is a skill that you can learn. So I decided to take the engineering mindset that I was applying to my studies (mechanical engineering) and apply it to crafting stories. I enrolled in several creative writing electives, had a ball of a time doing it, and decided that I wanted to go for pro. (Didn't change my major, though. I figured an engineering degree would be more valuable than an English degree, since tech employers actually care about certain credentials, whereas publishers will pick up a good manuscript regardless of whether the author has any formal schooling.)

Are you branching out?: Well, I'm getting paid to write scripts for several visual novel projects, so that part of "become a pro writer" worked out, though I'd like to get into trade publishing some day. Awhile back I finished a 20k word fantasy novella (which was actually part of the portfolio that got me several of my current paid gigs), and I've been thinking about expanding that novella into a full-length novel. (The novella essentially tells the first act of what I had originally conceived as a longer story.) But for now, I have to focus on what is paying the bills. (And that's certainly not something for me to complain about.)

Do you have a method?: I'm an outliner. I tend to have an outline/roadmap for each I scene (usually it's just in my head, though for longer projects I'll write it out), so I usually can just bang out first drafts without having to deal with "writer's block." When I'm just in the mode of "I have an idea that is pretty fully articulated already in my head and I just need to get it out onto the page," I can write around 2k words per hour, but it in reality that "2k words in 1 hour of writing" is realistically more like "2k words in several hours (or days) of thinking about the scene and 1 hour of actually typing." (Some of my most productive "writing time" actually takes place on long walks, or at the gym.)

Favorites: I like hard fantasy (Brandon Sanderson), cyberpunk (Neal Stephenson), and urban fantasy (Dan Wells). Orson Scott Card's "Shadow of the Hegemon" might be my favorite novel, I've probably read it more than any other novel. I've also started reading more literary fiction lately. "How to Get Filthy Rich in Rising Asia" is a very cool novel, told in 2nd person (I think it's the first novel I've ever read of that sort), and at the recommendation of a bunch of journalists I follow, I also decided to pick up The Nix by Nathan Hill, which was pretty enjoyable.

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What inspires you to write? These days, it's mostly about deadlines and getting paid. When I work on spec material, the focus is still on deadlines and getting paid, but the deadlines are self-imposed, and the "getting paid" part is on a longer time scale. But sometimes I just want to try something new, hone the skill set, put another tool in my belt.

Where do you find inspiration? I steal ideas from reality. Characters' personalities and quirks and passions are often based on real people. (That's what the first generation of writers did: they observed the world around them and told stories based on that. Then you have generations of "inbred" writers who learned how to write by reading. Sort of like how you have lots of artists who learned how to draw by imitating the style of other artists, it can come out feeling like a caricature of a caricature. I think there's a time and a place for that, but I prefer to go back to the original source material.) I also love reading history books and other nonfiction that provide lots of room for "divergent thinking," that inkling of "what if things had gone differently?"

What happens when you're lacking new ideas, or as some would call it, get a case of the dreaded writer's block? Step outside, go for a walk. Study the people waiting at the bus stop and see if there's anything unusual about their appearance; pick out traits and ask myself "why?" Get a haircut and overhear a conversation between a 40-year-old woman and her hairdresser. Go to a bar, chat with the bouncer, play darts and strike up a conversation with anyone who looks like they're alone. Pick up the Science section of the NYT and look at headlines, but instead of actually reading the stories, come up with my own ideas for stories that might have those headlines.

One form of "bottom-up" storytelling that I like involves taking a familiar setting, changing something about it, and then asking, "Okay, what effect does this have?" In a fantasy setting, how would wizards affect medieval warfare and the way military campaigns were waged? How would society develop differently if in the year 1500, people discovered technology (or magic) that provided them with instant point-to-point communication? People colonize Mars and start having kids; what effect does the gravity have on those kids and their height and bone density and what's it like being in a community of 150 people? (This approach to "bottom-up" storytelling was actually discussed in the latest episode of Rationally Writing.)

On a complete non-related subject: I can't help myself to stop self-sabotage.
I have a lot of things I want to write, but before I even start, I convince myself that it won't do any good or the idea is silly. So the day passes with me just scrolling memes and more memes.
I think one of the more useful lessons I've gotten from Brandon Sanderson is to treat writing like any other skill, rather than something mythical as people often do.

For example, playing a guitar is a skill. People understand that the first time you pick up a guitar, it's not going to sound like real music. You spend some time learning to pluck the strings, learn basic chords, and spend many hours practicing in the privacy of your own bedroom, working to acquire the skill that will allow you play music that people actually want to hear. Also, people understand that to learn to play the guitar, you must actually play the guitar. You don't learn to play the guitar by listening to guitar music; I've spend thousands of hours listening to people play the guitar, yet I could pick up an instrument and not know the first thing about playing it.

Writing is, in many respects, like learning to play the guitar. The first time you write, it's not going to look like the work that you'd see in a novel that you picked up off the bookshelf. (And note that the text you see in published novels is often the result of many rounds of revision! You don't get to see pro authors' first drafts.) If you sit down and write with the mindset, "In 2 hours, I'll have finished a great story that I can show to other people," that might not be true. You might not fulfill that expectation. But you can fulfill the expectation, "I'm going to spend 2 hours practicing, and at the end of 2 hours, I'll have incrementally improved some of my skills as a writer."

During my early days as a writer, I had a lot of sessions where I wrote a story, decided that it was crap, and never showed it to anyone. Eventually, the hard drives that contained those old stories crashed or were discarded, and now, those stories are lost forever. Did I "waste my time" writing those bad-to-mediocre stories that were never shared? No, that was time well-spent. During that time, I was improving my skill as a writer. Writing a story that never gets seen by anyone isn't a "waste" because nobody saw it, anymore than it would be a "waste" for me to practice throwing darts at a dart board in the privacy of my home. Practicing darts (sometimes missing the dart board entirely) is how I get better at darts. Practicing writing is how I get better at writing.

Going back to the original question posed here, it feels like the thought process is, "I'd like to write a story. Okay, I could spend the next 2 hours writing. But...my story will probably turn out poorly, because I'm not skilled enough as a writer to tell that story well. So instead of trying to write a good story, which is an impossible task, I'm just going to browse imgur and reddit."

Here's the analogy:

"I'd like to run a 4-minute mile. Okay, I could put on my running shoes and go for a run. But...I won't be able to run a 4-minute mile. At best, I'll probably finish the mile in 8 minutes, which is nowhere close to my goal. So instead of trying to run a 4-minute mile tonight, which would be impossible for me, I'm just going to sit at home and browse reddit and imgur."

Obviously, that's ludicrous. I can't go directly to running a 4-minute mile. There's a long road of incremental improvement that I have to travel down before I can reach that point. Realistically, today, I should be happy if I can just beat my personal best time, even if it's a time that would be unimpressive by most people's standards. Because while running a 7-minute mile is something that some pro athletes would scoff at, for me, it would be a real improvement.

I think that this (wrong) mindset comes from incorrectly identifying what your goals are. Think about the running example. I state my goal as:

"I want to run a 4-minute mile."

But really, I don't just want to run a 4-minute mile. If a wizard cast a magic haste spell on me that allowed me to run a 4-minute mile once, but then after that my speed returned to normal, I wouldn't think to myself, "Well, I already achieved my goal of running a 4-minute mile!" No, my goal is really this:

"I want to become a fast runner, someone who is capable of running a 4-minute mile."

See the difference?

If my goal is to run a 4-minute mile, I can't achieve that tonight, or even in the next week. But if my goal is simply, "I want to be a faster runner today than I was yesterday," that puts me into a self-improvement mindset where every day I can work toward my goal of being a fast runner, and perhaps one day even a runner fast enough to run a 4-minute mile.

Likewise, your goal isn't to write a a good story. I mean, you'd like to do that, much in the same way that I'd like to run a 4-minute mile. But really, your goal is to become a good writer. You want to become a writer who is capable of writing good stories. So while you might not be able to write an awesome 10/10 story tonight, you can at least focus on the goal of being a better writer today than you were yesterday. And if you do that repeatedly, over a long enough time scale, your skill as a writer will consistently improve and you will eventually reach a point where you can say, "Hey, I'm a good writer!"

It might help you to realize that this is actually the way that publishers look at it, too. Look at recent books by big authors like Stephen King and Brandon Sanderson, and notice that if you look at the font on the cover, the name "STEPHEN KING" or "BRANDON SANDERSON" is bigger than the title of the novel. Publishers want a good manuscript, but more than a good manuscript, they want a good author; they want someone who can repeatedly and consistently continue to produce good manuscripts. The AUTHOR is the product. YOU are the product. The goal of writing is to improve YOU, improve YOUR skillset. The story you're writing is just a means to an end; it's the practice that you're using to change from a mediocre writer into a good one. So write that story. Maybe it comes out as a mediocre 4/10 story, but what matters today is being better than you were before, staying on the road to self improvement through repeated and deliberate practice.

All I can suggest is picking something to start, committing to a schedule, and then not letting yourself skip no matter how bad what you've written. If you're sufficiently embarrased use a pen name/alternant handle, but don't let quality deter you.
I think this gets at the productive self-improvement mindset. Going back to the running analogy, suppose I run two laps (half a mile), and check my time at see that I've been running for 5 minutes. If I ran half a mile in 5 minutes, that means I'm on pace for a 10 minute mile. Whoa, that's slow! You know, that's so slow that I should probably just give up now and not even bother to finish the mile.

Of course, that mindset is stupid. I should finish the mile. I could say, "But the first half of that mile was so terrible! Even if I pick up the pace in the second half, there's no way that I could possibly beat my personal best!" But really, the reason that I'm out there on the track is not the number on my wristwatch. I'm there to practice. I'm here to train.

Oh, and I'm also there because it feels good. It's an enjoyable experience. And the most enjoyable days tend to be the ones where I improve the most. Acquiring a skill, getting good at something, improving incrementally, that's fun. I think it's why most of us love video games (like competitive Pokemon, perhaps), because a lot of good games are about the learning experience, making the player feel like they're getting better at something. Well, writing is a great skill to acquire, it actually allows you to create something to share with the world, and the skill cap is huge.

Even if you have no intention of writing professionally, even if you're just a fanfic writer who wants to share stories with friends, I still think treating writing with the same self-improvement mindset is a good idea, because becoming a better writer is fun. It can be difficult (much in the same way that some video game levels are hard and challenging), but it's also an incredibly rewarding experience that gives that sense of accomplishment that I think all of us crave so much.

The more I write, the easier it is to write. Partly, this is because of the skills I've acquired, but a large part of it comes from the fact that as I've spent more time writing, it's gotten more enjoyable. Summoning the motivation to sit down and write a story isn't something that I really struggle with. In fact, I look forward to it. I spent large portions of my day eagerly anticipating the moment when I get to sit in front of the computer and start typing, sometimes giddy with anticipation. The more you do this, the more you improve, and the more you improve, the more fun it becomes.
 
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the above analogy is really REALLY good, thanks for that

on another note, i'm writing two feature films this semester (cowriting one, solo on the other) so if nothing else it'll be an interesting few months
 
Thank you for your extensive post, Kikuichimonji ! Like Walrein, I enjoyed the analogy.

Can you explain a little more about visual novels? I'm not familiar with that medium. I watched the trailer and I have a good idea of how they work, but I'd like to hear it from someone who writes them.
 
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