The color on the BW2 girl drawing makes it look a 100X better.
Also the AZ locke sketch is not only awesome, but its got me pretty excited for the next chapter (no rush though, I am in no way putting pressure on you!!)
Wait a minute... chapter 6 is out? OH SHI-
Reading this now.
EDIT: Done. Goddamn, it's like a comic / manga, with awesome fight scenes and flashbacks included. I can't stress, but you really nailed it when you gave Red a persona. Your Red is probably one of my favorite nuzlocke characters of all time because of that, and i'm really eager to see his interactions with Blue & Green.
Poor Pikachu :o