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(Archive) Small Objective Changes Thread

Discussion in 'Archives' started by eric the espeon, Jul 12, 2009.

  1. barry4ever

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    I was actually wrong there, I fixed it. Thanks Queen Kyurem !
  2. Elentiya

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    http://www.smogon.com/bw/articles/bw_gravity

    In the "Gravity Users" section, in the analysis for Forretress, the word "get" is repeated, probably as a result of a typo.

    There should be only one "get."

    Also, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Defensive Teams," there is a comma which is not followed by a space.

    There should be a space after the comma after "BW."

    In addition, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Offensive / Balanced Teams," there are two words without a space between them.

    There should be a space between the words "you" and "control."
  3. Elentiya

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    Oh, and here's another one in the same article:

    There should be a space between "Celebi" and "that."
  4. Elentiya

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    Another one in the same article:

    There should be a space after the comma after "weakened."
  5. Mike Legend

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    fixed

    fixed

    fixed
    fixed

    fixed
  6. Elentiya

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    Alright, well here are a few more in the same article.

    There should be a space after the comma.

    There should be a space between the words "the" and "Defense," "with" and "Dusclop's," and "impressive" and "defenses."

    There should be a space after the comma.
  7. Mike Legend

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    fixed
    fixed

    fixed
  8. Bugbot

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    Since I think Iron Fist should be the main ability at least on the SD and CB sets, I'm awaiting a QC member reply to change the writeup a bit.

    fixed, thanks
  11. zdrup15

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    I was gonna edit the other post but Fate is a ninja so yeah, fixed xD
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  15. Lemonade

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    ok
  16. Layell

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    Fixed this.
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    "Despite the sheer threat presence this set has, it can useless against most other things still be stopped by most dedicated physical walls - other Arceus, Lugia, Skarmory, and Giratina."

    some grammar errors in exteme killer set, last paragraph.

    http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/arceus-normal

    also the virizon analysis states "If one wants Virizion to act as a mixed sweeper, a Work Up set is a viable option" even though it's alrady listed as one of the options

    http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/virizion/ou
  19. Lemonade

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    fixed, thanks
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    I fixed the Ninjask error, but I let the Donphan one be, as it probably needs to be updated anyways, idk.
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    Fixed this.
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    not sure if this deserves a separate post or something so sorry if i'm doin it wrong, but i found another error:

    credits page

    not sure what this is supposed to say, haha
  25. sandshrewz

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    @sirndpt: removed the GSC thing. The closest thing I can relate that to is this, which probably has nothing to do with ShinyAzelf. So, changed it back to the original >.>

    No idea where the GSC is supposed to go to though. Don't remember seeing it elsewhere.

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