Grammar-Prose Team Queue 2: Grammatic Boogaloo

GatoDelFuego

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This thing has been in the queue for a month but it needs some work. I didn't change much of the prose with this as I'm generally not that good at that, but it just does not flow well, being the author's first analysis.
 

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