feels good to be running from the devil
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Perfect!Thanks to its great bulk and useful Grass / Steel- typing (the hyphen is not needed in this case), (add comma) Ferrothorn is one of the best entry hazard setters in ubersUbers (caps).
fairs --> faresIt fairs very well against defoggers such as Lati@sas and Latios (full form--no slang terms, please!), especially if it Ferrothorn runs Toxic ("it" can refer to Latio /as, which is kinda ambiguous). Also, Toxic is useful foragainst support Arceus formes and Giratina-Origin. Also, w (if the original meant opposing Arceus / Giratina, the change is fine; however, if it meant to support our Arceus / Giratina, the original is fine).
defoggers --> Defoggers
I'd actually argue that "it" isn't really ambiguous because "Latias and Latios" is plural, so it would be weird to refer to them (or one of them) as "it" right after. I can only see "it" being Ferrothorn, so I probably would have left that alone.
opponents refers to the battler; you're not wearing them down. should be "foes" or "opposing teams"!With the combination of Iron Barbs, Spikes, Leech Seed, (add comma) and Toxic, Ferrothorn can easily wear down opponents for a teammate to clean up later.
Excellent work on the parallelism there! The first sentence here is what we consider fluff, though--every Pokemon has flaws, so that sentence isn't really saying anything important or noteworthy. It is good to have a transition, though. What I would do is remove that first sentence entirely and add a "However," to the beginning of the next sentence, which accomplishes the same meaning without the fluff.It does have some flaws, however. Ferrothorn is very slow, rendered useless by Taunt, very slow, and has a nasty x4x weakness to Fire.