paintseagull, that art is super adorable! I love it! The profile shot is good, but you should try a pose at a 45 degree angle so we can see more of the body.
you posted this before I fixed(?) the links. Does that mean you could see what was invisible to me? cause that's bizarre.Mos-Quitoxe, amazing drawing, looks really nice. But. It looks perfect for Intimidate. Shame that the pre-evo doesn't have Intimidate, it has Scrappy/Prankster. If the face became less Intimidatory and more Prankster-ish, I would be absolutely sold
This is bloody amazing. Like, it looks like a Scrappy fighter, it looks perfect grounded with the typing, and it looks ferocious. I totally dig it. Great job. Just please make sure when you submit your final submission to label it as Final Submission! I definitely want it going to the poll!Mos-Quitoxe said:http://i998.photobucket.com/albums/af108/SClipD/CAP11prevocopy.png
I originally put the spot there to mirror the larger one on Tomahawk, so "Kittihawk" here looked like it was wearing the hide of an eagle that was caught by surprise. But we'll see what it looks like without it :)
Mox-Quitoxe has a well drawn, bold and fairly clean concept. I have minor issues with it such as not quite knowing how the tail axe turns into harmless feathers.QUOTE]
that probably stems from the fact that with the CAP's name being finalised I wanted to actually incorporate a tomahawk into the prevo, coupled with my making it purple to maintain personal colour balance. I've changed it to look more feather-shaped.
also Rittercat, you've got your grin! (hopefully, image uploading is still a cr*pshoot)
THIS! I know this is perhaps premature, but I have to say that Kittihawk is the perfect name for the Prevo of Tomohawk. Why? Well, Kitty Hawk, North Carolina is where Wilbur and Orville Wright, the inventors of the airplane, successfully had their first flight. So Tomohawk gains flight out of Kittihawk. It fits perfectly. Plus it sounds adorable and somewhat fierce at the same time.I originally put the spot there to mirror the larger one on Tomahawk, so "Kittihawk"...
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I really love what you've done with the tail, but I think for a main submission, you should use the more serious face from your original image. I think the seriousness of the face from before really matched the main art design for CAP1. The super grin seems a bit off; CAP1 may be a prankster but he's got a fighting spirit, and I think keeping that in the pre-evo makes your design really succeed at the Rhyhorn/Gligar-type evolution style.Mos=Quitoxe said:
Yeah, that's cool! He's a little bit plump, but I think he still looks sufficiently pre-evo-like. I kind of like the bigness of it, although it tends to suggest a very dynamic change when it evolves into CAP1. This could work well with whatever stats we come up with, though, so that's cool. It seems like a bit of a stretch for some, though, but we'll see with more feedback. Great work so far!NastyJungle said: