I love the idea! That's very neat, I love the picture book perspective you took. If I'm not mistaken, the bit of text is quoted from the games, is it not?
The only thing I think I need to bring up are the grammatical errors in the text. Fixing them might be good for plus points or something, you never know! ;)
"The Dragon's Den is known for its Dragon Pokémon.
Myths say that there is a cave where all Dragon-type Pokémon live in harmony."
The only thing I think I need to bring up are the grammatical errors in the text. Fixing them might be good for plus points or something, you never know! ;)
"The Dragon's Den is known for its Dragon Pokémon.
Myths say that there is a cave where all Dragon-type Pokémon live in harmony."