Minor Corrections: Diamond/Pearl Kingdra Analysis
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The following is from Paragraph 1 of the second set in the analysis, "Dragon Dance + Three Attacks".
Kingdra still has its two powerful physical STAB options to in Waterfall and Outrage, but also takes advantage of a special attack to hit physical walls harder.
This sentence has a weird "to" in there, so I offer the following revision:
Kingdra retains the two physical STAB options at its disposal, Waterfall and Outrage, but this set also carries a special attack to hit physical walls harder.
The following is from Paragraph 2 in the second set of the analysis, "Dragon Dance + Three Attacks".
Draco Meteor, on the other hand, gives you a move to take out opposing Dragon-type Pokemon without locking yourselves into Outrage.
Change "yourselves" to "yourself".
The following is from Paragraph 4 of the second set.
Unlike the Substitute Dragon Dance set, the extra power makes this harder to counter, but easier to cripple.
It might be best, in the interest of clarity, to change this sentence to:
The extra power behind this set makes Kingdra harder to counter, but the lack of Substitute leaves him more vulnerable to crippling status.
The following is from the same paragraph as above.
With Roar, Suicune, Swampert, and Vaporeon can phaze it out as long as they don’t switch into Outrage.
Perhaps one can revise it to make:
Suicune, Swampert, and Vaporeon can phaze it out with Roar as long as they don’t switch into Outrage.
The following is from Paragraph 5 of the second set.
Scizor and Tyraintar can trap and kill Choice Scarf Latias with Pursuit.
"Tyranitar" is misspelled here.
The following is from Paragraph 2 of the third set in the analysis, "Double Dance".
225 Speed beats bulky Gyarados and Adamant Tyranitar outright, but it also means you outrun base 100s after Dragon Dance; and neutral Choice Scarf base 100s after Rain Dance.
Perhaps these sentences should be rewritten so as to remove the need for the semicolon between "Dance" and "and".
225 Speed beats bulky Gyarados and Adamant Tyranitar outright. It also allows you to outrun base 100s after Dragon Dance, as well as neutral Choice Scarf base 100s after Rain Dance.
The following is from Paragraph 3 of the same set as above.
Ludicolo will outspeed and 2HKO offensive +2 Speed Empoleon with either energy Ball or Grass Knot.
The "e" in Energy Ball should be capitalized.
The following is from Paragraph 1 in the fourth set in the analysis, "Rain Dance (Mixed)".
This set is arguably Kingdra's most destructive set, capable of smashing through even the games most defensive Pokemon.
The bolded word should be "game's".
The following is from the same paragraph in the same set.
Outside of Rain Dance teams itplays much like the Dragon Dancer;
Add a space between "it" and "plays". Also, a comma after "teams" should be there.
The following is from Paragraph 1 in the fifth set in the analysis, "Rain Dance (Special)".
Hydro Pump can be used for some extra power, it does provide an OHKO on Swampert and Metagross, but Surf's reliability makes it the better choice.
I'm pretty sure the "an" in "an OHKO" should be changed to "a", but I'm not sure. Also, parentheses would make the sentence flow better, as in this revision:
Hydro Pump can be used for some extra power (it does provide a OHKO on Swampert and Metagross), but Surf's reliability makes it the better choice.
The following is from Paragraph 4 of the same set.
Bulky Water-types with exception of Swampert can counter this set well
The word "the" should be added between "with" and "exception".
The following is from Paragraph 1 in the Team Options (OU) section of the analysis.
Bronzong, Bronzong, Jirachi, Magnezone, and Scizor are the best options for Rain Dance support Pokemon
Bronzong is listed twice. I'm not sure if that's a case of immediately forgetting what you just typed, or if there was another Pokemon that was supposed to be listed in place of one of the Bronzongs, but it should change nonetheless.
Magnezone can easily set them up on a choice locked Scizor’s Bullet Punch and other moves,
"Choice" should be capitalized.
The following is from the first sentence in the Team Options (Uber) section.
as it allows it to have an easier time sweeping due to the vital KOs it helps Kingdra net.
It might be better to rewrite those part as:
as it allows it to have an easier time sweeping due to the vital KOs Kingdra gains with Stealth Rock in play.
The following is the last sentence in Paragraph 2 from the Team Options (Uber) section.
Be warned though, Groudon’s sun will making Kingdra much less threatening than usual.
Change "making" to "make".