I haven't read the Kyurem analysis, so I do not know if it's outdated or not. However, if you're simply correcting awkward phrasing, then a revamp is unnecessary. Instead you can post all the errors on Small Objective Changes so that a Site Staff can make those edits.
				
			 
 
		





 
 
		
 
 
		
 
 
		




 
 
		



 
 
		 
 
		 
 
		 
 
		 
 
		 
 
		 
 
		 
 
		


 
 
		