Yeah, but it's bad writing, as more than one person has pointed out to me. There's a fine line between keeping things to a realistic level and departing entirely from canon. I'm trying to toe that line. Red is definitely special, and a naturally gifted Trainer, although it doesn't need to be stressed at every turn.Honestly, I didn't mind Red's heroism. Also, it's tough not to incorporate in the story. Seeing as the game's main character is pretty much a Superhero. It's hard to ignore that a young child, stopped Team Rocket, conquered all 8-gyms, defeated the Elite 4, and becoming the Champion of Kanto. And all of that was done in a few days.
E: Stall's right. Everyone has their own style, and their own likes and dislikes. I'm glad that people enjoy my writing as it is, but I want to make it better, if I can.