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(Archive) Small Objective Changes Thread

Discussion in 'Archives' started by eric the espeon, Jul 12, 2009.

  1. Queen Kyurem

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    @above: Sorry, that was Nasty Plot. Not MixApe.
  2. Queen Kyurem

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    http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/vaporeon

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    as he can use Leech Seed which, in conjunction with Vaporeon's massive HP stat, will heal huge amounts of damage he may have taken.

    I think there should be a comma there.
  3. Shining Kestral

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    http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/giratina

    Boosting Tank section:

    "After a Calm Mind, it is practically impossible to OHKO Giratina with any attack; even a Choice Band-boosted Outrage from Adamant Zekrom) fails to do so due to its sheer base defensive stats."

    There is a lone parenthesis after Zekrom that should be removed.
  4. barry4ever

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    Fixed both.

    Okay Fixed.

    I think this is wrong actually but I'm rather unsure so I won't touch it.

    Fixed
  5. barry4ever

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    I was actually wrong there, I fixed it. Thanks Queen Kyurem !
  6. Professor Lamb

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    http://www.smogon.com/bw/articles/bw_gravity

    In the "Gravity Users" section, in the analysis for Forretress, the word "get" is repeated, probably as a result of a typo.

    There should be only one "get."

    Also, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Defensive Teams," there is a comma which is not followed by a space.

    There should be a space after the comma after "BW."

    In addition, in the same article, in the section "Team Building" and the subsection "Offensive / Balanced Teams," there are two words without a space between them.

    There should be a space between the words "you" and "control."
  7. Professor Lamb

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    Oh, and here's another one in the same article:

    There should be a space between "Celebi" and "that."
  8. Professor Lamb

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    Another one in the same article:

    There should be a space after the comma after "weakened."
  9. Fried Rhys

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    fixed

    fixed

    fixed
    fixed

    fixed
  10. Professor Lamb

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    Alright, well here are a few more in the same article.

    There should be a space after the comma.

    There should be a space between the words "the" and "Defense," "with" and "Dusclop's," and "impressive" and "defenses."

    There should be a space after the comma.
  11. Fried Rhys

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    fixed
    fixed

    fixed
  12. Bugbot

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    Since I think Iron Fist should be the main ability at least on the SD and CB sets, I'm awaiting a QC member reply to change the writeup a bit.

    fixed, thanks
  15. zdrup15

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    I was gonna edit the other post but Fate is a ninja so yeah, fixed xD
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    ok
  20. Layell

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    Fixed this.
  22. ssbbm

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    "Despite the sheer threat presence this set has, it can useless against most other things still be stopped by most dedicated physical walls - other Arceus, Lugia, Skarmory, and Giratina."

    some grammar errors in exteme killer set, last paragraph.

    http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/arceus-normal

    also the virizon analysis states "If one wants Virizion to act as a mixed sweeper, a Work Up set is a viable option" even though it's alrady listed as one of the options

    http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/virizion/ou
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    fixed, thanks
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    I fixed the Ninjask error, but I let the Donphan one be, as it probably needs to be updated anyways, idk.

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