Great, now I have to make a new entry to beat wyverii :(
Probably because of the thumb's placement. Make a fist, the thumb shouldn't be on the side. It should be under the fingers.
Still not happy with the fist. I'll probably end up bringing the elbow down and have the fist pointing upwards and sideways like the open hand.
I've been lurking a bit and I really like your sprite, but one thing that bothers me beyond articulation are its bottom left ( our bottom right ) hand; it looks very awkward, especially at the thumb area.
The pose idea seems good but that hands are disproportionate to where they actually are. If the blockiness of the hands and the sizes are fixed
Probably not the best but hey, it's something!
To be honest, I actually like Wyverii's and what Elevator Music has so far more than mine, but who knows? :D;
I'll do the back sprites later, if anyone likes these.
Also Dane, thumb curled under a fist + punch = broken thumb. ; ;
The pose idea seems good but that hands are disproportionate to where they actually are. If the blockiness of the hands and the sizes are fixed
it can be much better. Thats all the critique I have for not, but this sprite has a lot of potential with a bit of editing.
It's not so much that the hands are disproportionate and more that they have five fingers instead of four like the drawing. If you took off the extra fingers the hands would be perfect.
Probably not the best but hey, it's something!
To be honest, I actually like Wyverii's and what Elevator Music has so far more than mine, but who knows? :D;
I'll do the back sprites later, if anyone likes these.
Also Dane, thumb curled under a fist + punch = broken thumb. ; ;
Ah, now that's quite a bit easier to fix, thanks for pointing that out~It's not so much that the hands are disproportionate and more that they have five fingers instead of four like the drawing. If you took off the extra fingers the hands would be perfect.
Also, the colors you picked for the shiny looked a bit like vomit. Not trying to be rude, just suggesting you could pick some colors a bit less … video-game alien blood-colored.The pose idea seems good but that hands are disproportionate to where they actually are. If the blockiness of the hands and the sizes are fixed
it can be much better. Thats all the critique I have for not, but this sprite has a lot of potential with a bit of editing.