I dont know about you, but when I read the thread I saw a lot of people who liked your writing a lot too. And Im pretty sure thats just how it is for any type of art form! You get people who dont like it, and then you get people who do. I think that, based off of that, you dont need to change anything. Just focus on writing what you feel like writing in whatever way you feel like writing it, while revising it in whatever way you feel like revising it, just as long as it makes you feel good.