Given that it's a plant and that it has a long chili fruit on its head which could potentially be used for gripping and holding stuff, I'm willing to wager that it'll work without arms. The original sketch had them, but then I made a leaf diaper as I drew it in Photoshop and then for some reason I couldn't care less about arms afterwards. Unrealistic functionality be damned!1) Jalapetit needs arms. I know that GF has a history of creating pokemon with baffling disabilities like these *cough*oddish*cough* but I still find it a little irritating when such an unrealistic feature makes it into these designs (clearly having creatures with magical abilities is also unrealistic, but this is a different sort of unrealistic).
Could be the mouth. The extra cut on her lip might only be complicating things further, so it's will be removed if I were to edit the image.2) Habasalsa's face. This is much more subjective of course, but Habasalsa doesn't have a face that I would consider terribly pokemon-like (the other two are fine). I know that this is a very vague criticism, and I'm honestly not sure what it is about it that makes me say this - maybe the eyes, or the mouth?
His last visit was also one year ago, and with an username like that, google is out of the question to track him down. I'll send him a PM and hope he gets an email notice, otherwise: Meh.-Since evolution stones emit radiation, as illustrated by Eevee's Pokedex entries, maybe there could be adverse side-effects from a human being near one
Unless you also check my comic on my site, I implemented this. So thanks!I think the lines "It has no life, it's without place" is a bit clunky and would sound better if it was "It has no life, it has no place"
That would risk giving away the joke in the first panel though, or rather, people would know what to expect early on. I used "peculiar rock" because that's what the in-game entries use, but I can erase the 'peculiar' and instead write "strange energy", so that people will think of the rock's properties rather than the rock itself.Maybe make it a little clearer in the intro "box" about radiation, I wouldn't have got it if it wasn't for the comment afterwards :P
'kay.May I have use the Drifblim from your favorite types as my avatar? Great comics and art overall, the consistency of general style nicely shows.
Not really, or at least so compared to the first panels. I even edited his nose in the 4th panel as I discovered it was a tad too small. No tiny animé noses here!Blue's nose is also a wee bit over-sized in the last panel but its barely noticeable.
the feeling of resignation tinged with frustration is achieved very well. the expression spuds4ever suggested suggests more anger, which is not present in the dialogue, and actually make the outburst in the last panel less effective
Fate is on the same line as me, but I fixed Blue's mouth in panel 4 so that he doesn't look as frustrated. He's annoyed, for sure, but it's not until the last panel when the last straw has been plucked.I just feel the outburst from the panel before seems to contradict the contained frustration of the second last panel which makes it feel a little un-natural but that's just my 2 cents.
Ah, that must be why, I was comparing it with the nose in the fourth panel :PNot really, or at least so compared to the first panels. I even edited his nose in the 4th panel as I discovered it was a tad too small. No tiny animé noses here!
Yeah, I'm not the artistic genius so I'm sure you know what you're doing :)Fate is on the same line as me, but I fixed Blue's mouth in panel 4 so that he doesn't look as frustrated. He's annoyed, for sure, but it's not until the last panel when the last straw has been plucked.
Oh don't be like that. Your nose comment made me check if everything was neat and tidy, which I otherwise wouldn't have done if I thought everything was awesome. Just because one comment doesn't result in any changes doesn't mean it's pointless.Yeah, I'm not the artistic genius so I'm sure you know what you're doing :)