lineart stuff
alright I think I need to do more than add a failed attempt at humor at the end of each picture I draw, so I'm going to try self-critiquing myself. The grumpig pic, in my opinion, is the best piece out of the three, as the shading doesn't go overboard and makes it look soft, and the lineart is pretty smooth (although it still could be refined, as the lines cross at some points). The Drifblim has jagged lines which don't work and there are some anatomical issues, brought about by me trying to add some cool perspective and failing completely. I tried to add the third arm into the picture, but it wasn't fitting anywhere, so I had to omit it. The shading on the picture is pretty dynamic, which I'm actually pretty happy with, as it sharpens the picture and brings out the contours and adds mass to it, although there are many issues with lighting. Finally, the beautifly's lineart isn't too jagged, although it definitely could still be refined more, and some parts (which I didn't realize until posting this, probably should fix it sometime) have coloring coming out of the lines. Overall, I think the piece is OK, but it's not impressive or anything near that; the bland background also adds to this.
In regards to all three pieces as a whole, I think what I need to work on the most is lineart, which I think just comes more and more easily through practice (even if I don't like it); I could use more varying in size with the lines— unfortunately, I can't seem to figure out where thicker and thinner lines go, and I'm still trying to figure out what my lineart style is :/
tl;dr I'm not good at drawing with lineart and I have issues with shading, and I need to get better at art.
EDIT: oh by the way thanks a lot @
andrew3391, you really help motivate me to work harder on art and stuff. I see you experimenting with different styles a lot on your thread, but unlike me your styles work :/