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You don't need to criticize my checks unless you're the one actually stamping them. What you say after one of my checks is stamped is almost always pretty rude, as you are a) not the one stamping my check and b) doing a completely separate check that has nothing to do with mine.
stumbled on your raichu check, would you like me to give you a more complete explanation as to why I exterminate that usage of 'then'? wouldn't want you to make those changes simply 'because tdp does it' lol.
Just a heads-up that you should try and remove prose mentions of stuff like "The transition to X generation did something good" or "The rise in X has let to a downfall in Y" because we don't like having analyses being depending on being 'recent'