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(Archive) Small Objective Changes Thread

Discussion in 'Archives' started by eric the espeon, Jul 12, 2009.

  1. Lady Salamence

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    OK, This is all mentions of Garchomp in all Pokemon in the OU tier. Link, set, paragraph, and line are given.
  2. Amarillo

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    Also, Weavile's first set(standard weasel) don't have moves
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    http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/weavile

    Also, on the Victini analysis:

    According to Bulbapedia (and current PO mechanics) If a ghost switches on Final Gambit, the move just fails and you don't faint.
  3. Lady Salamence

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    OK, This is all mentions of Garchomp in all Pokemon in the BL and UU tier. Link, set, paragraph, and line are given.

    screw XKs
  4. jc104

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    Fixed the chomp mentions pointed out in lady salamence's last two posts (including an overlap with amarillo's post), as well as that issue with final gambit.
  5. Amarillo

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    More nitpicks:

    Gengar
    Needs a space there

    Infernape

    Swords Dance set is missing its set comments
  6. NixHex

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    gengar fixed
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    OK, since 5th gen dex came out, I am abandoning my "read every 4th gen article on site" project, and starting fresh on the 5th gen analyses. These are what I have left over from 4th gen:

    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/magneton

    -- In the Steel Killer set, fourth paragraph, it says:

    The middle clause is worded weirdly. I think this sounds better:

    -- In the same set, fifth paragraph, it says:

    The word "to" should be added where I bolded it.

    -- In the Choice Specs set, directly before the damage calculations, it says:

    These sentences are redundant, and one of them should be removed.

    -- In the UU Other Options section, it says:

    "Thunderbolts" should have an apostrophe, since it is possessive.

    -- In the UU Checks and Counters section, third paragraph, it says:

    Quagsire also learns Recover, and is in no way forced to use Rest + Sleep Talk.

    -- In the same section, last sentence of the last paragraph, it says:

    There should be a comma where I bolded and colored it.

    -- In the OU Checks and Counters section, last paragraph, it says:

    All instances of "is" should be changed to "are" for subject-verb agreement purposes.

    http://www.smogon.com/dp/pokemon/magnezone

    -- In the SubSalac set, second paragraph, it says:

    Won't Swampert wall it with either Thunderbolt or Flash Cannon?

    -- In the Choice Specs set, second paragraph, it says:

    "allows" should be "allow".

    -- In the Uber Choice Scarf set, second paragraph, it says:

    There needs to be a space between the beginning of the parenthetical phrase and "Hidden Power Ice".

    -- In the Uber Other Options section, first sentence, it says:

    "have" should be added where I bolded it.

    That's all I have for now.
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    Made most of those changes Hawkstar.
  10. (makeup)

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    alex 67: pupitar has shed skin as its regular and dw ability, so it should be there twice.
    someone might have fixed it, but there wasn't a space there

    superjocke: I can't fix that with SCMS it's a database error, sorry.
  11. Omicron

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    Rotom-H's BW analysis has no moves.

    Rotom-H
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    Got the above.
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    On Drill Peck's related moves part Seed Bomb have a "with" after "equivalent". The phrase should be something like: Seed Bomb is a Grass-type equivalent.
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    Fixed!!
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    In the Cloyster analysis, there is a period missing at the end of the analysis of Cloyster's only set.

    There should be a period at the end of the sentence, after the bolded "it."
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    got the above
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    In the Cradily analysis, there is still a Dream World section despite the fact that it's released.
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    fixed the above
  20. Missingno. Master

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    Minor mistake on the Defiant page.

    It states that "Braviary and Primeape both have access to Close Combat, but Defiant isn't triggered by self-inflicted stat drops, so this makes the entire ability slightly worse.". This is only half true. Primeape has access to Close Combat, but Braviary does not. It does, however, get Superpower, which I assume is what was being thought of when the page was being written. My suggestion is; "Braviary has access to Superpower, and Primeape has access to Close Combat, but Defiant isn't triggered by self-inflicted stat drops, so this makes the entire ability slightly worse."
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    http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/archeops

    For the Acrobatics set, it states that with Naughty, Archeops achieves 416 Attack. However, the IV changes suggested for the set include an Attack IV of 30, not 31, so the Attack stat would in reality cap at 415, wouldn't it?
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    Edited the former two.
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    http://www.smogon.com/bw/pokemon/giratina

    Boosting Tank section:

    "After a Calm Mind, it is practically impossible to OHKO Giratina with any attack; even a Choice Band-boosted Outrage from Adamant Zekrom) fails to do so due to its sheer base defensive stats."

    There is a lone parenthesis after Zekrom that should be removed.
  25. barry4ever

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    Fixed both.

    Okay Fixed.

    I think this is wrong actually but I'm rather unsure so I won't touch it.

    Fixed

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