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Chaos669 said:
Wombat - That looks pretty cool. The only criticism I have is that the star on its belly shouldn't be all black IMO. I edited in Paint and found that it looked better without the black outline. That's just my opinion though, good job.

Agaki - That's a sick Metachamp. I don't really have much to say except that the outline is too dark in spots where light is hitting it (the front of his face for instance).

Anyway, I've been working on an idea for the WSC. I'd like some C+C on this please.

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looks pretty good so far.i love the sparkles i guess.

anyway just edited my post in the WSC and i need C+C for this.

EDIT:just noticed that the head is missing,i fixed the pom pom outlines as well!thanks for the heads up chaos669.although the outlines werent that sucessful....

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Thanks Toaster.

Anyway, it looks like the top of Chansey's head is missing :P. As for the ruby, it looks pretty good where it is. The pom-pom like things on the end of chansey's head flaps looks very odd. There's no outline on where it should be dark (where the light source isn't hitting it).
 
Hmmm...*snaps* I know! Ampharos!

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A Breloom Pixel Over with it's shiny. I didn't feel there were enough colors from the main sprite, so I added some more.
 
Darn you for getting off school so early Fuzz.

I'm taking a tech class at school and the teacher is sooooooooooo dumb (well, the class is stupid). He's like, teaching us to type. I could sleep throught the class.
Maybe I should hack his system for the lulz....

I hear Pat Sheradon (not exactly sure how you spell his name) is apparently conducting some sort of honor band over in California......I must see a performance.

Maybe I'll make a Santa Snorlax for my WSC entry.
 
Chaos669 said:
I have nothing to nitpick at Fuzzberry, that's very well done.
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Wombat Sky Forme said:
nice.... it looks barren.
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Thanks, both of you!

Teh_1337ness said:
Darn you for getting off school so early Fuzz.

I'm taking a tech class at school and the teacher is sooooooooooo dumb (well, the class is stupid). He's like, teaching us to type. I could sleep throught the class.
Maybe I should hack his system for the lulz....

I hear Pat Sheradon (not exactly sure how you spell his name) is apparently conducting some sort of honor band over in California......I must see a performance.
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=P I get out at 2:30, actually.

I have a friend who can hack our school's system. XD On the last day of school last year, he managed to gain control of a security camera. Well, one of the fifty. I told him if I ever need to commit a crime in the building, he's my accomplice.

Oooh, if I didn't live on the other side of the country, I'd so be there.

EDIT: Heehee. ^_^ I'm glad that my entry is being so well-received. Thanks to you too, Lord Jesseus!
 
Crud. You finally guessed right. It's Ampharos' head gem to be exact.

Chaos669 said:
I'd like some final C+C on my revised version of my WSC entry please (before I submit it). It would be much appreciated :).

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Since I already think it beats my entry (I'm hoping for Most Humorous now.), I'll give my nitpicks. I only have three by the way. The first is that the frozen snot dripping from his nose doesn't look like it's attached. It looks like it's just kind of in the background currently. I think you should either tweak it or cut it. My other two nitpicks is that the top left parts of the front eggs look awkward. The shading ends too abruptly IMO. It looks like it just stops halfway up. I think you should try tweaking it a bit. Yet again, excellent sprite.
 
Thanks XandZero ^^), I tweaked the sprite with your advice. I submitted it. I appreciate it.

Mordock, that's a pretty cool idea, I don't see anything wrong with it. Great job.
 
chomzloh said:
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My submission to the WSC. C&C much appreciated!
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Actually the problem is that the theme is winter, not christmas. I need to confer with the other judges over this regarding the other entries, but nowhere in the OP, does it say christmas, holidays or hannukkah.

Don't forget, our brothers and sisters south of the equator have christmas in the summer.
 
I've got the weekend to do all the fun stuff now.....Work on my sprites, mainly. And come up with a darn WSC idea. Snorlax with a hat and/or a sweater seems appealing.

I got bored and made a quick little animation out of some frames I found while surfing the 'net. It's nice and pretty.

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Yay for animations.
 
TVboyCanti's right guys, don't submit Holiday themed sprites. The theme is clearly winter. I know many of you automatically associate it with Christmas, but don't.

Sick animation 1337, I like it :D.
 
My WSC entry is edited into my post there, but for here there's this:

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I found it in my old files, it's one of the first sprites I ever did. I think I'm going to try touching up or redoing it.
 
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